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Would you give up your wedding ring for anything in this world? See how the token of love from your beloved can lead to tragedy.. View table of contents...
Submitted: Jun 19, 2008 Reads: 49 Comments: 4 Likes: 3
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OMG! such a powerful short story, so so so so so so so powerful. its short but it touches the heart.
What do you personally think she should have done?
given up the ring or kept it?
Happy days from a fellow nigerian.
Wandy.
Posted: Jun 21, 2008
hi! ezeh. a marvellous love story with a sad ending. i wish she lived. loved it. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jun 28, 2008
So sad...I wish she would have lived...so sad...
I think she should have given the ring to that rogue...at least she would have lived with her boyfriend, her true loce forever instead of living him alone...i guess she would not have thought that she would be shot...
so sad...
Posted: Jul 25, 2008
aww, **sniffs a gazillion times**
that was so vey sweet and well written.
Be ready for another comment from me for i will be coming back to read this again. . .
Posted: Aug 24, 2008
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