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Would you give up your wedding ring for anything in this world? See how the token of love from your beloved can lead to tragedy.. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 19, 2008    Reads: 49    Comments: 4    Likes: 3   


The Ring
A girl was sitting on a chair at the gas station she worked at. She looked up and saw her boyfriend walk in. As he was looking at snacks, a man walked in and pointed a gun at her. He had been admiring her ring her boyfriend had given to her as a token of his love. When he asked her to give it to him, she said no. Her boyfriend looked up just in time to see her shot. He ran over to the killer and beat him over the head with a hammer that was for sale. Then he ran and called 911. When the ambulance came, he was sobbing uncontrollably near his girlfriend.

The doctor came over and felt for her pulse. Then he stood up and said she was still alive. Later at the hospital, as he was sitting beside her, he asked"Why didn't you just give him the ring?" and then she softly spoke"Because when you gave it to me, you said it was part of your love for me and I knew if I gave him the ring, I would lose that love." The next day, she was pronounced dead.


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Comments:

OMG! such a powerful short story, so so so so so so so powerful. its short but it touches the heart.
What do you personally think she should have done?
given up the ring or kept it?
Happy days from a fellow nigerian.
Wandy.

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

hi! ezeh. a marvellous love story with a sad ending. i wish she lived. loved it. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

So sad...I wish she would have lived...so sad...

I think she should have given the ring to that rogue...at least she would have lived with her boyfriend, her true loce forever instead of living him alone...i guess she would not have thought that she would be shot...

so sad...

Posted: Jul 25, 2008

aww, **sniffs a gazillion times**
that was so vey sweet and well written.
Be ready for another comment from me for i will be coming back to read this again. . .

Posted: Aug 24, 2008



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