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the crazy wicked man

Short Story By: mohammed al damen
Thrillers


Tags: death, crazy, kill, madness

a crazy man that kills his own step famiy View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 22, 2008    Reads: 71    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


True

I am sad , very sad I must be and I still am but why do you say am crazy? I am not crazy ! The sickness has sharpened my senses, not hurt them . Listen to my story ! See how sadly I was, I am not crazy I don’t know how the idea entered my brain in the first place . But once I had a family, that once loved me , and I loved them they never harmed me or did some thing wrong to me but when I reached fifteen those Idea had entered my brain but my heart told me you must not, my brain told me you must , you will win every thing the money the big house, the family hates you in the first place they think that you are there servant you do every thing in this house, the children hates you because there parents adopted you in the first place , and they always put the blame on you, my heart told me that they love like there own son, and the children are too little to think that your adopted and they are only two a boy and a girl they cant know that, so please listen your heart and know that am telling the truth, but first of all am Quim herosen that’s my name , I went to my house thinking should I or shouldn’t can I or cant , I felt my head will explode but I controlled my self like I always do , I entered the house I went to give my step father a glass of wine that he ordered , I happened to hear him talking on the phone telling somebody that he will kick me out of the house, then I came I were angry and mad, I bring him the wine and decided to kill him and I will enjoy that moment for ever I was watching him sleep ever night just at twelve, so the day finally came I took a knife and started to kill I killed every one peacefully except the father I smash the knife in his heart he suffered for an hour , I will never forget this day the cops are after me I will continue later.


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Comments:

Man, this reminds me so much of Tell Tale Hearts from Poe! This is great, I can't wait for the next chapter, hope you make it soon!

Posted: Jul 30, 2008

Author Comment:

well thanx

well thanx and yes i tried to makd it like tell tale heart

Posted: Jul 30, 2008



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