This is a short story I am working on at the moment, and I would appreciate any comments as I'm not quite sure if it's good enough. I'm not a native English speaker, so I'd also be happy about grammar corrections, in case you find any mistakes in it. Still I hope you'll find it an enjoyable read....
They say the blackest of night become the brightest of days. The Dark Bridge is a powerfully story of a manâ€™s journey across a bridge which as he faces the devil to get to Heaven. Based off the short story of â€œAngel of the Dusk"
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A navy commander's murder is investigated, and in the process, the team runs into E.J. Barrett, The investigation into the murder of a Navy Commander leads the NCIS team to E.J. Barrett's whereabouts.
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