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Twoo Brothers

Short story By: sanju
Thrillers


love between the two brothersand sacrifice lastly.


Submitted:Sep 20, 2012    Reads: 41    Comments: 0    Likes: 1   


Today,rarely one may see the fishermen fishing in the lakes,rivers, or in any freshwater sources,like ancient form.though there appear in the seas,oeans,sometimes.specially in the developing cities,if there is any lake,noone take up this occupation their primary source,though they belong to the same heredity(the fisherman).

Amit and Sumit are two brothers by born blood relations.what discussed above,contrary to that,they are doing the same in a city.Amit-elder and another is younger and qualified from an university but elder is illiterate fully.

Every morning Amit,dips in the huge lake(surrounded three sides to their house in which he fishes)and comes out a distance away.In short he,every morning,baths by swimming,sinking in the lake.It’s the habit.and the boat tied beside to their house danglind on the water,along with it Amit starts his day to fish riding the boat further and further,deeper in the lake-till it appears just like a sparrow flying on the lake.Sumit at the sametime studying in the institution.

 

There is abond between them-strong-that may not be unbounded easily.

The love they have between them is talkative.Words are insufficient to describe.Even they themselves can’t.each other knows very well each other.They are ready,even in this materialistic earth,to sacrifice their lives for each other,if necessary.So perhaps they tell often,that one of themwouid die first before to see other’s death by casual eye.”I’ll first,if time come.”says Amit.”No,I must be the one”replies Sumit.

 

This,their relative insistence made them unbroken hearted still.Full of love in their heart framing.Magically,their professions are different from each other.But still,Sumit who is in higher position,never underestimated Amit of his occupation like one do in the modern movies.

 

Sometimes,Sumit too,if gets leisure from the institution,or on vacation or on holydays,helps Amit to fishing in the lake.In the huge lake.Going far away with him in the boat-forth on which words written-S-U-M-I-T.

It is a small boat running in the huge lake by the help of the oars.Like in traditional manner.Made by wood.With the same colour-complexion-black what it’s owner possess.So perhaps he can not be seen when it reaches to the latter part from the middle.

 

Amit’s everyday’s morning’s swimming by soaring here from shore to raise there a distance away in the deep lake is often praised praised by Sumit,seeing that amazing flight like a water bird in the air,active fish in the lake.He,then looks like a soarfish,at that time.That he dips with head entering first in to the lake and seeping and seeping deep in lake,comes out a long.Very funny!Even the morning’s weather supplements it.the rising red sun,the chirping birds,the cool air that brings the sweet odour.the scented breeze.one may easily dip in to one’s imagination to feel the fantasy worlds’s fantastic evenings what we see in the animated fantasy movies.’Surrrrrrr……..!’ another dip of Amit,today.Sumit,too, tries to do the same but obstructed by Amit since he is unaware of swimming.A sensitive skin young boy.”that’s better,atleast he is not inherited our ancestral.”thougt Amit

 

The elder is of 35 and younger is of 25.Exactly ten years different between them.when Sumit was born,Amit almost had been completing his fifth class.As soon as Sumit born,he stopped his educations as he enlightened,then,in his tenth yearthat he has to make his brother rather different from him,his occupation and his family,though father was not ready.So he, in oppose to his father,who did not allow him to do,he left the school and took up the tradsition of fishing,since father was not willing to fulfill his task.Who was irresponsible father towards family.Now,no father-no mother alive.

 

So on the basis of that fifth class he,now,can count and sell the fishes in the city market and earn rupees and deposit for his brother’s better future.

 

In fact,unlike many people,his brother somit,too,overloves Amit.Even he is ready to leave his educations and help his poor brother and to learn morning’s soar swimming.Dipping,sinking,entering the head first from the top of the huge rounded rock-lied at the corner of the lake.

 

Sumit’s name front on the boat is highlighted’deliberately.And every morning,Amit kisses the name first,then starts his work in the lake.Because,Sumit has been studying far away staying in an institution’s hostel.

“Yes,it’s a bet” words ringing often in Amit’s ears.That Sumit uttered he loves more than Amit.he would repay to what Amit’s doing for him.And he must die though ten years younger than Amit,first,to not to see his brother with no heart-beating.Recently,Sumit arrived ‘HOME’.And there was chatting,laughing,joking,and everything was done warmly.People praised that the rich laughter had been returned.aAnd made the day merry.And that night both went to bed after consulting docter for Sumit’s dull health(as well as Amit too was consulted by doctor when doctor himself told Sumit to check Amit when amidst he coughed).

 

Early morning,when Amit woke up,Sumit was not on the bed.Amit went outside the home to see Sumit whether he was swimming in the lake.But he was not there.So he cut it out,thinking perhaps,he,went,to an emergency work forgotten since he was to return back next morning to the institution.

 

And as usual,at his time,Amit stood on the huge rock unshirted to soar in to the huge lake to bath, entering the head first fishlike,wolf like in the north pole to fish the hidden fish beneath the thickly covered ice.Then he did dip…dub..dub..dub..bbbbbbb..!in the deep water.Went down..down..down…full in depth till to touch the floor bed pebbled and as usual picked up the soil from there to worship the rising sun traditional Indian manner.but this time grasping tightly,unaware,did not know and did come out the lake that straight right to his face ,when he opened eyes face to face a meter away saw the boat forth on which letters written, S-U-M-I-T and he kissed as usual the name and saw his fist what he gripped tightly – the man exactly in his arms,whose name he just saw on the boat.With white shirt glittering by the early rising red sun,and birds chirping,sweet breeze blowing and weather is cool!

 

“Sumit!” he groaned,to see in his hand the lifeless body of the Sumit.

 

The day before when they went to consult for sumit’s dull health,amidst,then,Amit coughed and sneezed in the consulting room that that the doctor requested Amit to wait outside with recognizing deeply,and since he was to talk with Sumit personally.So he went.

Doctor said,”Nothing special to you.Buuuuutt you are brother rrrr…may not live long.Perhaps two months.Since he is attacked by the recent attacking ‘INFLUENZA’ which is widespread among.With water it spresds rapidly.”

 

Perhaps,not to see his brother’s unbreathing body.he soared in to the huge lake.Like his brother but not knowing how to swim.And he proved right that he would go first.            

 

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