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Submitted: Jan 18, 2008    Reads: 24    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


A group of tourists went to India for a work related project. They made all the possible arrangements ahead of time. They rented a private house they found on the Internet. It mentioned all the information the tourists were looking for - neighborhood, rooms, room space, malls, restaurants, business district, etc.

On their arrival at the house they realized they did not make any arrangement for cleaning the house while they are out on their business. As they still discussing, a man walked toward them and requested financial assistance. He seemed very poor and needy. One of the tourists thought he would be a perfect servant for their temporary need. They asked him if he would take the job if they give him place to sleep with pay. He asked about the job and agreed but on a condition. The tourists asked him about the condition. He said his wife will join him also and help him with his work as well without pay. They agreed and both servants occupied the quarter outside the house.

One day, the tourists came home very late night and were very hungry. They realized its too late and all the restaurants are done for the day or about to close. At home, they felt the servants might have already gone to bed also so nobody bothered waking them up. They went into the kitchen and soon noticed everything is unorganized and that they will eventually need servant's assistance.

One of them decided to go wake the servants and see if one of them can assist in finding things in the kitchen. He knocked at the servant quarter and waited for response. He knocked a little harder but nobody replied back. He kept knocking but did not get a reply. He got worried and decided to break the door to find out everything is well. Eventually, he successfully broke the door and then screamed his heart off. What he witnessed in seconds was unexplainable. He saw two snakes looking at each other. He shut the door and ran back inside the house..

He told the whole scenario to his colleagues but nobody believed him. being very tired and exhausted, the tourist decide to go to bed hungry. The next morning before they leave for the day, they decided to check on the servants. what they all found was shocking to the point where they left the house and never came back

what did they find?


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