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little story ive written, not finished yet


Submitted:Mar 1, 2013    Reads: 33    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


CHASE

The door opened chase was sitting in front of the window talking to storm, What you two up to their mum said walking over and putting her arm over chase. Storm got up and nessled into his mums free arm. Chase who was around 5'2 petite with short dark hair and 8 years old
storm who like chase was 5'2 petite also with dark hair but he was a little older than chase, a little older by a huge minute, Chase was a girl but also very much a tomboy, Storm was all boy. Chase broke free from her mothers arm around her and headed out the door, Storm followed and headed down the stairs, Shadow was coming in the door panting tail wagging when he saw chase and storm, hey boy storm said patting the dogs head and with his tail still wagging he barked and turned and bolted out the door, thats the last time chase seen shadow alive .

The cars wheels screeched then there was a huge thud and a cry of a animal in pain, chase and storm and their mother ran out the door
shadow was lying in the road under the front wheel of the dented car
blood slipping from the side of his mouth, Chase looked at storm,storm looked at his mother, the mother looked at shadow then all she could hear was Shadow please no shadow please please dont be dead, chase screemed with tears pouring down her young cheeks. Storm not far behind tears in his eyes stood next to his twin sister and gently put his hand in hers and said? Stupid dog shadow why did you bolt out the door why? Chase let go of his hand and instead put her arm around his waist and pulled him a little closer and hugged held him tight.

The driver of the car was a middle aged man around 6ft tall quite slim with greyish hair and a well respected man and a very loving father and husband. He stepped out the car and walkerd around the front at 1st he thought he was seeing things he had to look again. chase and storm and cat his wife were all kneeling down all holding hands saying,Preying
Shadow will go to dog heaven
god will keep him
safe
god will punish
the bad
god will punish

before the 3 of them could finish, eddie bend down with them looked at shadow and said oh no shadow and with that chase strom and cat opened thier eyes and looked at eddie .

shadow will go to dog heaven
god will keep him
safe
god will punish
the bad
god will punish
our dad

that was the rest of the preyer chase and storm finishe of once they found out it was their father who knocked over and killed shadow.





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