Welcome Visitor: Login to the siteJoin the site

Poem of my marital relationship issues, 5 weeks on from my last poem

Submitted:Oct 5, 2013    Reads: 27    Comments: 1    Likes: 2   

5 weeks ago, hell surrendered to heaven

happiness, beauty, love, joy, elation, bliss, ecstasy

we bathed and basked in it's glory

we climbed the mountains and felt the highest highs

and oh the skies, we touched the skies

close your eyes, can you feel it? can you feel it's splendour?

but those skies

the skies?


the sky has fallen

so Sudden. Quick. Sharp. Cuthroat

like Fagin, he tricked me, I fell for it

5, 4, 3, 2, 1....back to square 1

sloppy seconds, again

unappreciated, again

not cared for, again


the battle has begun and this time I'm not losing


| Email this story Email this Poetry | Add to reading list


About | News | Contact | Your Account | TheNextBigWriter | Self Publishing | Advertise

© 2013 TheNextBigWriter, LLC. All Rights Reserved. Terms under which this service is provided to you. Privacy Policy.