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Don't Give In!

Poetry By: Xylie
True confessions

This piece is about someone who is struggling through depression. Her friends and family are their at the back of that persons mind telling them giving in is not an options.

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Submitted:Jan 9, 2014    Reads: 15    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   

One moment the light shines on,

The next a sudden darkness falls.

Blind and mute from the rest of the world.

Where am I?

A voice calls out to me,

"Don't give in, you life depends on it."


My life?


my mind is muddled from the dark.

But, I'm searching.

I'm not sure what.

The voice calls out to me once more.

"The light, The light!

Look for the light.

For we all know that for dark to exsist

Light must be present

don't succomb to the darkness

You have so much to live for

Dont give in!"


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