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Poison Planet

Poem By: bluebear86
War and Military


No. I'm not very patriotic. At least not in the sense that I hate the way the government is run today. I hate the lies. I hate soldiers. I hate murder....Well, you'll get it by my poem. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 26, 2008    Reads: 60    Comments: 5    Likes: 0   


Poison
Dead children on the roadside
Poison
Their faces scarred and maimed
Poison
The gas is filling my lungs
Poison
The truth is that were fucked

Poison
You say you are a hero
Poison
I say you are monster
Poison
Don’t say you patriotic
Poison
Cause I know that you’re not

Poison
Their boarding up the buildings
Poison
Shots ring from every spot
Poison
I’m crying in the corner
Poison
I wish they would just stop

Poison
The tanks are crushing my bones
Poison
They’re pulling out my teeth
Poison
I think I’m gonna die now
Poison
And they think we don’t care

Poison
Just burning down the houses
Poison
Just blowing up the land
Poison
Charred bodies in the basement
Poison
Is this you serve, the man?

Poison
They’re spewing lies like vomit
Poison
Feeding from their troughs
Poison
Please help before they kill you
Poison
Please help or they won’t stop
They won’t stop

They will kill
They will cheat
They will steal
Their cruel and coiling faces will curl into a grin
And they’ll laugh
Because you’re blind
Take the wool off of your eyes

L.O.O.K!


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Comments:

Very thought provoking! The sad thing is that you could be talking about either side. No-one can take the moral high ground.

Posted: Aug 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Exactly. I just happen to be living in one of the countries causing a lot of problems for others. It makes me feel sorry for being a citizen.

While that is true, at least in your Country people get to vote out goverments which they feel are not doing as they wish.

The trouble seems to be in convincing governments that their business is their own country and no-one elses, no matter how financially rewarding it might be to disregard this truth.

Try not to hate the soldiers, for the most part they are people who don't have a lot of marketable skills, seeking employment.

Here in Australia, people generally are able to support the Troops while disagreeing with the War.

Of course Australian troops tend to fulfil their role in a different way and their Mission has a lot to do with winning hearts and minds and making good destruction, so it is easier for our people to be accepting and supportive of them.

Perhaps you can find something positive that you can contribute to disadvantaged people, which will make you feel as though you have done something (no matter how small) to try and redress the balance.

Kind regards,
Susan

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Well, to clarify...I don't hate all soldiers. But I've seen enough documentaries and videos to know that there are some very very evil/hypocritical ones. But I will never support what they do. I support that they think it's a noble cause. But I know that's a lie too. I just want all of our women and men back home were they belong. doing something really worthwhile with their life that is honest.

Frankly. I have no idea why Australian troops are over in Iraq. Except I guess for oil, which is a stupid reason. I hope your PM Kevin Rudd isn't like our monkey Bush. That would be really sad. I can't really support any side. Murder is murder no matter who is committing it. Why would any side think their cause is any more noble?

Thank you for the comment. I feel a little abashed that I had not much of an idea that Australia was also involved. I think everyone should watch more news. I feel utterly sick that I hate something I know hardly about. Except for the wonderful documentaries of Alex Jones and Michael Moore (sort of)...
They've kept me somewhat educated.

Nonna2
(not registered user)

I thought that you might be interested to know that our previous Prime Minister John HOWARD took us into Iraq, against popular opinion, because he regarded President BUSH as his very good friend! Apparently Tony BLAIR the U.K. Prime Minister felt the same way.

We have quite good reserves of our own oil, East Timor and Indonesia, our near neighbours, also have oil, and we are constantly researching alternatives.

I don't mean to be offensive when I say that it constantly surprises me that Americans, a people who value education so highly, know so little of countries and cultures other than their own.

Our ABC (Australian Broadcasting Commission)broadcasts are downloaded by a very large number of people in America, so perhaps some people are trying to broaden their horizons.

I certainly don't support murder and torture and was astounded when America changed it's policy on the latter. However, while individuals are ultimately responsible for their actions, I believe that when either is committed by troops it is only because they feel that it is somehow sanctioned or ignored by their system.

While I sense despair in your comments, I repeat what I said earlier, take heart from the fact that you live in a country where you are able to vote out governments that you don't agree with.

Kindest regards,
Susan

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for the response.
As far as Americans regarding education as a high value. I don't think we do. Only in the East. Which is a large population of people. I don't, nor have I ever seen a lot of emphasis in education anywhere else. Only in the sense that, every child K-12, gets the minimum standard of education for their school district or state.

I hope your news is better than our because World News only comes on at 5 in the morning and 1 in the morning. Other than that, unless you have cable. Which I still think a good portion of us don't have. That no one is getting the information that is the most important. Especially in school. and especially with younger children.

This may sound amazingly old fashioned but I was speaking of Radio National. Our ABC has excellent programs on Radio National, all day every day with World News on the hour every hour. Take a look at http://www.abc.net.au/radio/ then click on the Radio National option.

Given your age you will probably prefer the TripleJ option, which by the way, had an interesting programme of American Troops music (really exceptional stuff)recorded by an Australian. You might be surprised by the comment and emotions expressed by your fellow countrymen and women in Iraq. By now it is probably in the Archives, if you care to look.

I enjoy RN so much I even wear earphones at the Gym so that I won't miss anything!

Kind regards,
Susan

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

wow!!! your right they will kill,cheat and steal all for personal gain. theres no one to trust anymore. and they wont stop untill theres nothing left. and the pic... made me tear up

Posted: Sep 12, 2008



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