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An Eastern Field

Poem By: matmoo
War and Military


Tags: war, poem, matmoo, poetry, this, is, what, you, are, tv

A poem about a soldier, who returns home to a war. It's quite sad I think, and was inspired by the worries of losing a friend. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jan 24, 2008    Reads: 56    Comments: 4    Likes: 1   


An Eastern Field

 

There's a man I know,
broken to tears,
been through it all,
in the cool, calm,
wicked wars,
in the cool, calm voice
of my T and V;
my voice of reason.

He's knee deep,
mud bathed and
screaming;
This is what he does
This is what he does

And then back home,
in the wars again,
fighting our friendly fire,
too ashamed and

This is what we do
This is what we do

too fearful, now flopped,
leaning over that
gawping viaduct.

This is what I do
This is what I do

His ship docked,
his heart pacing,
panic racing,
and in the fog:

This is what he does
This is what he does

In the rain and
waiting, looking
sideways for a
love, screaming:

This is what she does
This is what she does

He's a man I know,
speaking in tears,
been through it all,
but the cool, calm
wicked war,
in it's cool, calm voice
of my T and V;
my voice of reason,
Says:

This is what you are.
This is what you are.


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Comments:

I like the T and V. YOU ARE WHAT YOU EAT.

Posted: Jan 24, 2008

Author Comment:

i'm glad you liked the T and V! So do I. Indeed, I am what I eat; but having said that, i'm not a cannibal.

matmoo

Very emotional and moving piece! Wow, is all I can say. Absolutely beautiful. I liked how you would repeat the stanza.
MA

Posted: Jan 24, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm really glad you liked this, you're comment means a lot to me!

matmoo :)

Good peice of work Matmoo
Regards Brian.

Posted: Jan 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks again for reading and commenting!

matmoo

I just saw the movie "Atonement" last night and so this poem has an added significance to me this morning. I love the repetition, I felt is was well done and completely appropriate. You have taken a subtle and peacefully conveyed stance on war and fighting with such poetic elements and beautiful imagery. Again, very well written.

Posted: Feb 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much! I still want to see Atonement, it looks like a really well made film. I thiink this is mroe about hte sadness of war, rather than the hurt or victory.

matmoo :)



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