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Submitted: Nov 1, 2006 Reads: 122 Comments: 4 Likes: 0
Brocken by war, to settle the fucking score.
There coming through the door, so hit the fucking floor.
Killing people you've never met, violence in return, thats the only thing you'll get.
I just dont agree, thats not the right way to be.
You go get in the crossfire, open a door and trip a bomb wire.
Teaching them to kill for peace, a complete hatred you've released.
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This is a very thoughtful and painful piece of work that is lets me in suddenly and then is done in just so many words. I felt its impact instantly. I'm glad it is short and the pain doesn't linger. Great work!
Posted: Dec 28, 2006
I enjoyed the blunt brutality of the statements, very concise at getting your point across. Rather contraversial, which is a good thing, sometimes...
Posted: Jul 23, 2007
It's a very powerful point, indeed. Gets the message across instantly. Very well written.
Posted: Jul 4, 2008
I hate chaos too, it's just wrong and you told it like it is in this poem.
Posted: Aug 6, 2008
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