As effortless as releasing the ‘butterfly from a jewellery box’...right?
WRONG...

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I am grateful to so many friends of mine in Booksie who helped me write this...how?? Well I entered their challenge for getting rid of this writer’s block and also to have fun...all of them are gems...
1.Theme ‘war’ and the title “Last man fighting”. – By Pocorrox...A theme I would have never dared and I am so happy she gave me this...
2.Subject: butterfly
setting: jewelry box My words: hinder, escape, frail, dare, cadence – (the frenetic cadence of modern life. the flow or rhythm of events, esp. the pattern in which something is experienced: Synonyms 3. tempo, pulse, rhythm, meter), reminisce – (to recall past experiences, events, etc, Synonyms remember, recollect, muse) By My beautiful ALICE...
I have used “Butterfly in Jewellery Box” twice...In the first line, it signifies aspirations of people living in Palaces who use others for fulfilling their never ending ambitions. In the second usage, it signifies the vivacious peace which should be released from the clutches of desires (Jewellery box inside the palaces)...I hope it makes sense...If not ask me...
3.My 5 words from Dark Skylight were - Eyes, Watch, Dove, Trust, Sky and Always.
4.Last but not the least – the LOVELY phrase “"I drove for miles and miles and wound up at YOUR door” From Jessy ( I luv2write)
5. Walk a mile in someone's shoes- By Scatterbrain ( TED)
All suggestions and criticisms are welcome with open arms and soul...please feel free to improvise...
Submitted:Jul 21, 2008 Reads: 381 Comments: 49 Likes: 19
As effortless as releasing the ‘butterfly from a jewellery box’...right?
WRONG...

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