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Submitted: Aug 19, 2008 Reads: 43 Comments: 5 Likes: 0
Guns fireing and missle flying.
Children crying as their parents are dieing
Where so many lay dead.
they load their guns and wait for the word,
that will end so many.
Fire!
The men pull their triggers
Knowing it will be the last sound they hear.
They keep fireing over the wall
Even though their city has fallen.
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kinda sad but really good
KEEP POSTING ")
Posted: Aug 19, 2008
sad but is good
keep posting
Posted: Aug 20, 2008
i like it!!!
Posted: Aug 20, 2008
you know u wanna write more
*uses to the force to alter your thoughts*
LoL really great stuff bud =]
Posted: Aug 29, 2008
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AWHHH!
Ohmeegosh, Sam. Sad. Cute. All of it!
Posted: Oct 30, 2008
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