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The Assassin's Brother

Poem By: Sinith
War and Military


Warning - This is a very very violent poem.
Disclaimer - I do not enforce, encourage, or approve of any type of killing.

(lol, I say this and yet you'll hear me laughing maniacally when I play first person shooter games) View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 6, 2008    Reads: 41    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


Walking amongst the fog
Rolling across the ground with this intent
Nature is rejecting the very existence
The forest bows before this anger.

Are you ready, brother
Can you see the anger
Can you taste your death
Can you feel this loathing?

Running forward
soul shaking with excitment
senses high, smelling your rotting stentch
I shall make it fit your corpse!

Your kingdoms shall fall
Your heaven shall crumble
Your love shall die
I shall make your life a living hell!

Hahaha
You cannot stop me
You should've listened
You should've tried

As the blades clash
as the lightening dances
as the kings fall
as the souls around us die.

Veins pumping, adrenaline running rampant
Bullets racket my hearing
I lick my lips with joy
Found you!

Zero in the scope, check the wind
Weigh the distance, get comfortable
wait for the opening, pull the trigger
watch the body fall.

Smile at him, you have . . .
a sharp pain, what?
look down, blood? Look up, where did his body go?
Fall forward, watch the soul fall, activate the bomb
at all costs, he must die


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Comments:

hi! sinith. ya, the poem is filled with violence and the voice is angry but then they r human emotions. they come out too strong. this is a different read, very enjoyable. lol. ;-)

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Author Comment:

ok I'm not sure if you said it was too strong or if it was enjoyable because it was too strong lol

This is good because it portrays the truth; no euphenisms or trying to mask emotions.

It's brutally honest and strangely satisfying.

I like it a lot :)

Posted: Oct 2, 2008



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