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Never Gonna Make it

Novel By: PuppyDogz
Young Adult


this is about a girl living a double life.Singer by Day Stripper by Night.Follow her as she tries to fight her way out of her twisted life-style View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 15, 2008    Reads: 46    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


I stood on stage with lights shining and sparkling on me.I turned up my Amp and look down in the crowds.Well can i tell alittle about myself.I look like a younger Rihanna,I have long lushes black hair.IO'm 5'6 or 7 i don't care all.I stroked my Guitar strings slowly as i got a steady beat out og it .I gulped and started to sing ''know what i can be whatever age ...I can do whatever i want...But you people never let me do anything..No work...ohh..Just school...Boo''I smiled as i saw the happy looks on everyones faces.Just to make my perfomance better i did a guitar solo.when i finished the judges walked around the table and stood infront of me as Shawn the other finalist stood by me .To bad He's 20 and I'm 17 i thought he was extremly hot like Chris tucker hott (From rush hour).'And the winner of our first ever Singer showdown contest is.........Jayla Jones''.The judges said together.I jumped up and down in the air as i smiled screaming out of Joy and surprisedness(see i can make up words too).I gave Shawn a quick hug just before they gave me 190,000 dollars in CASH!!! Then i felt something cold on my back ''Did ..you unhook----''I was cut off by the screaming of the crowd.I walked back stage stuffing the bundles of cash in my purse,skirt,hoody pocket,and panties and still there wasn't enough room.I turned to Shawn angerly wanting to ask him the question from on stage

''Did you unhook my bra''I whispered but screamed

''Don't flatter your self sweety''

He took a few a steps back.I gave him the finger and walked away angerly.I put my money at my house then ran to my night job .

''Joe?''I yelled as i got closer to an open car door

''yes..oh it's you''He hadn't moved his head from the car

''I quit''I turned but he grabbed my hair before i could walk away and threw me on the cold concrete i felt like there was shards of glass going in my legs and arms.He kept a strong grip on my hair as he dragged me inside the club or as i call it HELL.

Five minutes Later

I sit in my fur armed chair waiting for the curtains to open i was cold consideing the fact i was dressed as a police women with booty shorts a open button up shirt revealing my firy red bra from victoria's Secret .As my song came on (chris's browns forever) I walked on stage .....Click .....click was all i heard over the cheers and pleased looks that said yes....Boing...oning .I made sure i hade my wig and contacts so no one can say that the singer showdown girl is stripping .I walk to the pole and swing wildly around it as they cheer .I grind on them....Dance by them...They are what's letting me keep my house well Dad's house but he's off in gorgia with my grandparents they are in am early state of Altimerz (Can't spell).After I'm down to my Red bra and panties i wait for the curtains to close .When it does i grab my clothes and run back into the dressing room.I grabbed a pair of skinny jeans and a pink tubetop with a with tanktop under it thowing on my Pink and white hightops i run home knowing the club was empty i ran off with out locking it up ''HAHAHA''i laughted as i ran threw the night To my house....


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Comments:

This story has potential. I definitely like the plot line, however I can't read it. You need to change your spelling and your grammar. When someone speaks, you start a new paragraph.

Maybe once you clean it up, I'll check back ;)

Posted: Aug 17, 2008

i agree wivblackflame28..
realli liike where dis is goin..
bu jus curious.. r u gonna turn dis into a novel?..
if yooh update plz lemme kno!..
=D
x daisy x

Posted: Sep 10, 2008



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