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New Improved!

Book By: xxSecretxx
Young adult


Tags: Game


About a new game that has just been invented which makes something happen.


Submitted:Apr 21, 2008    Reads: 74    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


New Improved!
Chapter 1
A girl called Aderyn, loved to play a game called "Hurry!" It is a game which you have to rob or steal something then run for your life. It's basically impossible to win.
Aderyn played on it every day and whenever she could. She would play on it all night if she could, but she never won.
Her mum said that it was a waist of her time, but Aderyn didn't listen. She just kept playing on it, no matter what.
"It's a waste of your time!" her mum said.
"It's not, it's good fun," argued Aderyn. "At least I'm not in your way, like Matty." Pointing.
"Yes, that is true, but you're wasting the electricity. And that costs money. Matty doesn't really use any electricity!"
Aderyn stormed up stairs and into her bedroom. For once she didn't go on her laptop. Instead she put on the television. After about half an hour, Aderyn changed the channel. She changed it to the news. Aderyn doesn't watch the news, but something flashed up on the screen. It said "NEW IMPROVED! There's a new version of Hurry! You can only get it in our store! Our store is I.M.H! Quick! Everyone going for them!
New Improved!
Chapter 1
A girl called Aderyn, loved to play a game called "Hurry!" It is a game which you have to rob or steal something then run for your life. It's basically impossible to win.
Aderyn played on it every day and whenever she could. She would play on it all night if she could, but she never won.
Her mum said that it was a waist of her time, but Aderyn didn't listen. She just kept playing on it, no matter what.
"It's a waste of your time!" her mum said.
"It's not, it's good fun," argued Aderyn. "At least I'm not in your way, like Matty." Pointing.
"Yes, that is true, but you're wasting the electricity. And that costs money. Matty doesn't really use any electricity!"
Aderyn stormed up stairs and into her bedroom. For once she didn't go on her laptop. Instead she put on the television. After about half an hour, Aderyn changed the channel. She changed it to the news. Aderyn doesn't watch the news, but something flashed up on the screen. It said "NEW IMPROVED! There's a new version of Hurry! You can only get it in our store! Our store is I.M.H! Quick! Everyone going for them!
New Improved!
Chapter 1
A girl called Aderyn, loved to play a game called "Hurry!" It is a game which you have to rob or steal something then run for your life. It's basically impossible to win.
Aderyn played on it every day and whenever she could. She would play on it all night if she could, but she never won.
Her mum said that it was a waist of her time, but Aderyn didn't listen. She just kept playing on it, no matter what.
"It's a waste of your time!" her mum said.
"It's not, it's good fun," argued Aderyn. "At least I'm not in your way, like Matty." Pointing.
"Yes, that is true, but you're wasting the electricity. And that costs money. Matty doesn't really use any electricity!"
Aderyn stormed up stairs and into her bedroom. For once she didn't go on her laptop. Instead she put on the television. After about half an hour, Aderyn changed the channel. She changed it to the news. Aderyn doesn't watch the news, but something flashed up on the screen. It said "NEW IMPROVED! There's a new version of Hurry! You can only get it in our store! Our store is I.M.H! Quick! Everyone going for them!




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