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About a girl

Novel By: AllyDee
Young Adult


About a lonely girls senior years of high school.
The love, the drama, the dances, and the prom. View table of contents...

Chapters:

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13

Submitted: Jun 28, 2008    Reads: 111    Comments: 10    Likes: 3   


A/N: Hey guys just wanted to tell you that most of the chapters will be longer then they have been.  And I'll have chapter 7 up really soon!

"Urgh!!" I yelled as I threw clothes around my room.  I looked at my clock only 1 hour until my date and I couldn't find anything to wear.  Eventually I settled on a pair of skinny jeans and a black shirt with off the shoulder strapes. 
I stood out on my door steps.  Waiting for him to come.  After he was about 10 minutes late I walked inside.  After being inside for 10 minutes I heard the door bell ring.  I gracefully walked torwards the door.  When I opened it Brandon was standing there.  His face in a bright smile.


"Sorry I'm late." he said.  I pretended to be mad.  I turned my back to him and crossed my arms over my chest.

"Em, come on.  Twenty minutes is not that much time!" he said pulling on my arm, trying to get me to turn back around.

"Fine I'll forgive you this once." I said turning around with a smile on my face.  I told my parents that we were leaving and we slid into his car.

We talked about the movie we were going to see and how good we thought it would be. 

When we arrived at the movies there was  a long line but we felt like waiting in it(at least I did).  We talked about everything.  From how is mother was doing(she was doing good from what the doctors had told him) to our favorite type of pizza.   By the time we made it to the front of the line I pretty  much felt as though I had known him my whole life.  I knew so much about him, and him about me.

Thought the movie I thought he was going to put his arm around my sholder or something like that but no, he didn't.  He sat through the movie as if I didn't exist.  I didn't mind though.  The movie was really good.

While we were walking out of the movie Brandon's cell phone began to ring.  He looked at it and I saw his face become worried.  He told me that he had to take it.  He walked away to the bench that was about 5 feet from where we were standing.  I saw his eyes fill with tears.  He hung up the phone and walked back to me.

"My mom's condition has taken a turn for the worse.  They said she has only a few hours to live.  Maybe a few days at most." his face was pained with sadness and there was nothing I could do to help take the pain away.  I walked torwards him and wrapped my arms around him in a hug.  He put his head down on my sholder and hugged me back.


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Comments:

AW! Poor Brandon. But I understand the movie thing. It drives my husband crazy that I want to watch a movie and not make out like teenagers:)

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

haha
:]

PS I like it:)

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

haha
thanks :]

:[ First her brother, then now Brandon's mom? *sigh* You really plan to kill everyone? Evil authors...*whispers: Just like meee*
Haha. But yes, lovely chapterr. :d

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

haha
I don't plan to killl everyone.
:]

Nice story really liked all the chapters though dont you dare kill more people(now i know what it feels like to read my stories)move it a bit slow

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

Author Comment:

haha
thanks for the advice.
and who said his mother dies??
maybe she does,
maybe she doesn't
:]

awwww

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

Author Comment:

is that al you can sayy??
haha
jk

Aww, poor Brandon!
I really like this story...can't wait for Chapter 7
**Let's pray his mom don't die**


:]

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

haha.
like i said before.
maybe she will
maybe she won't
*laughs evilly*
but thanks for readingggg
:]

AWww omg poor Brendan. =[ I feel so bad.. Please don't let her friend die.... that'd just be terrible. =[ Good job though.. I love it. =]

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

her friend won't die
his mother may
mauhaha
just kidding
:]
I'm actually not sure if his mother will die or if she will live
:]

AAAAAAAAAAAw Omg poor brandon
I feel so sorry for him
Good job love it

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha Thanks!

awww, that's so sad about brandon's mom :( good thing Em was there to comfort him *wink wink* thier date was cute. and Brandn seems like a really respectable guy:P Can;t wait to read more:P
Steph(:

Posted: Aug 21, 2008

Author Comment:

haha
:]

so sad, brendan seems to be having some issues with the relationship, but i think im reading to much into this.

Posted: Sep 30, 2008

Author Comment:

haha
you might be right
or you might not
but dont worry about reading to much into things
I do that allll the time



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