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Layla was named after her mother's favorite song. But what happens when in the aftermath of her mother's death, her father beats her and she becomes suicidal? View table of contents...

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Submitted: Mar 31, 2007    Reads: 290    Comments: 5    Likes: 1   


To black everything fades

When her blood is spilt by razorblades

To her face his hand strays

Abusing her with his drunken ways

To her heart the damage is complete

As she is finally beat.

"SLAM!"

I jumped at the sound of the door being forced back into its frame. He was drunk again, and he was coming for me.

 "Layla, sweetie where are you?" he spoke in a drunken tone.

 When I didn't reply, he became nasty.

"You know I'll find you, you dirty excuse of a human. I always do."

Grabbing random things around my room, I stuffed them into the duffel bag I had found buried in my closet. Clothes, my latop, chargers for my electronics, books, pens, pictures of people I love, that kind of stuff. I took my backpack off my bed, and put it on.  Quietly, I creeped out of my room to the back door. Climbing over the fence in the backyard, I walked down the street and made my way to school.

 


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Comments:

coooool it sounds soo interesting, WHAT HAPPENS NEXT lol

Posted: Mar 31, 2007

Author Comment:

lol leena i know you're excited for more

nice, keep going.

Posted: Apr 1, 2007

Author Comment:

thanks for the encouragement!it's very appreciated.

damn ur chapters r short. lol. omg i would have died if i had a dad like that. lol

Posted: May 6, 2007

Author Comment:

kayyy its a PROLOGUE
a prologue is not a chapter
its not supposer to be 382518633381746599376476 ++ pages long!

So far so good, you' got me intrigued. I hope the next chapter is just as good.

Posted: Nov 26, 2007

Author Comment:

Hey, thanks =)



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