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Slave by force to a vampire

Novel By: Babywolf
Young Adult


Tags: slave, vampire

Well let's see it's about a girl named Julie and her story of a nightmare ..who knows what would happen View table of contents...

Chapters:

1 2 3 4 5

Submitted: May 18, 2008    Reads: 393    Comments: 5    Likes: 0   


I was walking from a terrible day from school where I got detention because I wrote  "Sluts come here to fuck" in the bathroom and ofcourse a girl told me to a teacher and I got in trouble but it was all true like everyday I see them fuck in the bathroom when I want to pee . The wind blew through my long black hair and cooling me down from the high temperature .I closed my eyes enjoying the cold wind and shot them open at the sound of a girl screming in pain . I began running to the fact to found a man leaning on her and biting her neck . It was pretty unusuall because it probably was just a love bite and then I saw crawling on her neck drops of blood . Running I punched the man into his stomach as he lost his balance . I turned to the girl who was on the floor with her eyes shot open whispering something that I first couldn't understand .

-Run .....back ( she whispered louder for me to hear )

-No ...come ...let me help you .

I tried to pick her up but instantly felt my hand getting grabbed and slammed into the wall . The man I saw probably wasn't human because he had fangs and his mouth was dirrty with blood as he looked at me with rage . Shivers with fear went down my spine but I straightened myself and looked into his big brown eyes wich were charming , infact he was charming , he had a long red hair with a pair of lips wich gave me the urge to kiss them but he was a murderer eventough he looked good and tasty.

-How dare you disturb my meal , you dirtty little human .

I looked with courage at him not to show him any fear and then brought it all up and yelled .

-You fucking rat , how dare you kill a human?

He slapped me across the face leaving me a red mark and pulling me up by my neck as I tried to struggle to breathe .

-Your turn shall come and you will regret what you have done .

He whispered that to my ear and then left leaving me stunned in the alley . I took a look at the girl who was dead , called the cops and runned home . I didn't live with my parents but in an apartement wich I bought with with my own money that I saved almost for a lifetime just to get rid of my parents . My mother was a corky old atentative of a teen woman who never retailated on my father's beatings but then my father gor bored with her and took all his anger out on me wich in the last few years made me stronger and used to the pain . The image in the mirror reflection looked like it wasn't mine , my long black hair was full of dirt as my pale white skin with freekles and a pair of big powerfull green eyes wich I was very proud of . I got in the shower to wash away the dirt and enjoyed the warm water brushing my skin . "what if the vampire rat really does come for me " I shivered at the thought ..."Oh ..silly ... he doesn't even know where you live " . I calmed myself with that thought and walked out of the shower to the bed and continued reading my favorite book  " The animal cemetery" till I fell asleep with the book on my face .

The first ray's of sunshine hit my eyes as I slowly opened them curving a smile upon my face as I loved to be awaken this way by the sun . I rushed into the bathroom , took a shower and then ran to school were my friend Bobby who I had known for almost 5 years greeted me .

-Hey cute ....

-Hey bastard ...( I said while I gave him a peck on the cheeck )

-Why do you always call me that ? Don't I have the right to object? (he said looking with a pair of puppy eyes)

-No , you don't after you broke half of the girl's from this school ..( I said smiling)

-Let's go to class or we'll be late .

-yeah , yeah , change the subject .

We walked into the class where we spent  6 hours mostly sleeping because I didn't like my classes on wednesday so I prefered to dream Johnny Deep with me on a romantic dinner.  The last hour ended and I  went to ask Bobby to take me home as I still didn't feel safe to walk alone at night with the thought of that vampire after me .

-Bobby , can I ask you something?

-sure , what happened?

-Can you take me home?

-Hmm ... afraid of strangers ha? I thought you can handle them

-Please?

-Okay ...kido.

-Back at ya.

We walked alone for a couple of ten minutes wich seemed to last almost an hour while talking about general stuff like his girlfriend who he didn't love and he wanted to broke off with her and why didn't I have a boyfriend yet till the sound of a branch crack and I jumped looking back too see the man from the alley smirking at me .

>>Cliffhangher<<


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Comments:

I like this. Are you going to write more?

Posted: May 18, 2008

I sure am and I'm glad you like it :)

Posted: May 18, 2008

look. watch your grammer, and spelling. Dialogue should be in quotes, it takes away from the story when it's not. I have mixed emotions about this but I am going to continue reading and keeping an open mind. [:

Posted: May 19, 2008

I agree with cris. There are a lot of grammar and spelling errors and you need to put your dialogue in quotes. i am also mixed about this, but also will continue to read. it sounds interesting but its a bit hard to read.
I give it a 3.00/5

~mandy

Posted: May 20, 2008

no worries your grammar isn't that bad they like to all say the same. I have really bad typos so.....Oh well:) Can't wait to read more keep me posted.

Posted: Jul 14, 2008



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