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An Angel Stuck In Hell

Novel By: CheetahBear
Young Adult


Tags: abuse, school, rape, murder

This is about a girl named Angel. Stay with her as she tells her story about an abusive mom and dad and a life that only seems to get worse by each passing day. Sometimes she just thinks that she will be stuck in this world she knows as Hell for the rest of her life. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Sep 7, 2008    Reads: 92    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


I opened my eyes to find myself in a hospital.

"Angel thank goodness your alive" Matt said from somewhere beside me.

I turned my head to see Matt sitting in a seat beside me. "What happened?" I asked.

"I'm so sorry. Eric he knocked me out as soon as I hung up and locked me in a room, but then my aunt found me. I found you laying on the ground, Eric says that you jumped out of the window" Matt said walking over to me.

I looked down at my injured body.

"What happened to Eric?" I asked.

Matt shrugged. "I have been way to worried about you to even think about that jerk. Listen we are going to move far away from here. Somewhere where we can be together. I love you Angel" Matt said grabbing my hand.

I smiled, knowing that his words were true for some reason not known to me. I remembered having a dream, I had been talking to Dillan, but none of it made sense anymore. "I love you to" I said a single tear making its journy down my bruised face.

"You have been in a coma for nearly three weeks" Matt said, worry showing through his voice, although his eyes shone with delight.

I suddenly realized that I couldn't feel my legs.

"I'm not paralyzed am I?" I asked worry rising in my chest, thinking that I may never be able to walk again.

"Your back. You broke it by the fall, the doctors don't think that you will ever be able to walk again" Matt said looking down.

I was cut off as a nurse walked into the room, holding a big beautiful vase full of flowers. "This came for you Angel" she said sitting it down on the desk beside me.

I looked over at it and reached up a hand, finding that one of them was in a cast. "Who is it from?" I asked.

The nurse shrugged nicely. "It was just waiting outside the door. I think there is a card" she said.

I saw the card and pulled it over to me and opened it.

My eyes widened and my whole body shook with fear.


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Comments:

The Reader not the Writer
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Not again you always seem to end it just when its getting exciting why!!!!! Please up date soon I can't wait.

Posted: Sep 7, 2008

Author Comment:

lol srry i just love cliffhangers! but i will!

aaaaahhh!!..
yooh cudnt resist .. cud u?!..
cudnt lemme av dis moment!!!..
grrr!!...
hahahaha
ye.. id probly do d same..
xlolx
x

Posted: Sep 8, 2008

Author Comment:

haha and yeah your right I couldn't resist...its just so fun!!! But don't worry i'll be posting more soon!



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