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After being abandoned by her fiance , a woman and her older sister open a hotel/restauraunt , but don't have enough money / costumers to fund it . And so , she undergoes the dangerous and degrading job of protitution to make ends meet . Her career as owner of the hotel is put into turmoil when a mysterious group of men arrives - one of which , she had met at her 2nd job , haveing ties to her fiance . Please excuse offensive language , perversion , innuendos , and my inconsisent updating . View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 31, 2007    Reads: 103    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


Author's Note:You'll only get the Yaoi joke if you're an anime fan - but if you're not , yaoi=guy+guy (not quite,but that's it in general), sorry for the overboard-ness..I don't know if this is rated correctly...

3 years ago...

I must admit I was a young bride . I had been 19 at the time , and Irvine- my Irvine had been 22 . Until...

He turned his back on me , leaving without saying why . It was the day of our wedding , and I hadn't known just to where he was running off to . But I did know , however , who he was running to ; Kanna.

We were all dear friends , never once would we betray one another . Until Little Miss Kanna came along , and had stolen away my future husband's heart away . Not only did she and my older sister rival eachother in all that they did , but she and I had a striking resemblance-long hair in a neat braid tied up high with a violet ribbon...

I haven't seen them again after she and my fiance eloped , the day of our wedding day . It forced me into a state of anxiety and loss .

As though no man could be trusted with my heart .

....So I use bandages around my torso to hide my figure so as to not catch the eye of any man . I'm for nobody's eyes , after all . I use brown contacts to hide my shining bright green eyes . Nobody's eyes , and for only nobody .

We even changed our names-I am now Faye , and my sister is now Lena . Don't tease-we chose eachothers' names..

But even though I despised the two for running away together , I couldn't help but cry when I heard that Kanna had been kidnapped , and that after my former fiance had gone to save her , they had both died in a fire..

And after this event , my sister and I never stopped trying to keep our hotel up and going , no matter how many times we were in the red , and no matter how many times I had snuck out from our work take care of some ' business ' ...

This ' business ' is the reason my sister can even stand up for our hotel-it gives me plenty of money , and the fun of losing my innocence to a random man in a bar...(sorry , kiddos .)

Present Day...

My sister , who has the slight blue-black hair as myself , was contemplating what the fate of the ingredients in our fridge were to be for tonight . We were waiting behind the check-in desk , and she was staring at the ceiling , mumbling how she could butcher up the vegetables...

The door swung open , letting four strange tall men in . " CURRY! " , Lena yelled , not realizing who heard , or that the door had just swung open . The youngest of the men had gold blonde hair , which spiked up at odd angles , and was also the shortest of the four . The 2nd youngest had a doctor-like appearance about him , wore small frameless rectangular glasses , and had light brown hair . The 3rd youngest had crimson red hair , dyed , perhaps , and looked very familiar . . .

And the oldest of the four had .... a devil-may-care personality about him , a royalty-like air , and had the palest ash blonde ( almost silver ) hair . All of them had untrimmed hair , but the red head had it a bit under his shoulders !

...Enough about hair and all that jazz .

The youngest was very frisky , and spoke in almost a yell , " What ABOUT curry ? "

The red head smacked him upside the head , " Shut up , you brat ! Be quieter around the women and stop screaming !" It were as though they were a married couple , and was just so funny to watch !

"Screaming ? You're the one that's screaming , fag!" They started a mindless babble , and the doctor-like one just kept smiling calmy listening to the men fighting . So childish , and yet my sister and I couldn't help but smile at this ' lover's quarrel ' .

The noise was starting to get unbearable , and so I spoke up with a slight sarcasm in my tone , " We have a nice honey moon suite if that is what you are looking for , but please don't start doing anything in this lobby , my sister and I are offended-extremely offended by Yaoi . " The room was silent for quite a while , as though they were having a hard time understanding .

"Whats yaoi?" , the youngest asked , looking to the ash blonde one (Alex) for guidance . Alex twitched , " Change the subject-now!"

The doctor-person burst out laughing , the careless guy had a hard time fighting a smirk , and Lena was now scolding me for offending the guests . They had checked into a room , and were waiting for us to bring dinner to their room . I think I've seen that doctor ( identified as Mr. Kai) before , but that red head ( Mr. Aiden )-I've seen him at my second job , for sure ! They had told us that their car was being fixed , and that they were travelling to the careless guy's ( Mr. Alex ) hometown to retreive something reeeally valuable .

I wonder what it could be..?

The frisky little guy , ( Little Gene ) eats alot , and is scarfing down the curry-I don't know whether he is hungry , or if he likes it ? They insisted that Lena and I join them , though I am quite nervous that Aiden will recognize me , though I look very different from when I'm at my other job-practically bare , though wearing a short little peice . The last time I saw him , I was screaming my head off in pleas- whoa , sorry for describing it like that , sorry ! Kai spoke up , staring at my braid , " Who's recipe is this ? I beleive that I've tasted it before . "

I was surprised by the fact that I was tugged out of my imagination , and stumbled on my words , "Ack-I-ahh , It's my fiance's ...umm.." oops , I messed up ! I wasn't supposed to say that ! I took interest in my apron strings , and started tugging at them , though trying not to remove it . "Eh ? Fiance ? That's a shame.." , the perv , Aiden , decided to indirectly tease me , while little Gene decided to steal a peice of pork on his plate . I wanted to cheer the little guy on , but instead , I glared at the pervert , ignoring the fact that he had just now called me a flatchest . Lena decided to change the subject , " Why don't you go rest , Faye-Faye , you seem so flustered . " Aiden laughed at my nickname , whilst little Gene tried to shut him up , telling him he was a hypocrite . The message barely got across , because his mouth was completely stuffed with rice , carrots and curry sauce .

I walked out of the room after refilling everyone's cup ( but Gene's ) with wine . " Yeah , sure , check on everyone else , too . "

Lena turned to me , but the door had already closed . I had just forgotten that it's 7 in the morning , and that we don't have many other customers to tend to , but to clean the rooms .

I headed to the first room to clear off the soiled beds .The people who had rented out the room the othernight had too much of a ' good time 'the other night , if you catch my drift . The image of Kai was still engraved into my mind , reminding me so much of how gentle and calm my Fiancee , Irvine , had been . I had the bedsheets off when the door had swung open . " Ahh , I'd figured you'd be in here , " , at this remark , I wanted to say ' how did you know , stalker ? ' , " back there you seemed to lose heart . " , gee , you think ?, " So , who is this fiance , anyway ? " , it was Kai , and somehow , I just didn't have the heart to even look at him anymore . I glared at him , contradicting what I just said, and not caring who he reminded me of , or how fragile he seemed .

I hate this job . Both of them . Just what is it about those guys that makes me so mad ?

Well , the guys at my 'part time job' make me mad because they dive into - oh , right this isn't that kind of story . . .

Yet .


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Comments:

WOOOHHHH very interesting, I enjoyed reading this, i'll be sure to read chapter two.

Keep up the good work.

Posted: Aug 2, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks ! I thought it was a little dull at first , so I guess I'll have to try even harder now !



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