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Dose of Love for Vengeance

Novel By: darlingILY
Young Adult


A story of a man and a woman triumphing over hell, reaching heaven and enduring earth only to save their star-crossed love. Both are ready to execute and suffer under any circumstance—from cheating the devil, to annihilating innocent lives, but how far would each go? View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jun 26, 2008    Reads: 139    Comments: 12    Likes: 7   


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For all the things that mattered to me this is the last thing I thought that would bring me too much pain if taken away from me. I never thought loosing the battle would really matter to me. When the conflict between us first sparked, it never bothered me. I know either me or my opponent would soon lose, though that won’t affect anything. Wrong. This battle is the fight for everything, or whatever's left in the world above. Being some kind of a superhero is the last thing I associated to this fight. A fight for existence was the only reason we’re doing this. But now, we’re not fighting for our existence, but for every one's.

As I fall, I saw the collapse of everything before my eyes. I know I wasn’t hallucinating, though it wasn’t happening yet. I was a vision of the effect loosing this battle would cause. I squeezed my eyes shut hoping the images would disappear but to my disappointment, it became more prominent under my closed eyelids. I wasn’t expecting this fall; well, I wasn’t really expecting any failures.

I felt a shock as a strong blowing force approached my stomach sending me backwards to something hard. The realization that I was being thrown around came later. I felt the back of my head wet, “Blood.” I groaned. Without a sound, the creature launched itself toward my bleeding body on the floor.

I closed my eyes.


A//N: So, whacha think.. Should I continue, or not?


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Comments:

It is good, yes! CONTINUE!! I'm definitely interested in reading more!

Although, lol, you do have a few spelling mistakes...
(lose, not loose, lol)

But please continue! You're a great writer! I'd love to hear more of this story! ; )

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so muchh. =]

AHH this sounds like an AWESOME novel I would read more but guess what, THERE IS NONE YET! so get busy missy!! =DDD

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

=.= Sorryyy. I will, get to it in a bit, I promise. :d Thanks though. =]

Wow.
You have such an imagination.
this was a truely perfect begining to any story
I absolutely LOVED it.
:]

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Yay! Thanks.

ouuu I like the layout of the title at the begging, tres nice! lol, the story seems VERY interesing. please tell me when the next chapter is up luv:P
Steph(:

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

I will. Thank you for reading. =]

ooh mii God!.. k mii mom is naggin me to shut dwn & go to bed.. so i dnt av much tiime.. *mission impossible type music playing*..
nehoo..
words cannot describe how much ii want yooh to keep goin wiv thiis..
the title alone grabs me and holds me bound from the verii start!..
and it's soo rivetin from the verii start.. there's noo anooyinlii long build up!!..
xoxoxoox
*uh oh!!.. must go now!!..*
ciao..
xoxox

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha. I appreciate it. Thanks a lot. =]

YES!!!!! KEEP GOING!!!! not in a creepy sexual way either... this is good stuff, i like it =)

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

:d Thanks! You guys are so greaaaaaat, that I'm going to post the first chapter nooooow. xD


-jaw drops-
Continue!! Continue!!
I beg of you!!
And yeah.. this took me forever to read.. cuz with the end of school and everything.. been crazzzzy busy. lol.
Anyway.. ahh! You have to write more.
I love it.

~!~Megan~!~

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

That's okay, I appreciate you taking your time to read this. Thank youuuu so muchh. *hugs*

baaabe you should seriously continue.
i loved it and now i'm totally hooked.
please continue i'd luffles you forever.
Peace
Riah Teh Muffin

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Awh, Riah..Thank you so muchh. =] && I will.

this is really good for the frist ch

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

:d It's more of a prologue..But yes, thank you. =]

im confuzzled but that is goood!! make reader want more yup yup lol love it lol

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. =]

OHH! Off to read the next chapter!

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

:d Thank youuuu.

That was pretty cool.

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. Glad you liked it.



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