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This story also displays love, trust, having fun when your young and not to forget the people around you.

This is a sequel to the story Thank You Damien, unfortunately i couldn't find the content for that so i'll use this, it's about a senior who struggles with his family, his girlfriend, the people around him.

Somethings you might not understand so i'll fill you in on it, Damien one of the main characters, was kicked out of his parents house when he was 15 but not for the reason you may think, his dad blew up at him for something he didn't do(plus his dad was drunk)so now Damien lives in the guesthouse. Alyssa's life isn't all to good either, her mom was killed in a car accident, her boyfriend was shot and with that her dad became an alcoholic which caused him to be abusive. Shortly Alyssa's sister Ashanti goes missing. Along with all the sadness and unfortuante events within their families Alyssa and Damien become close and help each other get through it...in the end though Ashanti comes back. I think that is all you need to know, if you don't understand something please do tell me. View table of contents...


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Submitted:May 5, 2013    Reads: 9    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   

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Sorry i know this is incredibly short !

I looked at Alyssa's first.

Dear Mother,

It's been a year since God decided to take you from me, at first I guess I blamed him and all but…I think it was because you'll never get to see me succeed in life…well I guess you're sort of watching from above(I hope) and seeing my every move, which now that I think of pretty much sucks haha. Anyways I think the one thing I wanted you to see, was Damien…he's my ex-boyfriend but today he did something amazing he saved me, and he's done it more than once, it's like he's my guardian angel here to save me from harms way. So I'm looking it at this way…I don't exactly believe in God like you did but I think if he is there that he sent Damien here in your place to help me and guide me with my life…which is pretty neat I've always wanted someone like that. I truly love Damien with like all of my heart…and it does sting to see him with another girl but, I think it's better for both of us because in a way we were using each other right? I don't even know if that makes sense. But today I'm accomplishing two things I'm letting go of you and Damien. What I mean is I'm not forgetting you but I'm kind of letting go of the pain, anger, and sadness…I just sort of want to be happy…same with Dame, I'm not going to start avoiding him, I mean I love him and all so…that wouldn't exactly work out too well, but I think I'm letting go of the lust I have after him…I think that's all I wanted to tell you. I just hope

this helps me.

Love your daughter,

Alyssa Vendross

I pretended to read over Alice's letter, but quite frankly I didn't really care…because what Alyssa wrote there, touched my heart for ever.

Later that day we went to the beach to release the bottles, as they we watched them move in the water moving further and further away from us.

"Bye mom" Alyssa quietly said.

"Bye hate" I whispered.

After they disappeared we sort of just chilled at the beach admiring the sunset. What started out as a crappy day turned into an amazing journey one that will take me far into life.


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