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Something.New.

Novel By: DomXD
Young Adult


For Sarah

He's looking for something new, something more...to heal his broken heart...what he doesn't know is there's someone who notices he's not alright and she's not doing to well either.
will January and Dash figure out their problems? View table of contents...

Chapters:

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8

Submitted: Jul 31, 2008    Reads: 170    Comments: 10    Likes: 2   


Something New

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Chapter 1

January's P.O.V.

Where was he? Dash Luck that is, this party had started over an hour ago and well he was always there. Why was I even caring, it’s not like he knew me…he was one of those people that everyone knew, but he didn’t know all of them, myself being one he didn’t know.

“Jan, come on let’s dance…you’re being boring!” my friend August shouted, I hated parties like this, even didn’t shout, you’d have to stand incredibly close to the person you wanted to talk to. I scanned over the crowd of people dancing and decided to back out.

“Uh maybe next time…I think I’m going to go get a drink,” I yelled back.

“Okay, see you later!”

I walked over to the kitchen, dodging all the flying objects that the drunks were throwing, and safely (?) made my way to the kitchen. What to drink? Booze, booze, booze and more booze wow, I was probably the only sober teen there…so why start drinking now? Or ever…under-age drinking was well wrong.

“Hey Dash!”

“How’s it going, Dash”

“Luck, did’ya brings the *hiccup* stuff?” <-- that guy was definitely drink!

The king had arrived. He walked into the crowded room of intoxicated teens partying like there is no tomorrow, he shoots a dazzling smile at everyone he sees. But something wasn’t right!

“God, Jan you have to stop staring at him,” whispered August, wow what a startle where did she even come from.

“Don’t do that, you know you’re not supposed to scare me,” I said back.

“Yeah but this was crucial, I thought you should know you’re like drooling over him, it looks pathetic…you have to stop staring at him,” she pointed out.

“But I can’t, there’s something off about him”

Dash Luck. His last name did a pretty good job of explaining him, he was just one lucky boy, he had it all, good looks, a perfect toned body, he seemed pretty much flawless and well his family was incredibly rich. But tonight as he entered in through those doors, something stirred me deep inside, and I recognized a difference in Dash, he looked like he was fighting the urge to run and hide, but why? Why was Dash pretending to be alright?

Dash's P.O.V.

Why the hell was I pretending to be alright? I wasn’t alright, this party was supposed to be fun Jennifer and I were supposed to enter in together…but that all changed when she sent her best friend Ava to come and break-up with me for her. What kind of person sinks so low to getting someone else to break-up with you. This has got to be the worst day in my entire life. It started off with my mom packing her things and walking out the door, my sister has gone AWOL and now I’m single.

“Luck, did’ya brings *hiccup* the stuff?” asked my incredibly irresponsible best friend Freddy.

“Uh…dude what stuff? There’s enough booze here, we don’t need anymore, you don’t need anymore,” I yelled at him.

“Whatever…hey have you seen August Winters lately?” he asked. August, August…who was that?

“Who?” I asked.

Using his beer bottle he pointed at her, I’ve never noticed her before but Freddy was right, she did look good, she looked hot…a perfect bod, a dazzling smile and she just seemed flawless. But she’s not the one I seemed to notice it was her friend…who was she? Augusts’ friend just seemed to stick to my mind.

“Yeah, yeah, but who’s the other chick with her?” I asked curious to know.

“Dun’ know, I’ve never seen her before,” he replied.

“Okay whatever,” with that he walked out.

I scanned the room once more, I started to see more clearly…how can anyone enjoy this, all it really was, was a crowded room of inebriated teens, who were dumping champagne on each other, making out with whatever person closest to them. Plus I was 100% sure that most of them had either lost their keys, phones, wallets etc. I can’t believe that used to be me. Thank God I repented and saw the light.

I needed to get out of here, my best escape would be the roof, it’s peaceful and I like it.

First I had to go meet that girl, but where’d she go?


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Comments:

wow!! omg! i love it! keep going plz ^^ and thx a lot

Posted: Jul 31, 2008

Author Comment:

glad you liked it!!XD
i'll keep going just for you
and no problem!!XD
xoxoxooxoxo/infinite x'z and o's
DOM!!!

OMG I LOVE IT...haha its the best..cmon need more chapters chop chop...lol

Posted: Jul 31, 2008

Author Comment:

lol loved that you loved it!!! and i'm not so sure you'll be seeing a new chapter for a while...going on vaca!!!
but thank you
xoxoox
DOM!!!

SO KOOL well have fun on vaca.

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you i will and thank you on ur comment

"i liked it"

.....
its great...
cant wait till' the next chapter come out...
..

is this gonna be one of those fairytales..with happy ending...

lol

cant wait to find out..?



..

and by the way... u have great writing skills.
thought i should let u know...

keep on writing

DONT U EVER STOP!!!!

lol


tell me when the next chapter comes out ok....

U GOTTA TELL ME

...


.x

Posted: Aug 2, 2008

Author Comment:

lol laughing while reading this...yeah sure i'll tell you when i add more...loved that you liked it!! thank you!! XD

domm!
why didn't you tell me you started a new novel?
well its greatt!!
i like the switching from the point of veiws :]
and the names :]
have fun on vacation!!!
:]

Posted: Aug 2, 2008

Author Comment:

oh my gosh i completely forgot to tell you sorry...urgh!! wow how did i forget to do that...anyways glad you liked it!!

PINK
(not registered user)

This was really good can't wait until the next chapter!

Posted: Aug 4, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you, i'll keep you informed!!XD

making a new chapter soon?!?!

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hahaha funny sarah...not yet, i know what i am writing next but first i have to her.a.v. because i got that chapter done during the road trip, dom is a very busy person lol

That was really good! You need more chapters pronto!

Posted: Sep 12, 2008

Author Comment:

wow i'm so glad you like and the other chapters are up =P

hahaha!! You should check out my story, "Don't Fall for The Best Friend." Kind of similar, but different plots.
Great writing.

Posted: Oct 20, 2008

Author Comment:

i will totally check that out =D

glad you liked it

Dominique

i liked the whole story...but the mention of him repenting was GREAT...

Posted: Oct 29, 2008

Author Comment:

THANK YOU!!

i think i want this novel to have christian characters but i'm not going to make them overly religious i don't know, i'm not even sure where i am going with this



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