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The Worst Night Ever?

Novel By: Emo Lover
Young adult

This is my first story ever. please give me negative and positive comments it would be appriciated for further stories. wish me luck!!! View table of contents...


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Submitted:Dec 13, 2011    Reads: 82    Comments: 6    Likes: 1   

My name is Stephanie Wolfe. I am 16 years old and in love. I have red and blck hair,a curvey body, and i stand about 5 foot 3 inches.

I was going to go see my boyfriend Chris this morning as a surprise. I got dressed in black skinny jeans,a sky blue shirt and blue vans. When i was done i left to my boyfriends house. By the time i got there the front door was unlocked. When i walked inside i closed the door quietly. Hearing a weird sound i went upstairs and walked into my Chris's bedroom to see him fucking a blonde girl,but she wasnt just any blonde girl she was my blonde sister. I gasped when i saw that making them turn to look at me. Both of them froze in their actions. As tears startedcoming down i wondered to myself why does it have to happen to me,i thought he loved me and all. So many questions came to mind when i felt someones hands on my face. When i looked up i saw Chris staring at me. So much rage and anger came upon me that i did something i never thought i would do to Chris. I slapped him as hard as i could making him stumble back a bit. When he looked at me i could tell he go mad by what i did. Chris came over to me,taking long strides and slammed me into a wall,making me hit my head. I stared at him in shock. Chris slapped me again making me fall on the floor. He started kicking me and yelling this at me. My sister Ashley was yelling at him to stop,but he looked at her and said ''Shut the fuck up, before this is you''. Thats all i heard before i saw a black figure,then blacked out.

Please please leave a comment guys. I would love both negative and positive comments. If you like this story let me know so i can continue!!..:):)


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