All good things come to an end. ( CHAPTER ONE )

Random First Lines: I feel like like I'm falliing..again.Into a never ending hole. I am running away from myself. Giving... : Poetry » Read

Novel By: FadedVanity
Young Adult

Tags: sad, suicide, depression, life, hopelessness, teenage, high, school

Just the intro to a novel I started last year.
This is all I have so far, please leave comments! View table of contents...

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Submitted: Dec 24, 2007 Reads: 64 Comments: 4 Likes: 1

December 14, it was cold that day one of those days you don't really wanna walk to the school bus, one of those days that you just want to sleep, but for me it was one of those days where I didn't ever want to wake up again. Death has always been a constant fasination of mine, since the age of ten I've been wondering why life's so great, ever since I've been feeling the cold arms of death embrace me and attempt to pull me in, and so far I showed no resistance. I was now at the age of 16, high school....

No wait not just high school, but life all together was a major chore to me, it all seemed so useless, why bother going through life with all the pain and suffering you'll endure when you can just swing lifelessly from the ceiling light in your kitchen?

( End of the intro, hope you liked it!

Please leave lots of comments, I don't have anything besides this for now, so All you ideas and opinions would be a great help!)

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Comments:

xXxMikkiKellyxXx

This intro rocks, really makes me want to read more.

Posted: Jan 9, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm having trouble thinking of what to write next though.

: O
Really annoyed about it too.
Any Ideas are welcome.

Thanks for commenting

seesawmae

Your intro is amazing!! You should defiantly write more!!!
i can help you with ideas if you want!
just let me know!! keep up the good work!!
:)

Posted: Jan 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!
Ideas are always welcome!
: D

seesawmae

Your intro is amazing!! You should defiantly write more!!!
i can help you with ideas if you want!
just let me know!! keep up the good work!!
:)

Posted: Jan 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Ideas would be lovely!
I wrote this a long time ago and I've forgotten what I wanted to do with it, and where I want to go with it.
Thank you for the comments, any suggestions will be taken to heart!

seesawmae

ok my ideas... you don't not have to take anything from them, and in fact you don't even have to read them.
if you start the story about a character, who is depressed and life goes on for a bit, death is plotted and the last moment before they kill themselves a special character changes their life and they get better.... or a character is depressed and starts cutting, and then has family issues, is forced to go to a mental helath recovery hospital thing and then they refuse to get better, but something makes them realise how special life is, and then do a blurb of when the character is older and thinks back to the time of depression... seriously these are just my ideas, no need to take them!!! good luck!

Posted: Jan 16, 2008