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Topsy Turvy

Novel By: fapgrl
Young Adult


Tags: love, loss, and, friendship

The characters are based on me and my friends but it IS fictional It's a story of love, loss, and friendship View table of contents...

Chapters:

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18

Submitted: May 2, 2008    Reads: 114    Comments: 5    Likes: 0   


Part One

Prologue

I looked around the circle at my friends, each of us different yet similar. In our own way, we’re a family. We’ve all had family problems, but we have stayed together through it all.

Marisol is the outgoing one. She’s not afraid to tell you what she thinks. Sol doesn’t care if you don’t like her. She’ll tell you what you really are and doesn’t beat around the bush. Plus, she has the voice of an angel.

Leilani is Hawaiian, in case you didn’t figure that out from her name. She’s our poet. She writes the best poetry in the world.

Kenzie is a Heinz 57, which means that she’s a little bit of this and a little bit of that. Kenz is also our punk rocker. She’s not scary punk rocker though. She’s one of the best guitarists in our neighborhood.

Rebekah is Jewish. Her parents are really strict and stick to the rules a lot, but Bekah tries to get by without all the strict rules. She is also an awesome artist.

Last is me, Hailee. I’m also a Heinz 57, like Kenz. I’m the sporty one and don’t have any real talent, except writing stories.

We all live in Mississippi now. Sol is originally from New York. Lei is from Hawaii. Kenz is from California, Bekah’s been here forever, and I’m originally from Texas. This is our story.


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Comments:

Bekah wanted to wear clothes?! and Jewish??? what is that? uh..i hope her mother wouldnt object?! lol ok seriously what kind of name is Kirby? ... jer-jas?? i need full names woman! Blaze..as in Bowman? Skip? is that the full name or is it Skipper? WHAT??(kathryn stlye)your mom and kimi's dad??? what???? and lace's family ca-razy!!!! uhh work-alocholic or a work addict?? confusion over here:) Jeremy thankyou!!! ooo i like dominic!!! and i love the name Blaze!! ok i think i've harassed you enough!! i know i know i'm a jerk, but i had fun writing all these comments!!
see ya at school!!! :)

Posted: May 18, 2008

Author Comment:

yeah, well they're native to ther places they were born! and what'd you think of the end????? and i don't get the bowman thing????

whoops, that last commment at the begining the "uh i hope so" is supposed to go before the Jewish thing.. and i wanted to say i like the title. and why am i not in it? i thought i was your friend! JERK!! lol jk! sorta... anyway lemme know when you've go more up on it!

Posted: May 18, 2008

Author Comment:

weel, i wrote it awhile ago! and it's hard enough having 5 characters...w/out having 6!

yeah whatever!! i think you should write me in!! even if it's as a friend from school or something like that..
bowman thing: you have the first letter to everyone else's name and i thought maybe since we can him bowman and not mike that maybe Blaze was supposed to be him. idk.... i liked the end...well not the end cuz there better be more!!! umm i like the brother..dominic!! i think he's cool and i love him already even though he's only said like five words!!

Posted: May 23, 2008

Author Comment:

sry...it cut iot off...and no lace was datin cyle at the time...so it wasn't bowman....and the guys aren't based on letters that i remember :)

i think the guys and ME should be added...and there's no more that's been added, it's at the same spot...

Posted: May 27, 2008

Author Comment:

i just added the rest it's in chaps. now so i think you're on chap 4....

Sounds good so far. I hope you can read my writing and Comment.

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

Author Comment:

you should read the rest there's like 20 chaps. total....and i'll try to read and comment on your stuff :)



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