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The Finish Line

Novel By: invisiblexme
Young Adult


When a death in the family causes her outcast cousin to move in, Liz is not thrilled at all. As she gets to know her cousin, she finds out a little more about her cousin than she really wants to. After a while, Liz starts to accept the strange ways of her cousin and really gets to know her. The only problem is, her cousin starts a chain of events that nearly kills Liz... View table of contents...

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Submitted: Aug 18, 2008    Reads: 69    Comments: 5    Likes: 2   


Buzz! The sound of the cicadas in the trees around me brings me back to reality. I roll onto my back, the hot pavement underneath me burning the back of my neck. This track is really hot.I should probably move, before I actually burn my neck or my arm or my back or my leg. But do I really want to move? No. I think moving would be painful anyway.

The last time I was lying here on this track was January. Now, it’s August. Obviously, January was a long time ago. But January was also the last time I ever ran. I haven’t been able to run for the past few months. Didn’t want to. Couldn’t run anyway. But today, now that my leg is better, I decided to take a stab at it and run.

It was glorious.

I’ve always loved to run. Ever since I was little, running was how I dealt with everything- pain, joy, depression, jealousy. And I don’t just enjoy running; I’m actually good at it. I have really good endurance and I can go really fast when I want to. I came in first in five races at the last regional competition I was in. There was even talk of going to the Olympics from my coach. But that idea has gone. Because of what happened in January. Which really sucks because it’s always been my dream to go to the Olympics. It would be an amazing feeling to run with the greatest athletes in the world. I don’t think I’d even care about winning a medal. Running isn’t a competition to me; it’s a pastime. I do it for fun.

But now my chances of ever running with champions, people with as much fame as Jesse Owens or Mary Lou Retton or Michael Phelps, are ruined. My dream will never come true.

Today’s run was exhilarating. The feeling of the searing hot pavement underneath my feet was the best in the world. I would get up and do it again, if I could move.
As I lie there, gazing up at the puffy white clouds, I find my mind wandering off to a year ago, when my life was so much different. Back then, my Olympic dream was in reach. Back then, I didn’t have to worry about outcast cousins, funerals, new boyfriends, or leg injuries. It was just me, my decision about college, and running.


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Comments:

Wow. I'm totally hooked! I really wished the chapter was longer, you had me hanging onto every word. I really liked the idea of the story, and the way that your main character thinks. Really really great writing too! I can't wait to see where you go with this; please update soon!! :D

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Author Comment:

lol i already did. good job on being the first one besides me to read it. congrats. lol thanks for reading =)

oh yeah. i guess i should have said that this is more of a prologue than anything else. lol oops whatever. now you know. =)

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

First chapter has hooked me too....well flow

Posted: Sep 16, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks =D

I like so far! Your a very good writer =)

Posted: Sep 23, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks =D

You have taken me in totally with this story. Keep writing.

Posted: Oct 2, 2008

Author Comment:

i will eventually, but im working on something else right now. thanks for the comment! =D



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