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If you wore more than Jeans and a Hoodie

Novel By: Kirkyb
Young Adult


Mallory was one of the guys growing up in the middle of nowhere. Dirt bikes, A.T.V.'s and snowmobiles’ was what she knew. Living with only her Dad and 4 brothers what else was she supposed to be.
The few girl friends she has are getting sick of the Jeans and the hoodie, and the guys see her as nothing more than one of them the girl who could go fishing with them, spend the day under a truck and not bat an eyelid at the crude jokes made at all the Girls expense in they're high school. But her best girlfriend Libby was determind Mallory was going to become the belle of the ball if it killed her................ View table of contents...

Submitted: Oct 6, 2009    Reads: 1108    Comments: 52    Likes: 14   


.............................. I woke up and walked down ready to leave dressed in my usual Jeans and hoodie. Dad was sitting talking on the phone Jordan was reading the paper and the twins were eating at the table.
 
“I hope the chiefs paying you good money for a 12 hour stint with his kids” Jordan said handing e an O.J.
 
“It’s well covered” I nodded Doofus not up yet.
 
“He left about an hour ago Eli picked him up” Jordan shrugged something about flowers I grinned.
 
“They’ve not gotten dates for the formal and Wes was asking the color of Libby’s dress and Allie’s”.
 
“Okay that explains it” he laughed as dad hung up the phone.
 
“You ready to go” he asked I nodded. “Can you drop the boys off at Eli’s they’re staying overnight considering you’re all going to be out and we’re working”.
 
“Sure” I nodded finishing my juice “Hey grab you things and get butts in the car” I called out Gage and Jamie ran for the stairs to grab they’re things.
 
“Okay I’m going to bed before work” Jordan said getting up and heading for his room leaving me with Dad.
 
“So you’ll be in the restaurant by 6” he said leaning on the table, I nodded. “I can’t wait to see you” he grinned as the twins came down the stairs and hugged Dad, “Be good boys okay”.
 
‘We will dad” the said at the same time grabbing there snow stuff and heading out of the door.
 
“See you later” Dad said as I grabbed my jacket and pulled my boots on.
 
“See you later Dad” I walked out and drove to Eli’s house I recognized Brandon’s car in the drive behind Eli’s truck I pulled up and got out, the twins running for the front door and knocking it, Eli pulled it open he was standing in just sweat bottoms and no shirt.
 
“Jake Jamie and Gage are here” he yelled calling for his little brother who was a grade above them. “Morning Mallory” he said stepping back so I could step inside Wes waved at me from the kitchen, Eli closed the door “You want to watch some of the game with us”.
 
“No I can’t I have to get across town” I shrugged handing him the boys bags.
 
“Oh I forgot you have that babysitting thing don’t you” he said shaking his head “blowing out the guys and a hockey game on the TV for 3 rug rats”.
 
“Sorry, I need the money” I smiled. “Have a good time at the dance tonight guys I called out as Sean stuck his head round the door frame from the kitchen.
 
“Hey you’ll know”
 
“I’ll know what” I said shaking my head.
 
“Where are the girls going for dinner”.
 
“I think they said they’d got in at the Great Dane” I said knowing were heading across town to Carmelo’s an Italian restaurant at the foot of the Ski hill with perfect views of the night runs lit up. “Why”.
 
‘We were going to crash it” Brandon smirked I raised my eyebrows “so don’t go and tell Libby”.
 
‘I won’t” I said.
 
“What time was their table for” Eli asked.
 
“6.45” I nodded he smirked. “I’m out guys enjoy the game and the dance.
 
“See ya sis” Wes shouted after me, as Eli opened the door I was half way to my car when I was hit on the back by a snowball, I looked round to see Eli standing on the porch laughing.
 
“We’re even” he said smirking.
 
“Oh I’ll be getting you back and you won’t be able to get me back” I said nodding at him stopping him laughing I waved as I got in the car and backed down the drive.
 
I drove to the Chief’s house he was in his garage as I pulled up.
 
“Hi Mallory” he smiled wiping his greasy hands on his oil stained jacket.
 
“HI” I smiled getting out and grabbing my bag of stuff from the trunk. “Thank you for going along with this”.
 
“I’ve already told your Dad he needs to bring in photos so we can see you remember how to be a girl” he laughed as a horn sounded and Libby pulled up “Looks like you ride’s here” he said as I ran down the drive and got ion her car and waved at him.
 
“You ready” she said grinning like an idiot.
 
“Oh yeah I got pelted with a Snowball when I dropped the twins off at Eli’s” I sighed as we headed to meet the others at the salon. “Oh and the guys were trying to find out where we’re all having dinner” she looked at me.
 
“You didn’t tell them did you”
 
‘Hell no they think we’re going to the Great Dane… sorry they think you guys are going to Great Dane at 6.45”.
 
“Nice” she laughed “we’ve got the side room at Carmelo’s as well so even if they do go there they won’t see us” she grinned as we pulled up a the salon “same as you’re being got ready in the back room here in case someone sees you” she said as we walked inside all the others were already in different stages of makeup and hair.
 
“Jeez you’ve got this planned out like a Military maneuver” I said shaking my head.
 
“Oh yeah thins is going to shut up some of the biggest ego is the whole of East High Allie laughed as her eyelashes were being glued on. “Mind you I wouldn’t say No to a guy in uniform sweeping me off my feet” she added.
 
“All we’ll get is sports uniforms” one of the other girls piped up.
 
“Hey don’t forget we have a couple of guys that wear Pizza uniforms” I added as a cape was put rind me and I was dragged into the back room to be pampered……………………………………………….
 
 
 
………………….. By 4.30 we all got back to Libby’s all made up mails done and hair done. Allie sat staring at me.
 
“Okay you’re making me nervous” I laughed as I took a drink of water.
 
“I was just thinking and don’t take this totally the wrong way but you’re super pretty” she shrugged I looked at my reflection in the window.
 
“I guess I didn’t scrub up so bad” I shrugged as Libby walked in her dress I put my fingers in my mouth and whistled her she turned round laughing “
 
“Okay just you two to get dressed now” Libby smiled, “Come on I’ll help you” she grabbed my hand and pulled me to her room where the dress was hanging up maing me smile. “I have the Black one ready in the bag to go as well so don’t worry”.
 
“I wasn’t I said as I puleed off my shirt and jeans I wnet in to her bathroom and changed my underwear and came out Libby helped my get the dess on I put on the silver sandals Dumb I know for mid winter but who cares I stood up.
 
“Wow you have to 5ft 11 in those” she laughed.
 
“4 inches baby” I laughed “Come on lets go to dinner”………………………………………


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Comments:

More perchance LOL

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

AWWWW I WANT TO SEE THEIR REACTIONS NOW! LOL

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

YEA MORE! and yay im first. well sides you but your the author lol

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

oh dang I hope eli's tall haha. can't wait for the next!!

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

:D Do we get the dads reaction and the dance today?? If not I can wait patiently :)

So guess what my step mom found while she was cleaning downstairs. My wedding pictures. How awesome is that, exactly what I want to see right? I think not. Stupid pictures.

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

wow amazing cannot wait 4 the next part

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

Oh that sucks Mallory sorry

I hope to do both reations today Libby

Allie (6ft, Blond Blue eys and wash board abs)

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

woot woot i love cant wait for more

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

I want her and Sean to get together lol. I guess I'm the only one.

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

oooh that image will last me quite some time...

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

hahaha you gonna start calling me libby now? o what the hell works for me. my friends do anyways hahaha

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

wow I loved it ..the dresses look awsome can't wait for more. Keep em coming Kirst

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

ahhh i cnt wait 4 them 2 see her :) eeeeeeeee im excited now!

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

no that was Eli's descrpition

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

I can't wait to see all the guys faces. Pmsl.
'LOVE IT!'

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

oh well still. it's a great image.

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

damn roxy i didnt no u were married, u look soo young

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

I can't wait to see Eli's face! :D

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

Please tell me you're putting in the dance and the dad's reaction today?

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

Not exacly see but you know what I mean :P

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

I was married..not anymore. And I'm only 22. Got married a week after my 20th birthday! But thank you, everyone always tells me I look older then I am. Not what women like to hear haha

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

i like it :) can't wait for the rest

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

jujie
(not registered user)

O my I can't wait. For the next one I love this so much! Yayyyy I'm so excited :). when is next post?

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

I can't wait to see the looks on their faces! I'm just so excited! Update soon! I guess it'll be tomorrow though...

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

ally
(not registered user)

so is the dance chapter gonna be tonight PLZ cause i have abusy schedual and this is what keeps me from going all school crazy !!

this one was great!!

how long?


xx ally

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

i won't be reading at all thursday and prolly friday
:( so.... make em a good next few posts today and tomorrow?

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

working on the next post right now

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

Man, I cannot wait to see/read what Eli's reaction is when he sees her in that dress.
Great chapter!!!
Loved it!!!

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

I forgot to ask how did the football game go last night??

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

THe packers lost AMber stop laughing

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

In how much time will you have the next post up?

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

They lost good lmao. Good game but seriously, the Vikings just rock this season!

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

allie
(not registered user)

how long more??


zz allie

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

okay so im guesiing Kirst you support the packers and Mallory supports vikings??

Talk about rivalary on the pages here

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

lmfao that game was awsome!!! it's always nice having two quarter backs on the field. ;)

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

haha well I'm from Minnesota and shes Wisconsin. I support the Vikings before the packers anyday but I don't really have a team that I'm 100% for

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

Like Mallory said She's from MN and i'm in Wisconsin so it a territory thing LOL but i actually don't watch it UTD all the way

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

I agree with you Mallory, I like Sean. I hope Eli the man whore eats his words about Mallory being "one of the guys".

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

Fair enough. I dont understand what you guys call football. It just looks like men tackling each other.

Ill stick to soccer and rugby two sports i do understand lol.

Damn it!!! Calebs awake. Im going to kill my brother Kyle when he comes to get him, he said he'd be asleep for 3 hours.

(Note to self, Tom aint coming anywhere near me unless hes covered.)

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

LMAO YAY somone agrees about Sean

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

Eli is kind of the obvious choice, I'm not really into the obvious choice. I'd like Eli to get all hot for Mallory after what he said and get knocked back by her, lol. Nice kick in the pants for him.

Sean is sweet and doesn't say the crap about Mallory all the others do:)

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

allie
(not registered user)

i hope its sean not eli he's too......... obivious. lol .

xx allie

how long more??

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

Exactly thats why I like him! But then again I always root for the underdog..unless its the packers ;)

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

do we get more?

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

oooh roxy that was below the belt haha. for packers fans. Even after everything that happened, I'm still a Brett Favre fan. :)

It would be pretty funny if eli suddenly gets the hots for Mallory then she goes with Sean instead. Or no! Give me Sean! :P

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

Lol, I don't care how obvious it is I LOVE ELI!!!

ELI + MALLORY ALL THE WAY!!!

Update!!!

Sorry, way to much coffee!!!

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

No Allie Seans mine hahaha I called him already!

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

The pinkpony just got an idea.....

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

I can't wait to read more!!!! had haha sean reminds me so much of my friend sean. I hope u update agin today!!!!!

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

how long for an update kirk?

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

haha go rox!!! that was nice :D we viking fans must stick together!!!!!!!

Posted: Oct 6, 2009

omg omg omg can't wait

Posted: Oct 11, 2009



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