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Mallory was one of the guys growing up in the middle of nowhere. Dirt bikes, A.T.V.'s and snowmobiles’ was what she knew. Living with only her Dad and 4 brothers what else was she supposed to be.
The few girl friends she has are getting sick of the Jeans and the hoodie, and the guys see her as nothing more than one of them the girl who could go fishing with them, spend the day under a truck and not bat an eyelid at the crude jokes made at all the Girls expense in they're high school. But her best girlfriend Libby was determind Mallory was going to become the belle of the ball if it killed her................
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Submitted: Oct 6, 2009 Reads: 1108 Comments: 52 Likes: 14
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More perchance LOL
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
AWWWW I WANT TO SEE THEIR REACTIONS NOW! LOL
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
YEA MORE! and yay im first. well sides you but your the author lol
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
oh dang I hope eli's tall haha. can't wait for the next!!
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
:D Do we get the dads reaction and the dance today?? If not I can wait patiently :)
So guess what my step mom found while she was cleaning downstairs. My wedding pictures. How awesome is that, exactly what I want to see right? I think not. Stupid pictures.
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
wow amazing cannot wait 4 the next part
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
Oh that sucks Mallory sorry
I hope to do both reations today Libby
Allie (6ft, Blond Blue eys and wash board abs)
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
woot woot i love cant wait for more
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
I want her and Sean to get together lol. I guess I'm the only one.
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
oooh that image will last me quite some time...
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
hahaha you gonna start calling me libby now? o what the hell works for me. my friends do anyways hahaha
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
wow I loved it ..the dresses look awsome can't wait for more. Keep em coming Kirst
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
ahhh i cnt wait 4 them 2 see her :) eeeeeeeee im excited now!
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
no that was Eli's descrpition
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
I can't wait to see all the guys faces. Pmsl.
'LOVE IT!'
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
oh well still. it's a great image.
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
damn roxy i didnt no u were married, u look soo young
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
I can't wait to see Eli's face! :D
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
Please tell me you're putting in the dance and the dad's reaction today?
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
Not exacly see but you know what I mean :P
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
I was married..not anymore. And I'm only 22. Got married a week after my 20th birthday! But thank you, everyone always tells me I look older then I am. Not what women like to hear haha
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
i like it :) can't wait for the rest
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
O my I can't wait. For the next one I love this so much! Yayyyy I'm so excited :). when is next post?
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
I can't wait to see the looks on their faces! I'm just so excited! Update soon! I guess it'll be tomorrow though...
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
so is the dance chapter gonna be tonight PLZ cause i have abusy schedual and this is what keeps me from going all school crazy !!
this one was great!!
how long?
xx ally
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
i won't be reading at all thursday and prolly friday
:( so.... make em a good next few posts today and tomorrow?
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
working on the next post right now
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
Man, I cannot wait to see/read what Eli's reaction is when he sees her in that dress.
Great chapter!!!
Loved it!!!
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
I forgot to ask how did the football game go last night??
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
THe packers lost AMber stop laughing
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
In how much time will you have the next post up?
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
They lost good lmao. Good game but seriously, the Vikings just rock this season!
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
how long more??
zz allie
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
okay so im guesiing Kirst you support the packers and Mallory supports vikings??
Talk about rivalary on the pages here
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
lmfao that game was awsome!!! it's always nice having two quarter backs on the field. ;)
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
haha well I'm from Minnesota and shes Wisconsin. I support the Vikings before the packers anyday but I don't really have a team that I'm 100% for
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
Like Mallory said She's from MN and i'm in Wisconsin so it a territory thing LOL but i actually don't watch it UTD all the way
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
I agree with you Mallory, I like Sean. I hope Eli the man whore eats his words about Mallory being "one of the guys".
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
Fair enough. I dont understand what you guys call football. It just looks like men tackling each other.
Ill stick to soccer and rugby two sports i do understand lol.
Damn it!!! Calebs awake. Im going to kill my brother Kyle when he comes to get him, he said he'd be asleep for 3 hours.
(Note to self, Tom aint coming anywhere near me unless hes covered.)
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
LMAO YAY somone agrees about Sean
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
Eli is kind of the obvious choice, I'm not really into the obvious choice. I'd like Eli to get all hot for Mallory after what he said and get knocked back by her, lol. Nice kick in the pants for him.
Sean is sweet and doesn't say the crap about Mallory all the others do:)
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
i hope its sean not eli he's too......... obivious. lol .
xx allie
how long more??
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
Exactly thats why I like him! But then again I always root for the underdog..unless its the packers ;)
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
do we get more?
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
oooh roxy that was below the belt haha. for packers fans. Even after everything that happened, I'm still a Brett Favre fan. :)
It would be pretty funny if eli suddenly gets the hots for Mallory then she goes with Sean instead. Or no! Give me Sean! :P
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
Lol, I don't care how obvious it is I LOVE ELI!!!
ELI + MALLORY ALL THE WAY!!!
Update!!!
Sorry, way to much coffee!!!
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
No Allie Seans mine hahaha I called him already!
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
The pinkpony just got an idea.....
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
I can't wait to read more!!!! had haha sean reminds me so much of my friend sean. I hope u update agin today!!!!!
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
how long for an update kirk?
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
haha go rox!!! that was nice :D we viking fans must stick together!!!!!!!
Posted: Oct 6, 2009
omg omg omg can't wait
Posted: Oct 11, 2009
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