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Mallory was one of the guys growing up in the middle of nowhere. Dirt bikes, A.T.V.'s and snowmobiles’ was what she knew. Living with only her Dad and 4 brothers what else was she supposed to be.
The few girl friends she has are getting sick of the Jeans and the hoodie, and the guys see her as nothing more than one of them the girl who could go fishing with them, spend the day under a truck and not bat an eyelid at the crude jokes made at all the Girls expense in they're high school. But her best girlfriend Libby was determind Mallory was going to become the belle of the ball if it killed her................
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Submitted: Oct 9, 2009 Reads: 830 Comments: 34 Likes: 15
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ok i like sam & his description but wat bout eli??? am i the only 1 bein anti eli here? but i dont want sam 2 turn bad either pleaseeeeee
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
Love this story! Update soon please!
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
damn I would wear dress, paint my nails put make up on and do my hair everyday for sam...omg muscles galore and huge tattoo a firefighter so he can handle heat and he's loyal as hell I'm inlove I want to marry sam, hell with steve
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
Please let Sam and Mallory fall in love. Don't make Sam bad.
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
LOVED IT!!!! keep posting. i love how well you developed all your characters!! koodos to Mallory
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
Third? I LOVE SAM. LOVE LOVE LOVE HIM. But I love Eli more, he's just pissed. He loves Mallory. I know it. SO go update! I'm totally dying.
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
Oh my KIRK!
I love SAM! I think Sam should be with Mal!
Also I have a doctors appoinment today at like 1 or 1.30 so I will tell what they said. But I will be here till then.
So me being me, UPDATE SOOOOOOOON!!!!!
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
AWWW...ok maybe i love the fact that shes with a older stronger guy a little ;) hahaaa lol!! love ittt!!
also where did you find this picture? its so cute!! also the one from the shiny night story?
xoxo
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
hahaha I love this. I wanna know what's gonna happen with mal and eli
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
wow i was 1st WOOOOHOOO as i type RJ is on a train home wooo i get 2 see my hottie 2nyt :)
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
poor Eli ):
keep writing!!
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
Lol... Still not swayed either way. Honestly yes Sam seems great but we really don't know the guy yet. Who knows what type of bad habits he might have and Mallory isn't a girl for possessive. Eli must be pissed cause uh... QB, injured hand means no play. I am wondering if you can do some more back story on Sam, I am quite interested in him (of course girls love a guy with tats). Also, do her father and Jorden know about Sam with her. I think that might cause a bit of a stir since he works with them. Goddess knows that if I was dating a truck driver, my truck driving father would turn me away from that in an instant. No father wants their daughter with someone like them. (still don't understand that one) I can't wait to read more you have really caught my interest in this one.
Fyre
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
You are so so mean to end it like that!!!
Poor Eli. Surgery eeep!!! I hope his hand is gunna be okay.
Sam sounds hot, but I'm still Eli + Mallory all the way!!!
(It's a group, we have banners and weekly meetings and everything)
I don't want Sam to turn out to be a jackass, but at the same time I have a very descriptive Eli-saves-Mallory scene playing out in my mind. I mean I know she can definitely look after herself, but if Eli came and saved her from the big bad Sam that would prove that he thinks of her as a girl, a girl he loves and has to protect!!!
I will cry if she ends up with Sam. Tears will actually stream from my eyes and go all over my laptop keyboard and blow my laptop up and then I'll never be able to read any of your stories again... and I noticed just as I wrote that that is sounded suspiciously like a threat which is not how I intended it to come out... or did I?
Moi ha ha
Wow, am I over dramatic or what? Lol.
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
A-mazing! Sam sounds soooo hot! And I love him n all but I dunno I just can't get Eli out of my head!
So as much as I love Sam I love Eli more :) maybe her being with sam will make Eli realise just how much he likes her...
I can't wait to find out where you're going with this story I'm glad you haven't gone straight in with her being with Eli then it would be over too soon and not much of a story! lol
keep up the good work Kirky! Lovin it!
luv Elysha
xxxx
ELI ALL THE WAY :P
xxxx
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
sam
x 10000
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Sam & Mallory
Eli is being an ass
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
oh you guys are so torn between Fireman Sam (It was pointed yesterday i used the name Sam as my 3yr old was watching Fireman sam on TV and i did it without thinking)
YOu're going to have to find out what Sam's like by waiting LOL
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
this could lead 2ways!!
1) it could b1 of those stories where she realises she loves the man whore nd he only slept wit other girls2 4get about her!
2) or she could b happy wit sam nd sort the issues out wit man whore
I WANT NUMBER 2 PLS! I like sam =))
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
How long untill the next post ? I'm not being pushy I'm not sure how long this has been up so I thought I would ask :)
xx
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
lmao yay me and sam :) I want a guy like that damnit!
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
patience has never been my strong suit haha
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
Love it!
It's rocks my sock all the way to the floor!!!
I love Sam!!!
Booo Eli. He's such an ass!!!!
Update soon pleeeeeeeease!! :D
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
Oh fluffy co the the serch engine bing.com and click on images and type in couples then click black and white on the left hand side and it's somewhere in there
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
ahhhh thank you so so much!!!
xoxo
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
I still think Mallory likes Eli..Sam is just a distraction to get over Eli..Please update soon..
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
I'm at school atm. LOL
Amazing Posts Kirst.
I can't wait to read the next ones to come.
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
lmao!!!!!! love it!!!!!!!!! lol!!!!!!!
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
OMG KIRKY!!! I LOVE it! :D
Seriously, I want a guy like Sam. He seems perfect. Key word... "seems"... I guess we dont really know what he is really like do we...
Please update soon dearie! I've read through all your stories now so there is nothing to keep me distracted while I wait for you to update XP
How many do you think you'll get in today?
How's everyone's day going? :)
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
wow i bet Sam looked goooOood lol ... i can't beleive Eli , but if he really cares about her than what the hell is he acting like a dick for ....
i can't beleive i had to leav school early today & go to the ER ... thank god my knee is just swollen though ... i so hope i can still go out tonight with my friends .......
how have you been Kirk????
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
Am I the only person actually for Eli? Like I like Sam and all, but he seems to be just too perfect. Maybe he's a closet murderer or something XD IDK. No one can be that perfect.
I like Eli better :) He seems just as hot to me!
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
ELI ELI ELI ELI ELI!!!!!!
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
Another awesome chapter, now I really feel sorry for Eli.
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
OMG I am totally TEAM SAM HE Is SO HOT HOT HOT
and that TATTOO???? And MUSCLES ahhhhhhhhhh I am so dreaming about him tonight LOL
AMAZINGLY HOT CHAPTER ♥♥♥
Posted: Oct 9, 2009
HOLY!!!!!!! OMG STEAMIE!!!!!! whew! Lol
Posted: Oct 20, 2009
HECK MAN!! I'd take Sam over Eli any day! lol
Posted: Oct 27, 2009
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