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If you wore more than Jeans and a Hoodie

Novel By: Kirkyb
Young Adult


Mallory was one of the guys growing up in the middle of nowhere. Dirt bikes, A.T.V.'s and snowmobiles’ was what she knew. Living with only her Dad and 4 brothers what else was she supposed to be.
The few girl friends she has are getting sick of the Jeans and the hoodie, and the guys see her as nothing more than one of them the girl who could go fishing with them, spend the day under a truck and not bat an eyelid at the crude jokes made at all the Girls expense in they're high school. But her best girlfriend Libby was determind Mallory was going to become the belle of the ball if it killed her................ View table of contents...

Submitted: Oct 9, 2009    Reads: 830    Comments: 34    Likes: 15   


................................ I walked back into the kitchen with Sam as Sean came back in to get his Keys.
 
“I’m taking Eli to the Emergency room” He said.
 
“Take him to the vets and get in neutered instead” I said through my teeth as Sam started to clean up my hand again.
 
‘Down girl” Wes said coming in the kitchen and stroking my head I looked at him.
 
“Guys can you give me 5 minutes please” I said Sean walked out Wes grabbed some chips from the cupboard and went back in to the living room Sam opened his medical kit and started putting they butterflies on my hand
 
“Well that was and experience” he said glancing up at me.
 
“I’m sorry I shouldn’t have behaved myself” I shrugged. “But that fight had been coming”.
 
“You fight with all your friends like that” He said finishing with the butterflies and putting a dressing pad on it and start to bandage it.
 
“If they piss me off to a certain point then yes” I nodded “I’ve got into fist flying fights before now with Jordan”. He taped the bandage.
 
“There you go” he sighed. “If it helps it think you looked amazing and beautiful the other night” I looked at him. “I wanted to leave my uniform and go to the dance with you”.
 
“You know the right things to say at least” I smiled “I’m really sorry you had to…” he cut me off.
 
“Stop being sorry, It takes more than seeing you fighting with a friend to turn me off” he said moving in to kiss me. “At least you’re not one of these girls that needs a guy to fight her battles for her”
 
“She’ll probably fight yours’ for you’ Libby giggled walking in and grabbing some soda’s from the fridge.
 
“Out” I shouted at her.
 
“You want me to take you to the E.R. to get your hand seen to”
 
“No I’ll go in the morning” I smiled “You want to go watch a movie or do you want to go home”.
 
“I’ll watch a movie if that’s okay” I nodded.
 
“What’s the Tattoo by the way” I asked getting off the stool.
 
“You want to see it” he smiled “it’s a big one” he asked as Brandon walked in the kitchen.
 
“Oh wrong time to walk in” he laughed stopping in his tracks and turning round and walking back out of the kitchen.
 
“So like I said you want to see it” he winked .
 
“Sure, how can a girl say no to something like that” Sam pulled off his shirt “Wow” I sighed and I wasn’t looking at his tattoo this guy was ripped you could grate cheese on his abs, he turned round and there was a tribal black phoenix across his shoulders with lames going down his arms to mid bicep.
 
“You were right it is big” I said looking at it “wait there a minute don’t move don’t get dressed” I walked into the living room where the others were all watching a movie. I taped Allie and Libby on the shoulder and leant in between them. “Okay I have Sam in the kitchen half naked you have to come see this” I whispered Allie and Libby jumped up like the couch was on fire and headed for the kitchen at 90 miles and hour both of them getting to the door at the same time and got wedged in the frame I groaned and shook my head talk about being obvious.
 
“Nice tattoo” Libby said managing to get through the door and looking at Sam’s back as he was tiding the medical stuff up Sam looked round at them.
 
“Thank you” he laughed “Mallory you mind if I put my shirt back on” He smirked.
 
“I guess if you’re cold you can” I sighed not wanting him to I could look at him all night Allie walked back past me stopping to whisper something to me.
 
“You’re thinking about him naked right now aren’t you”
 
“Hell yeah” I winked at her. I finished helping with all the medical stuff and we went into the living room and sat watching the rest of the movie. Sean got back a couple of hours later without Eli.
 
“So what happened to him’’ Libby asked.
 
“He’s been taken to surgery he’s busted 4 of his knuckles” Sean shrugged “He’s not happy at all” Sean glanced across at me.
 
“He should watch where he’s going shouldn’t” I shrugged. “You want to go somewhere quieter” I asked feeling uncomfortable about the conversation going back to Eli” I got off the couch and led him up to my room. Sam sat on the bed.
 
“People might talk” he said as I pushed in a movie.
 
“Let them” I shrugged “I just wanted to get to know you some more, and maybe get another one of those kisses you do so well”.
 
“I think I can do that” he leaned forward as I sat on the bed and kissed me holding my face in his hands. I needed to totally block Eli out of my mind, I needed to feel like I was a girl and not just one of the guys.
 
I pulled Sam down till he moved so he was lay next to me on the bed. He leant on one arm and looked at me.
 
“What” I said feeling a little uncomfortable.
 
“Nothing I was wondering where we were going” I pulled a face.
 
“With the storm going on like it is I’m going nowhere”
 
“I meant us. I know I’ve only just met you and got to know you… but you’re so cool even if you have a mean temper” he laughed.
 
“I’d like to see you again” I shrugged.
 
“How about I take you to the game tomorrow” he suggested I nodded.
 
“Okay but you can’t wear any of your old school stuff” I grinned.
 
“Aw no fair” he laughed.
 
“You’re going to be sitting with a bunch of guys from East”
 
‘Good point” he moved closer to me bringing his lips back to mine.
 
I felt his tongue pushing it way between my lips fighting with my own the kiss got deeper and more passionate the longer it went on he pulled back both of us slightly breathless my heart was racing he bent his head again dropping little light kisses along my jaw bone to just below my ear a moan escaped from my lips as he nibbles lightly down the side of my neck making me gasp as his thumb stroked just under my top rubbing along my hip bone I felt like I was tingling all over as he moved so he was holding his weight over me and kissed me full on the lips again. Hell if this is what it felt like being a girl then I’ll sell my snowmobile and all my other things like that and were a skirt every day…………………………….


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Comments:

ok i like sam & his description but wat bout eli??? am i the only 1 bein anti eli here? but i dont want sam 2 turn bad either pleaseeeeee

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

Andi!!!!!!
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Love this story! Update soon please!

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

damn I would wear dress, paint my nails put make up on and do my hair everyday for sam...omg muscles galore and huge tattoo a firefighter so he can handle heat and he's loyal as hell I'm inlove I want to marry sam, hell with steve

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

Andi!!!!!!
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Please let Sam and Mallory fall in love. Don't make Sam bad.

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

rachel
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LOVED IT!!!! keep posting. i love how well you developed all your characters!! koodos to Mallory

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

Third? I LOVE SAM. LOVE LOVE LOVE HIM. But I love Eli more, he's just pissed. He loves Mallory. I know it. SO go update! I'm totally dying.

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

Oh my KIRK!

I love SAM! I think Sam should be with Mal!

Also I have a doctors appoinment today at like 1 or 1.30 so I will tell what they said. But I will be here till then.

So me being me, UPDATE SOOOOOOOON!!!!!

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

XxfluffyxX
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AWWW...ok maybe i love the fact that shes with a older stronger guy a little ;) hahaaa lol!! love ittt!!

also where did you find this picture? its so cute!! also the one from the shiny night story?

xoxo

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

hahaha I love this. I wanna know what's gonna happen with mal and eli

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

wow i was 1st WOOOOHOOO as i type RJ is on a train home wooo i get 2 see my hottie 2nyt :)

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

poor Eli ):
keep writing!!

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

Lol... Still not swayed either way. Honestly yes Sam seems great but we really don't know the guy yet. Who knows what type of bad habits he might have and Mallory isn't a girl for possessive. Eli must be pissed cause uh... QB, injured hand means no play. I am wondering if you can do some more back story on Sam, I am quite interested in him (of course girls love a guy with tats). Also, do her father and Jorden know about Sam with her. I think that might cause a bit of a stir since he works with them. Goddess knows that if I was dating a truck driver, my truck driving father would turn me away from that in an instant. No father wants their daughter with someone like them. (still don't understand that one) I can't wait to read more you have really caught my interest in this one.

Fyre

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

You are so so mean to end it like that!!!
Poor Eli. Surgery eeep!!! I hope his hand is gunna be okay.
Sam sounds hot, but I'm still Eli + Mallory all the way!!!
(It's a group, we have banners and weekly meetings and everything)


I don't want Sam to turn out to be a jackass, but at the same time I have a very descriptive Eli-saves-Mallory scene playing out in my mind. I mean I know she can definitely look after herself, but if Eli came and saved her from the big bad Sam that would prove that he thinks of her as a girl, a girl he loves and has to protect!!!

I will cry if she ends up with Sam. Tears will actually stream from my eyes and go all over my laptop keyboard and blow my laptop up and then I'll never be able to read any of your stories again... and I noticed just as I wrote that that is sounded suspiciously like a threat which is not how I intended it to come out... or did I?


Moi ha ha


Wow, am I over dramatic or what? Lol.

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

A-mazing! Sam sounds soooo hot! And I love him n all but I dunno I just can't get Eli out of my head!

So as much as I love Sam I love Eli more :) maybe her being with sam will make Eli realise just how much he likes her...

I can't wait to find out where you're going with this story I'm glad you haven't gone straight in with her being with Eli then it would be over too soon and not much of a story! lol

keep up the good work Kirky! Lovin it!

luv Elysha
xxxx

ELI ALL THE WAY :P

xxxx

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

sam
x 10000
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Sam & Mallory

Eli is being an ass

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

oh you guys are so torn between Fireman Sam (It was pointed yesterday i used the name Sam as my 3yr old was watching Fireman sam on TV and i did it without thinking)

YOu're going to have to find out what Sam's like by waiting LOL

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

101
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this could lead 2ways!!

1) it could b1 of those stories where she realises she loves the man whore nd he only slept wit other girls2 4get about her!
2) or she could b happy wit sam nd sort the issues out wit man whore

I WANT NUMBER 2 PLS! I like sam =))

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

How long untill the next post ? I'm not being pushy I'm not sure how long this has been up so I thought I would ask :)

xx

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

lmao yay me and sam :) I want a guy like that damnit!

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

patience has never been my strong suit haha

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

Love it!
It's rocks my sock all the way to the floor!!!
I love Sam!!!
Booo Eli. He's such an ass!!!!
Update soon pleeeeeeeease!! :D

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

Oh fluffy co the the serch engine bing.com and click on images and type in couples then click black and white on the left hand side and it's somewhere in there

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

XxfluffyxX
(not registered user)

ahhhh thank you so so much!!!

xoxo

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

I still think Mallory likes Eli..Sam is just a distraction to get over Eli..Please update soon..

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

LittleEvil666 (Signed Off)
(not registered user)

I'm at school atm. LOL
Amazing Posts Kirst.
I can't wait to read the next ones to come.

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

lmao!!!!!! love it!!!!!!!!! lol!!!!!!!

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

Annalise
(not registered user)

OMG KIRKY!!! I LOVE it! :D

Seriously, I want a guy like Sam. He seems perfect. Key word... "seems"... I guess we dont really know what he is really like do we...

Please update soon dearie! I've read through all your stories now so there is nothing to keep me distracted while I wait for you to update XP

How many do you think you'll get in today?

How's everyone's day going? :)

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

wow i bet Sam looked goooOood lol ... i can't beleive Eli , but if he really cares about her than what the hell is he acting like a dick for ....


i can't beleive i had to leav school early today & go to the ER ... thank god my knee is just swollen though ... i so hope i can still go out tonight with my friends .......


how have you been Kirk????

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

Am I the only person actually for Eli? Like I like Sam and all, but he seems to be just too perfect. Maybe he's a closet murderer or something XD IDK. No one can be that perfect.
I like Eli better :) He seems just as hot to me!

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

BUBBLE
(not registered user)

ELI ELI ELI ELI ELI!!!!!!

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

Another awesome chapter, now I really feel sorry for Eli.

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

OMG I am totally TEAM SAM HE Is SO HOT HOT HOT

and that TATTOO???? And MUSCLES ahhhhhhhhhh I am so dreaming about him tonight LOL

AMAZINGLY HOT CHAPTER ♥♥♥

Posted: Oct 9, 2009

HOLY!!!!!!! OMG STEAMIE!!!!!! whew! Lol

Posted: Oct 20, 2009

HECK MAN!! I'd take Sam over Eli any day! lol

Posted: Oct 27, 2009



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