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Mallory was one of the guys growing up in the middle of nowhere. Dirt bikes, A.T.V.'s and snowmobiles’ was what she knew. Living with only her Dad and 4 brothers what else was she supposed to be.
The few girl friends she has are getting sick of the Jeans and the hoodie, and the guys see her as nothing more than one of them the girl who could go fishing with them, spend the day under a truck and not bat an eyelid at the crude jokes made at all the Girls expense in they're high school. But her best girlfriend Libby was determind Mallory was going to become the belle of the ball if it killed her................
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Submitted: Nov 4, 2009 Reads: 984 Comments: 33 Likes: 21
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awe her parents suck!
and I still wanna steal eli
off to school now,
ya'll have a good day
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
ahhh amazingg. so glad ur back! been missing reading these chapters everyday!
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
First comment!!!!! Yeah!!!!! I'm glad you are back.!!!!
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
Her parents need to mind their own business.
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
Darn!!!! They beat me writing.
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
yay first post of the day
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
aww she can't let stupid stuck up people get in the way of her having a good day..
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
i wanna see elis reaction to her dress
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
i'm sorry it smushed up i had to go back and add the tittle to the chapter and it smushes everything together on me :(
Don't worry the reaction is coming soon and sweet Eli xo
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
Yay!!! Youre BACK!!! HEehee!!!
There shall be more chapters soon, no????
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
Rachel's parents are idiots..How can they blame Mallory? She doesn't want that to happen to her..No one wants it to happen to themselves..Stupid bird brains..
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
yes i'm working on the next one my 4 yr old just got back from Pre-K and i had to feed her LOL
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
aww no! thats sad! but it reminds me of my brother & sister-in -law, they had to rent a flat with two bedrooms incase her dad came round & they could say they slept seperately lol.
even when she stayed at my parents house she told her dad that she slept in our computer room which couldnt even fit a single bed in unless we shortened it lol
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
LOL funy Kat Hows RJ and what did he get you for your b/day any sign of a ring ???? :S
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
RJ good, He's managed to book time off work & coming bk on friday for 2 weeks then goes to plymouth & is based there :) so he'll be close by. He got me my favourite perfume Angel & his mum got me a 21 wine glass. Haha no sign of a ring though he's gonna take me on holiday when he gets his pay rise lol
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
nice and does his Mom think you drink or something LOL
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
I love it!!!! its been soo long since i have commented. So overdue. I loved it. lol cant wait for more
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
I love it!!!! its been soo long since i have commented. So overdue. I loved it. lol cant wait for more
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
she knows i drink, she's helped me stagger out of the pub toilets b4 & out of the pub too lol... good impression there!
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
Yay got ot love it when you can be as comfortable drunk as well as sober in front of the in-laws
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
how are you guys today?
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
yea 9/10 times there forcing me 2 get drunk with their home made brew or buying my drinks in the pub lol
& ive just discovered im stupid, i thought i failed all of my exams but i didnt & i just realised now a day b4 my re-sits lol
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
good now i can write again
how was your Halloweeen
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
oh Kat thats rough
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
almost ready to post the next chapter
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
mine was good urs?
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
hey im actualy sneaking on right now from school shhh lol .... can't wait untill i get home later from stage crew to read this chapter & the next .... hope your day is going good Kirk .......
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
i always sneak on during school
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
Hey Kirk!!!
OMG guess what!!!!!!!!
My birthday is in 9 days!!!!
YAY!!
Update again sooon, also any idea what time???? Jw
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
i know right its fun sneaking on & not doing what your supose to lol
Posted: Nov 4, 2009
hmmm, interesting.
Posted: Nov 6, 2009
:( dont u hate it when a day can do that.......?
Posted: Nov 10, 2009
and Rachels parents SUCKKKKKK!!!! GO RACHEL!
Posted: Nov 10, 2009
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