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Black Roses, Silver Thorns Prologue

Novel By: Kirsten Rain
Young Adult


Kairi is about to be married when she finds out a secret. She runs away from her wedding. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jun 23, 2008    Reads: 291    Comments: 30    Likes: 6   


July 9, 2052
            Wedding nights are supposed to be special. You are supposed to go up in front of God and marry the man or woman you love. For me, it wasn’t that simple at first. In my family I guess you’d call it, I was like royalty. So I had to marry a man of equal status. That is where the trouble began. My parents finally found me a groom who was everything I hated and more. He was a Blood Feeder. A horrid Human sucking Blood Feeder. I didn’t care for drinking Human blood but then again I was a Hemophage. I didn’t need to drink Human blood to survive. I could eat regular food or suck emotions, like my father. He is an Emotion Stealer. He feeds off of the emotions of Humans and animals.
            When I say that they feed off things like emotions and blood, I mean we are all parasites. Vampires are the Human’s term for people like us. Most of us were born like this, hence why we are royalty. The ones that were turned into Vampires are accidents. Meaning, one of us tried to suck their blood and instead turned them into a Vampire. Whether you are an Emotion Stealer or a Blood Feeder depends on your parents just as your gender does. Not many people know that.
            If you are a Human reader then I want to stress to you the importance of taking the time to read my story. It is important for you to learn how I became the way I am right now. I was always a Hemophage which made me a bit different but I wanted to be something more. I wanted to be Human. There was only one way I could become Human. If I fell in love with a Werewolf and he fell in love with me. Silly I know but that was the rule. So most Vampires took careful precaution on who they fell in love with. Others didn’t care and ended up being Human. Then again none of them belonged to a royal pure blooded family like the Robinsons.     
            The Robinsons, I would be the last to admit they are my family. But sadly they are my blood parents. Anyone would actually want to be related to them but I didn’t. My family consists of one sister, two brothers, a mom, and a dad who I don’t know much about. James Adams is my 17 year old brother. He has always had a temper but only I can cool it down. Michael Edwards is my 11 year old brother. He is the only Vampire with poisonous venomous fangs. Jessica May is my 13 year old sister. She is a miniature version of my mom, with the style, grace, and attitude. My mom, Lily Marie, is 46 I think. She is an older version of my sister. Finally my dad, Noah Lewis, he is 47 years old and the only Emotion Stealer I know.  
            Now about the guy I was to marry. Daniel Michael Andrews was like any other Vampire. He drank Human blood and thought he was the hottest thing in the world.  I guess he was with his beach blonde hair, his six pack abs, and his ash eyes. I didn’t like his arrogance or his so called charms. They weren’t my style. He scared me to the point of walking out of the wedding. That is when he found me but I’ll tell you about that later.
            My ambition was to be Human. My destiny was to meet him. My parents thought crazy for wanting to be with a Werewolf but that didn’t matter to me. I kept a notebook of all of my dreams. I lost it soon before the wedding. I couldn’t remember the mystery boy after that. It nearly broke my heart.
Soon my dreams were filled with wedding plans and me leaving the wedding completely. I knew how my family would take such dreams but I didn’t care. Being Human was what I always thought I was born to be. I thought my parents were mad when they told me about my origins when I was old enough to understand. I couldn’t believe I was a monster. When I was fourteen I started to wear black in my depression. It only lasted a year when I realized that was normal adolescent Vampire behavior. A year later I started listening to Human boy bands to clear my mind. That was the year my marriage was purposed. The following year I was to be married.
            So friends enjoy this tale of my life, for I am Kairi Rosella Robinson and I wish for you to know everything.
 
 


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Comments:

the proloigue's good..............i hope the story turns up even better!!

great job

~Kritika

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha Thanx.

Ooooo! This is AWESOME!! If the prologue is this good, I can't imagine how good the actual story will be! :D

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Catherine. I'll be posting the first chapter tomorrow afternoon. So stay tuned :)

GOOD JOB!!! I adored it! I hope u will keep me posted on any developments to this story!!! Thanks!

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you and don't worry I'll keep you posted. =)

Ooh, I like it. It's interesting, and I can't wait to find out more.

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. I'll be posting more later today =)

Great..............................I really liked it.....keep up the good work.

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks :)

That was the year my marriage was purposed. The following year I was to be married.

It should be proposed* not purposed lol.
I like the names you use in the story, idk why. =P
I really like it so far just one thing I don't get.
-How can a vampire become human for simply marrying a werewolf? Honestly that makes no sense at all to me but I like the creativity. I reallllllly like this story so far because I like vampires so much. I can tell this is going to be good. =]

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

She is a Hemophage. A special type of Vampire as she has mentioned and so if she falls in love with a werewolf and one falls for her. She can be Human. Hope that helped :)

ahhh how's this for a comment haha I liked it very much miss kirstenrain I'm very much interested keep me posted !!

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

aww thank you very much Mister JamesDavis The next three chapters are us as well. lol

Oooh this looks really good. I'm going to go read more of it now and maybe add a few more comments along the way...by the by, if you have a chance, and feel like reading another vampire story, I have one called Blackberry Coven. There are five chapters up now, but there will be more coming soon.

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

okay i'll be sure to take a look :)

woah! sounds intense!
Will read more :)

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you :)

Oooh this looks really good. I'm going to go read more of it now and maybe add a few more comments along the way.

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you :)

Great job! It was such a great opening. I loved it ^^

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks :) I hope you read the rest :)

This is really good! Continue please!

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks :)

So far this is looking really good. I couldn't help but notice some grammatical errors, but otherwise this story has so much potential. I can't wait to read more!

Oh, if you should ever like to have someone look over your drafts and proofread them for you, I wouldn't mind at all. It's kind of like a hobby for me. :) I'm not trying to sound pretentious or anything, though.

My new chapter of what was formally known as "Vampires Don't Cry" is up too. Check it out when you have the chance!

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks and will do

Very interesting and different! Good job. Well-written and creative.

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

omg thanks :)

WOW! this is realllly good! Very complicated! I l.i.k.e it! Great JOB! : D

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks :D

hi Kursten, i read ur stiory. and luved it. its awsome.i luv such type of stories containing vampires.
its tooooooooooo gud.lovely.keep writing such gud stories and amaze me.
luv Iqra

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you

AWESOME!!! cant wait to read the story

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you :)

oh wow. this is a very interesting concept you have going with the emotion stealers and blood feeders. not bad of a prologue. i wasnt too gripped. that wont stop me from reading though ^^
onwards!

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you :)

Wow. this is spectacular. Very originally written.

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you :)

Intriguing opening! What a great expression of your imagination. I look forward to reading more.

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you there are about 17 other chapters :P

Great prologue! reading the rest now =)

Posted: Jul 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks you rose!

wow this is really interesting keep up the good work!

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you :)

lucialian
(not registered user)

wow nice job

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Lucia!

amazing opening
Love the main charactor so far
:]
off to the next chapter

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!

How old is Kairi?? i like the story...alot. =)

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. She is about 16

Hi ms Rain! (sry, i couldn't post this in ur comments cause it wouldn't let me. It said they were diconected or somthing! strange...) Anyways, I have some bad news; I'm going to be leaving booksie for a while. I'm not sure when i'm going to be joining back on. Just wanted to tell u bye! I have already posted it on my page.
..sigh..
I'll be back in 5 monthes at the least.
Luv ya girl!
(AIM me anytime! I'm almost always on chattin' w/ my buds!)

l8er,
Sarah Rain

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Awww okay I'll msg you cya!

Kewl openeing! can't wait to read more!

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

There is more

interesting.....

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks

loved it...please update...please?

Posted: Sep 16, 2008

Author Comment:

lol Addie I did

hi! kirsten. this is a very promising story. kairi is coming to know herself. u've an amazing eye for detail that adds to the story. engrossing fare. lol. ;-)

Posted: Nov 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha thanks! It's finished now lol.



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