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Kairi is about to be married when she finds out a secret. She runs away from her wedding. View table of contents...
Submitted: Jun 23, 2008 Reads: 291 Comments: 30 Likes: 6
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the proloigue's good..............i hope the story turns up even better!!
great job
~Kritika
Posted: Jun 23, 2008
Ooooo! This is AWESOME!! If the prologue is this good, I can't imagine how good the actual story will be! :D
Posted: Jun 23, 2008
GOOD JOB!!! I adored it! I hope u will keep me posted on any developments to this story!!! Thanks!
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
Ooh, I like it. It's interesting, and I can't wait to find out more.
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
Great..............................I really liked it.....keep up the good work.
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
That was the year my marriage was purposed. The following year I was to be married.
It should be proposed* not purposed lol.
I like the names you use in the story, idk why. =P
I really like it so far just one thing I don't get.
-How can a vampire become human for simply marrying a werewolf? Honestly that makes no sense at all to me but I like the creativity. I reallllllly like this story so far because I like vampires so much. I can tell this is going to be good. =]
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
ahhh how's this for a comment haha I liked it very much miss kirstenrain I'm very much interested keep me posted !!
Posted: Jun 26, 2008
Oooh this looks really good. I'm going to go read more of it now and maybe add a few more comments along the way...by the by, if you have a chance, and feel like reading another vampire story, I have one called Blackberry Coven. There are five chapters up now, but there will be more coming soon.
Posted: Jun 26, 2008
woah! sounds intense!
Will read more :)
Posted: Jun 27, 2008
Oooh this looks really good. I'm going to go read more of it now and maybe add a few more comments along the way.
Posted: Jun 29, 2008
Great job! It was such a great opening. I loved it ^^
Posted: Jun 29, 2008
This is really good! Continue please!
Posted: Jun 29, 2008
So far this is looking really good. I couldn't help but notice some grammatical errors, but otherwise this story has so much potential. I can't wait to read more!
Oh, if you should ever like to have someone look over your drafts and proofread them for you, I wouldn't mind at all. It's kind of like a hobby for me. :) I'm not trying to sound pretentious or anything, though.
My new chapter of what was formally known as "Vampires Don't Cry" is up too. Check it out when you have the chance!
Posted: Jun 29, 2008
Very interesting and different! Good job. Well-written and creative.
Posted: Jul 1, 2008
WOW! this is realllly good! Very complicated! I l.i.k.e it! Great JOB! : D
Posted: Jul 1, 2008
hi Kursten, i read ur stiory. and luved it. its awsome.i luv such type of stories containing vampires.
its tooooooooooo gud.lovely.keep writing such gud stories and amaze me.
luv Iqra
Posted: Jul 1, 2008
AWESOME!!! cant wait to read the story
Posted: Jul 1, 2008
oh wow. this is a very interesting concept you have going with the emotion stealers and blood feeders. not bad of a prologue. i wasnt too gripped. that wont stop me from reading though ^^
onwards!
Posted: Jul 2, 2008
Wow. this is spectacular. Very originally written.
Posted: Jul 2, 2008
Intriguing opening! What a great expression of your imagination. I look forward to reading more.
Posted: Jul 5, 2008
Great prologue! reading the rest now =)
Posted: Jul 10, 2008
wow this is really interesting keep up the good work!
Posted: Jul 11, 2008
wow nice job
Posted: Jul 11, 2008
amazing opening
Love the main charactor so far
:]
off to the next chapter
Posted: Jul 11, 2008
How old is Kairi?? i like the story...alot. =)
Posted: Jul 17, 2008
Hi ms Rain! (sry, i couldn't post this in ur comments cause it wouldn't let me. It said they were diconected or somthing! strange...) Anyways, I have some bad news; I'm going to be leaving booksie for a while. I'm not sure when i'm going to be joining back on. Just wanted to tell u bye! I have already posted it on my page.
..sigh..
I'll be back in 5 monthes at the least.
Luv ya girl!
(AIM me anytime! I'm almost always on chattin' w/ my buds!)
l8er,
Sarah Rain
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
Kewl openeing! can't wait to read more!
Posted: Aug 6, 2008
interesting.....
Posted: Aug 10, 2008
loved it...please update...please?
Posted: Sep 16, 2008
hi! kirsten. this is a very promising story. kairi is coming to know herself. u've an amazing eye for detail that adds to the story. engrossing fare. lol. ;-)
Posted: Nov 22, 2008
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