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Kairi is about to be married when she finds out a secret. She runs away from her wedding. View table of contents...
Submitted: Jun 29, 2008 Reads: 108 Comments: 10 Likes: 1
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...and more with the breaking of my heart!!! what is this? *sigh* it would be sooo sad if Kataro/Jeremy dies at the end, but it would still be a really, really good story. so if that's what you had planned anyway, it's okay. i forgive you now. of course, if he doesn't die, that would be awesome, too. ^_^ In any case, I'm happy that he's going after Kairi.
P.S. Did you ever read the manga Princess Ai? As soon as you said she was Princess Ai of Hell, it made me think of that. I don't think the manga character was the princess of Hell, exactly, but it was something like that...
Posted: Jun 29, 2008
darn princess ai! i wanted them to happy together!
~Lemon
Posted: Jun 29, 2008
it would be sooo sad if Kataro/Jeremy dies at the end, but it would still be a really, really good story.
Posted: Jun 29, 2008
Wow. This is really good. You are a talented writer! Keep up the good work!
Posted: Jun 29, 2008
Damn...Jeremy/Kataro should stop overreacting!
This is sad...i hope they are like reunited or something.
Oh, by the way, I love how Princess Ai just kinda comes out and is like Okay, if she lives you die. Sign here and here and okay lets go.
Lol nice :]
Posted: Jun 29, 2008
:( hey, no dying of star-crossed lovers allowed:) lol. off to read the next chapter...
Posted: Jun 30, 2008
OoOoOoooOO.
Go werewolves to the rescue! *plays mission impossible theme*
Hahaha. :d But yes, hopefully Kataro doesnt die at the end cuz I'll be mad!
:d Moooore.
Posted: Jun 30, 2008
GOOD IMAGINATION. I LIKED IT!
Posted: Jun 30, 2008
darling is sooooooo righhttt
I don't want him too diieee
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Posted: Jul 11, 2008
Why are guys always stupid? they want to give up their lives to rescue the girl but what they don't figure is that we can't live with out them!
Posted: Aug 6, 2008
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