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Black Roses, Silver Thorns Prologue

Novel By: Kirsten Rain
Young Adult


Kairi is about to be married when she finds out a secret. She runs away from her wedding. View table of contents...

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1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18

Submitted: Jun 30, 2008    Reads: 102    Comments: 13    Likes: 1   


A voice from the crowd yelled. There he was him and his Werewolf buddies. They burst open the doors and crashed my wedding. I never thought I could be anymore happier. He looked sullen and determined to stop the wedding. I wanted to run out to him and wrap my arms around him but I knew better. He guests were in outrage. Pastor Hiro stepped back and Daniel stepped forward.
            “So pup you think you can crash my wedding and steal my bride?” Daniel’s voice held a trace of annoyance.
            “That’s right leech. I want your bride for myself. So how about we settle this man to man?” Kataro sneered right back. Daniel walked down to Kataro’s level and punched him square in the jaw. The guests gasped. Kataro kicked Daniel in the balls. Daniel fell to the ground. The guests watched in fear. Kataro kicked Daniel a few more times before Daniel passed out. The crowd froze. Kataro’s eyes connected with mine. I started to melt. He jogged up to me and took me in his arms.
            “I’m stupid I am so stupid Kairi please forgive me,” Kataro begged me. I smiled at him.
            “I will only if you kiss me first,” I flirted. Kataro leaned over and kissed me. The kiss was like an electric shock running through my whole body in a good way.
            “I now pronounce you man and wife,” Pastor Hiro said looking fondly at Kataro and me. I smiled at him.
            “You’re safe now. I guess you’re my wife as well,” Kataro grinned like he had won the lottery. Kataro’s expression turned to pain as he clutched his heart.
            “No…no,” Angel ran up the aisle to comfort me.
            “What is happening to him?” I half shouted at her. Angel looked at me with a mournful face. She told me how Kataro gave his life to ensure I would be safe. I broke down crying. I felt a hand on my shoulder. I turned around. It was a female that I didn’t recognize before. Her eyes were a bright green and her hair was a chocolate brown.  I leaned my head to his chest and listened for a heart beat. There was none. Kataro was dead.


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Comments:

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NO NO NO!!!!!!!!!! he cant die! he cant frigging die! He isnt dead okay? he just isnt! ohhhh write more soon! =) Mandy

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

Author Comment:

hehehe I will dont worry

ahhh!! NO!
He cant die! :[

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

Author Comment:

mwahahahahahahaha *plays disney theme* huh? That isnt right. I need to get this theme music fixed.

wow.
how on earth is he going to get out of that one?
because, of course, he will right?
i didn't comment on the rest cos i was too busy reading - i had a lot to catch up on.
it just keeps getting better and better. at the rate you write i've no doubt it'll be finished soon lol.
i noticed some of your dialogue sounded a bit stilted though because you often leave out abbreviations i.e. "he is" instead of "he's" "there is" instead of "there's". for your setting and characters i just think it'd be more appropriate to chnage it a bit.
:]

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

Author Comment:

lol. I get so busy writing I dont notice that. Thatnks for pointing it out.

WHAT THE HELL!
Yes, I should have seen that coming. He was gonna die. But STILL!
=.=
Write more soon, pleaseee. SOON!

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

Author Comment:

I will I promise.

gosh darnit!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lemon

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Sorry :(

KATARO DIED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*Sobs uncontrolablly and curls up into a ball* :(

please do sumthing!!!

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Awww did I make you cry? I'm sorry :( I'm working on it

nuuuuuu!!!!!!
><
nuuuu!!!!

thanks for telling me about this novel. it's amazing!!! ^^-

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Your welcome :)

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

sorry Catherine :( Read then next chapter :)

T_T *sniffles all the way to the next chapter...*

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

awww :( sorry

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! *cough*
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted: Jul 4, 2008

Author Comment:

I had to do it :(

Ah!! He can't die!! =/ Great job! You are very talented :D

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes he can lol. Thank you =D

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
wait till death do us part?
maybe thats it
BUT NOOOOOOOOOOO

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

*bows head in respect* sorry

That is just so wrong! so wrong!

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

sorry



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