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Kairi is about to be married when she finds out a secret. She runs away from her wedding. View table of contents...
Submitted: Jun 30, 2008 Reads: 102 Comments: 13 Likes: 1
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NO NO NO!!!!!!!!!! he cant die! he cant frigging die! He isnt dead okay? he just isnt! ohhhh write more soon! =) Mandy
Posted: Jun 30, 2008
ahhh!! NO!
He cant die! :[
Posted: Jun 30, 2008
wow.
how on earth is he going to get out of that one?
because, of course, he will right?
i didn't comment on the rest cos i was too busy reading - i had a lot to catch up on.
it just keeps getting better and better. at the rate you write i've no doubt it'll be finished soon lol.
i noticed some of your dialogue sounded a bit stilted though because you often leave out abbreviations i.e. "he is" instead of "he's" "there is" instead of "there's". for your setting and characters i just think it'd be more appropriate to chnage it a bit.
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Posted: Jun 30, 2008
WHAT THE HELL!
Yes, I should have seen that coming. He was gonna die. But STILL!
=.=
Write more soon, pleaseee. SOON!
Posted: Jun 30, 2008
gosh darnit!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lemon
Posted: Jun 30, 2008
KATARO DIED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Sobs uncontrolablly and curls up into a ball* :(
please do sumthing!!!
Posted: Jul 1, 2008
nuuuuuu!!!!!!
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nuuuu!!!!
thanks for telling me about this novel. it's amazing!!! ^^-
Posted: Jul 1, 2008
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted: Jul 1, 2008
T_T *sniffles all the way to the next chapter...*
Posted: Jul 2, 2008
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! *cough*
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted: Jul 4, 2008
Ah!! He can't die!! =/ Great job! You are very talented :D
Posted: Jul 5, 2008
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
wait till death do us part?
maybe thats it
BUT NOOOOOOOOOOO
Posted: Jul 11, 2008
That is just so wrong! so wrong!
Posted: Aug 10, 2008
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