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I love her! Don't I?

Novel By: marsprincess
Young Adult


Continuing off from I don't like him!Do I? excpet with a certain twist. Instead of it being in Lizzie's point of view, it is in Jake's. Jake struggles with figuring out if Lizzie is the right one for him. He starts to go through dilemnas that leaves him confused and worried that thier relationship wasnt going as he had planned. They start to drift apart, the only question left was if he loved her? View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jun 15, 2007    Reads: 816    Comments: 13    Likes: 1   


 

          "It's not serious, he's actually one of the lucky ones, since his right ankle wasn't as severely injured as the left one, the right ankle will take two weeks to heal, the left one, will take longer, about six weeks," Doctor Simon explained.

 

          "He'll have to stay out of school for about two weeks, until his right ankle is healed, then he can use crutches and go to school," he said.

 

          "Can he be home by today?" My mom asked.

 

          "Yes, just make sure he gets plenty of rest and he shouldn't have any interruptions from his friends while he is healing," he added.

 

          My mom nodded showing she understood, but I didn't agree.

 

          "Wait, so I can't call Lizzie?" I asked in disbelief.

 

          "Who's Lizzie," asked Doctor Simon. "His girlfriend," my mom answered for me.

 

          "I would think it's best if you don't," he explained to me. "This is ridiculous, I didn't ask for this to happen to me, and I didn't think it would result to me not talking to Lizzie," I argued.

 

          "Honey the doctor said its best, it doesn't matter anyway because you are not allowed to speak or see anybody including Lizzie because of your punishment," she said.

 

          "Punishment, I didn't do anything," I said.

 

          "Yes you did, you didn't think you'd get away that easily," she said. "I can't believe you would do that, I have to call Lizzie everyday, and you are not going to stop me," I said.

 

           "Doctor, can you excuse us please," said my mom turning to the doctor.

 

          "Of course," he answered and left us. I looked at my mom angrily testing her to go on.

 

          "Jake don't make a big scene about this, the doctor thought it would be best if nobody-," but I cut her off.

 

          "Wait right there, so I cant call or see any of my friends including Lizzie just because I got hurt on the ramp in the park," I said trying to understand.

 

          "Yes, and because you decided to do this stunt, your grounded," she said simply.

 

          "I understand not seeing my other friends, but ma, Lizzie, I'm calling her as soon as we get home," I said.

 

          "Another thing, your cell phone is being taken away," she added holding out her hand. I couldn't believe she was doing this. Taking away my phone was pushing it a bit.

 

          I took my cell phone out of my pocket and handed it to her. She smiled. "I'm glad you are taking this seriously, I don't want to upset you sweetie, I just think-."

 

          "It's best, I know," I said.

 

          "Honey you sprained both your ankles, I don't think you want Lizzie worrying over you," she said.

 

          "I can't even tell her what happened?" I asked. "If she calls, I'll tell her you can't talk, she's a smart girl, she'll figure out that you need some time alone," she said.

 

          "Ma, you're taking this way too far," I said. "Are you ready to go, your wheel chair is outside," said Doctor Simon peeking his head through the door.

 

          "Alright," said my mom. I knew that whatever I was going to say didn't matter, because she had already made up her mind on everything.

 

              *************************************

 

 

          I've been in bed for almost a week now without talking to Lizzie. I have officially gone insane. My moms been brining me the school work I've been missing this past week.

 

          I couldn't take this anymore, it was a stupid stunt. My friend George had done it so I thought I could. We were in the park and we were near the skating ramps. We all had our skateboards so we thought we should try some tricks.

 

          I being the idiot I am saw George do it, so I thought I should try it too. I mean if George could do it, so could I. But I was wrong. I fell straight down instead of skating down.

 

          And now here I was, with two sprained ankles confined to my bed until I was healed. I can't really get anywhere around the house since I cant walk. So I've been living in my room this past week.

 

          I've tried reasoning with my mom about talking to Lizzie, but she just wouldn't budge. She said that I could call her next week when I'm "more healed." This is bullshit if you ask me.

 

          But I have agreed with her terms. Now the only thing left to do, is figure out what I was going to do today? But before I could even think, I heard the doorbell ring.

 

          I wondered who it could be. I listened closely as my mom answered the door. "Hello Mrs. Commings," I heard a sweet voice ask.

 

          I could have recognized that voice anywhere, it was Lizzie...


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Comments:

OETER WANNABE.... yes he is

thats peter =( lmao jkk]

even though he is lol

newayyy

damn both his anklesssss

wat the heel,w at a freak lol

breaking all his bones lol

wierdo lmfaoo

omg i lvoe jake, he is awesome

man i want him so bad

.... wat am i tlking bout i already HAVE him lmfaooo

ok, more now

and write 2 starlem

since u just reminded me, he is a grl lmfaoooo

ok ill go now

Posted: Jun 15, 2007

Author Comment:

ur like contradicting urself about wat u think of jake, at first ur like hes a wierdo breaking all his bones and then ur like i love jake he is awesome, lmao, wat the hell make up ur mind, and since i know ur going to be bugging me about it, ABEER IS THE ONE THAT HELPED ME WITH THE NAME OF THIS BOOK THAT IM WRITING NOW! there happy abeer, gosh, lol, and u dont have him lol, ima go now, lol =)

aww man
thats all that happend
i was hoping he got his assed kicked or sumting
lol
and i like it from jakes point of view
its cute =)

Posted: Jun 15, 2007

Author Comment:

lol, awww, thanks alyssa, i was worried that ud be like wtf? lol but yea im gladu liked it, and no he didnt get his ass kicked, he would be the one kicking ass, lmao =)

AWW

this is from jakes oint of view mad cute.

cant wait till u wrte more like juicy stuff

and damn he stuck in his room how damn boring.

and his madre is being a bitch why cant he tell lizie that he cant be bothered while ehs healing so she dont have to worry dammit.

Gosh stupid mother.

Posted: Jun 15, 2007

Author Comment:

lol, yes i know, the mother is being veryu difficult, but u know how mothers get, they want to like do everything to keep thier children better and stuff, but yea, awww, u liked it in his point of view, yay lol ill have more up soon, dont worry the juicy stuff is just around the corner =)

i hate his stupid mother. poor lizzie worrying her head off n thinking he was cheating on her. love the icon pic. lol HOTIEE

Posted: Jun 15, 2007

Author Comment:

lmao, thanx faten, im gladu liked it, u know cuz u were the one who was like with me wen i wrote i dont like him! do i? so yea, i wanted to hear ur opinion, and thankfully its a good opinion, so im doing good so far? wooo, yay, go me, lmao, sorry, lol, but yea ill write more soon =)

ohhhhhh come on! oh! she meaning the mom isnt going to let her talk to Jake!!!!!! ahhhhhh no evil mom! now officially hate her. she better let Lizzie see Jake!!!!!!!! she better! ohhhhh cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

Posted: Jun 15, 2007

Author Comment:

lol, yes i know u wanted lizzie to see jake, but lol, i just couldnt resist making his mother like that, lol, i hope u dont hate me =( lol, but ill write more soon i promise, =)

What the hell is wrong with the mom? I mean gosh. [Excuse my language] What does she have against Lizzie anyways.

I'm glad that you decided to make a sequel to 'I don't like him! Do I?' :P Besides, the guy in the picture is pretty hot. :P

-SnowQueen

Posted: Jun 15, 2007

Author Comment:

omg, lol, hes hott right, lol, well yea i just had to make jake hott, lol, but yea, i know the mom is being evil, everyone is on my case about that, but i just had to do it like that, lol, and im glad ur happy i made a sequal, it means a lot, =) ill have more up soon =)

oohhh so thats what happened to jake...

i thought that doosh was ignoring her on purpose.

well awww i feel bad for him

and i dont get why his idiot mom wouldnt tell lizzie that he broke his ankles

i mean i get she doesnt want her to worry but by saying "he cant talk" makes her worry even more so if she just told her whhhyyyy he couldnt talk that would get rid of the suspense for lizzie


stupid mom

oh well

great chapter!!


more soon!!



-LeenaLeto

Posted: Jun 16, 2007

Author Comment:

lol, yes i know the mom...the mom was being mean and all, but ull see wat happens next, lmao, im so glad u liked it, im happy that everyone does, to tell u the truth i was scared they wouldnt like it in jakes point of view, but im glad they did especially u, lol, oh yea one question, weh r u going to write more in ur story?????? =)

WoooHooo finally a GREAT start to the new chapter and i am soo loving it from Jake's point of view, this story should be veeery interesting. And poor Lizzie thinking he's cheating on her or something when really he's just in bed... lazy ass lol :P Great new start to the story!

Becky xx

Posted: Jun 16, 2007

Author Comment:

thanks so much, im glad ur loving this lol, i thought it would be a change to do it in jakes point of view, thanks again =)

YUS..!! A sequal. this way, I wont have a completly boring summer, because I will be reading this!!! whee!

anywho, great chapter. jake's mother is a FREAK. I cant beleive she wont even tell lizzie whats going on, I wish she would drop dead at the door, then jake could limp down the stairs and tell lizzie how much he missed her.

that would give that girl who calls herself a mother what she deserves! lmao.

hey, rawan.... could you like, put more up, like.... NOW?!?!!

Xx ash xX

Posted: Jun 16, 2007

Author Comment:

lol, well the second chapter is up now, so i guess u can go read that, lol, im glad this story will not keep u bored over the summer, lol, and yes jakes mother is being a total freak, but ull see wat happens in the next one =)

AHHHHHHHHHHHH! A SEQUEL!


I LOVE IT!!! this is great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

But I am gonna miss Lizzie.... I hope Jake doesn't fall for someone else!!!

I'm on to the next chapter!

Posted: Jun 18, 2007

Author Comment:

lol, good, keep going, and im glad u love it =)

What a guy!! Breaks both his ankles..and geez why does his mom have to be so rude!!

Posted: Aug 22, 2007

Author Comment:

lol i know but i guess shes overprotective =) moms tend to do that

umm.... yeah. I just wanted to let you know...

ITS BEEN A WEEK!!!

and you still dont have the next chapter up! :(

Posted: Sep 27, 2007

Author Comment:

im sorry im trying my best here, ive been crammed with lots of hw and stuff i started the chapter though
if it makes u feel any better i dont have anything to do tomorrowso ill post it then ok? =)

HEYYYY people are reading this too!!! (lol) bt honestly update... N what the hell with Lizzie cheating???

Posted: Nov 17, 2007

Author Comment:

lol wow ur reading this story too now haha well i havent updated to this one in a veeeeeeeeeeeeeery long time so ill see =)



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