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Enchanting Reality

Novel By: MusikLover13
Young Adult


When Grace finds a tiny door at the end of her room, she decided to go for it, but can she handle what's on the other end? A Best friend. Her Arch Enemy and the cutest boy she's ever met? But it's not all fun and games when she's forced to face her fears to save her world in times of need. It really is an Enchanting Reallity! View table of contents...

Chapters:

1 2 3 4

Submitted: Jul 16, 2008    Reads: 117    Comments: 7    Likes: 3   


Chapter 1

“Shut up! I can’t here them!” Taryn scolded.

Taryn gently pressed her large, newly pierced ears against her parents old wooden bedroom door attempting to catch a little of whatever they were hiding from her.
Looking back she could see her youngest brother, Toby, running towards her with a red blanket tied to his neck screaming “Mommy! Tarry said a bad word!!”
From that point on Taryn knew it wouldn’t be long before her parents showed up out the door and scold her for telling a three year old to shut up. She didn’t care about being scold, she just hoped they’d tell her what they were hiding from her. It would have been a lot easier than ease dropping which most of the time didn’t work because she was either caught or couldn’t hear anything.
“What in the name of Christ is going on out here and why are you sitting infront of our bedroom door.” Taryn’s mom, Brenda, asked loudly.
Taryn dared not to look up. Her mother was standing over her in her dark pink silk Sex Gown. Her hair was wrapped in a messy bun and her feet were invaded by pink bunny slippers that looked like they were spit up by a dog.
“Mommy! Mommy! She told me to shut up!”
Toby’svoice cried out. His long brunette hair covered his dark hazel eyes that would close at any moment in hopes of sleep.
Wrapping her arms around Toby, Brenda picked him up whispered some things in his ear. He seemed to be understanding and didn’t say another word.
“Taryn Penelope Brenson get up now!” Brenda commended.
With no hesitations she did as she was told. Her long black hair dangled and caught on her eyelashes and her eyes gazed everywhere, except where they needed to be.
“What the hell were you doing?” She asked calmly.
Usually her mom would have said heck infront of Toby, but seeing as he was fast asleep, she didn’t care.
“Trying to find out what you and dad are hiding from me. You act so Hostile in the morning and then scold me for random things that mount to nothing!” Taryn explained.

Taryn could tell her mother was taking what she said into consideration, because she didn’t say anything immediately after she was done talking.

“It’s 12 am, can we please talk about this in the morning?” Brenda begged. “I promise I’ll explain it in the morning what it is we were being so ‘Hostile’ about.” She continued.
There was little time for Taryn to reply to her mother’s plead until she started to feel sick and faint, but there was no time to worry about that, tomorrow was her first day of High School and she was determined not to miss it!
Meanwhile, her father erupted from their room and whisked Toby away to his room silently.

“Night Mom!” Taryn screamed from her doorway.

"Mhm." Brenda moaned back.

Taryn usually never felt faint or sick the night before school and hoped it wasn’t anything to keep her from going. Quietly she slipped into her sheep pajamas that she had gotten that Christmas before and tied her hair up in a ribbon to match when she noticed an odd small door at the right corner of her room.

Taryn was pretty sure that door was not there before, after all she walks in her room day in and day out, so of course she would know. She’d go in, but the door was only mouse size and she hated the sight of mice. The door was light brown and reminded her of the doors they used in prison chambers on movies.
Listening in she could tell everyone was back to sleep, which gave Taryn the pleasure of doing whatever she pleased.

Walking up to the door Taryn place her eye close to the door to see if anything was inside,ofcourse there was no light so it was a prettysafe bet that no one was inside the small room.

Listening to the howling wind coming from the door, she tried to think of how she would explain this to everyone without them laughing in her face.Besides, it wasn't everyday that everyone was being sucked in by a odd door in their room.

Wasting no time, Taryn quickly allowed the door to suck her in and spit herout onto the dark and hard floor where many otherpeople her age also layed. Five of which were from her grade and one was her BFF.

"Dude get off me!" A voice demanded. It sounded short of air which scared Taryn, forcing herself off of him.

"Next time try saying please or I might just shorten that life of yours." Taryn warned. She was actually known to be a good fighter and threatened people alot, but never actually backed her words up.

There was a sudden silence between the two as the got up and cleaned themselves off. Taryn was slow to look up since she could feel his eyes staring at her.

"Hey! Stop staring at me like that." Taryn screamed.

"Like what?!" He added.

"You were staring at my chest you pig."

Taryn knew she sounded insane, but she had to say something. For centuries women had been treated like objects, but Taryn was not an object so to speak and would not be treated like one. Luckily by this time they were about to find out why they were sucked in.

"Welcome to class. Take a seat and I will explain everything!" The lady asked politely.

Taking her seat Taryn began to wonder how things could get any worse and why that guy kept staring at her.


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Comments:

Hey cool! I hope you keep on writing. (:

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you and I will be working one the second Chapter today. =3

shyanne warren [aka- erika tristens]
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wow, i like it idont think you should change anything except the typos

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank You so much! That really means alot to me, because I was very close to putting down the pen. If only everyone felt the way you did. Hmm...

yonaika
(not registered user)

Alrite, dont take it the wrong way, i am jsut grammatically and typo correcting!
it is a cool story otherwise!!

It would have been a lot easier than ease dropping which most of the time didn’t work because she was either caught or couldn’t hear anything. --> take off everything after the which. It gets too complicated. and i think it is eaves- dropping.

In the first sentence here --> hear

Brenda picked him up whispered some things in his ear. --> put and END in between up and whispered

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol Thank you and i'll try. XD

yonaika
(not registered user)

alrite, now for the praise!!
I LOVE IT SO FAR! keep writing, this one dont give up!
tell me when more comes

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh It's fine. People have been correcting me all day, but I don't mind. It Helps me. ;]

cool story...let me know when you have the next chapter...

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank You. =3 I will be sure too, i'll comment when it is.

Very cool! I like it a lot! Toatally keep it up!

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, I'll be writing more soon.

i like this story i'm gonna post a comment on every chapter

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww..Thanks. I love when people do that. It gives me an extra boost.



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