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Summer Lovin'

Novel By: Rat
Young Adult


Shawn is a teenage boy and his bother Trevor saves this girl named Jadyn and soon Shawn is finding himself falling for this one girl but his parents have a difrent plan for Shawn find out if Shawn and Jayden will work out in the interesting novel. View table of contents...

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1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21

Submitted: May 26, 2008    Reads: 456    Comments: 19    Likes: 6   


“Shawn wake-up.”Someone was shaking me.
“I’m up what do you want?” I asked tiredly.
“Mom and dad want to go hunting.”My brother Trevor told me.
“But, I’m not hungry.”I pulled the covers back over my head.
“Fine but, if you go to school tomorrow and blow are covers…..then I will personally love to kill you.”Trevor threatened.
“Fine I will take that risk and make sure it’s a slow and painful death so that way I can beat you up once in a while.” I punched him off of my bed.
“Oww.” Was all Trevor said before walking out my room.
I went back to sleep and the next thing I knew I was dreaming what I rarely do.
DREAM:
There was a girl running away from a thug in a dark alley and yelling for someone to help her. Then out of know where Trevor comes up behind the thug and bites him.The girl let out a scream and fainted.
END OF DREAM
I woke-up to fined Trevor setting on my chair by my desk.
“What are you doing back so soon?” I asked getting annoyed.
“I did something that mom and dad would disagree with.” He didn’t look me in the eyes.
“What did you do?”I yelled even though I all ready know the answer.
“I brought a human to the house.” He put his head in his hands.
“Where is she?” I asked calmly.
“She’s in my room.” He started to get up.
I got up and followed him to his room.I opened up the door.The girl lying on the bed was so beautiful and smelt so good.I walked to the bed and just looked at her.
“Someone help me please.”The girl whispered.
Her eyes shot open just then.She screamed when she saw me standing over her.
“Where am I?Who….who are you?” She started to get up to run.
“My name is Shawn and this is my brother Trevor.He saved your life and you are at our house,” I said in a hypnotizing voice.“Now my darling my I ask who you are?”
“My….My name is Jadyn.” She started to shake.
I put my hand on her cheek and she fainted again.
“What did you do?” Trevor hissed.
“I just touched her!” I said shocked on what happened.
We left the room to find our parents standing down stairs by the door.
“Where did you run off to Trevor?”My parents asked.
“I…I was done hunting so I came back home.” He was shaking.
“And why did you decide to stay home Shawn?” My parents turned there attention to me.
“Like I told Trevor I wasn’t hungry.” I gave them an evil glare.
“Why do I smell human on you then.” My dad asked me.
“Because it rubbed off of Trevor.” I told them.
I then run up the stairs so they couldn’t ask me any more questions.I then found myself outside of Trevor’s room.I opened the door to find that the girl was getting ready to jump off of the balcony.
“This girl is tougher then I thought.” I said under my breath.
She turned around to see me standing by the open door.She then started walking backwards.She only had and inch left on the rail.She backed up one more step and fell.I quickly ran after her and jumped off of the balcony.I passed her quickly and landed on my feet.I ran to catch her.She landed in my arms with a thump.
“Why did you do that?” I asked shocked.
No answer.
She wasn’t breathing.


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SummerLeiAnn
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This is really good! UPDATE sOON!
(if your wondering I was to lazy to get on my account)

Posted: May 26, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for reading:] i will update as soon as i get the next ch done

update soon plz. I really like it. Are these people like vampires? That confused me for a sec. If im right then plz tell me so i dont get confused. But it was reallllly good. Plz plz update

Posted: May 26, 2008

Author Comment:

shawn's family are vampires but Jadyn's family isnt. thanks for reading and i'm glad you like it i will update as soon as i can.

AHHH! I'm so excited to see this on here!!

I LOVE YOU (really)

Posted: May 27, 2008

Author Comment:

HAHAHAHAHAH thanks and i love you too i guess:] thanks for reading

cool you put this ine on i think people will really like it is it all up or just part of it? you should finish this story soon so i can kno what happens

love ya

Posted: May 27, 2008

Author Comment:

i will type as fast as i can:] and i'm gald you want to know what happens. and just part of it is up right now there will be more soon hopefully:] see you tomorrow oh and school was really boring to day

ooh.. i lab it(i love it). can't wait for the next one.

Posted: May 27, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for reading i'm gald you like it

YAY!! she was right!!

Posted: May 29, 2008

Author Comment:

what do you mean 'she was right'? who is right?? thanks for reading though...hi

hey this story is really good I was in a compleat trance Its really good I didnt even get out of my seat Im glad that you my fan but I think It should be the other way around lol, um how about you read my short story tell me what you think k? thnx ^_^

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for reading and i will check out you stuff when i have time because i'm bezzey with school

WOW! I absolutely loved it! Even though I prefer gore and horror this is good too. =D

Posted: Jul 7, 2008

Author Comment:

sorry i like gore and horror too but i'm not good at writing it. thanks for reading:]

Wow
this is pretty good :]
just one thing that annoyed me.
Alley was spelt as Ally.
Just wanted to let you know that
:]

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Okay sorry about that thanks for reading:]

Great First chapter, very interesting and unexpected.. keep it up

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for reading:]

Wow, I like this novel so far.

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks glad you like it

Great first chapter
Dom likes and normally i don't like reading
stories that deal with vampires (not including twilight)
but this one is just way too awesome, so i'm so reading it, well off to the next chapter
XoXoXo
Dom!!!XD!!

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for reading gald you like it:]

this is really good...i'm on to read more...i am a little confused as to whats going on though...maybe it will work itself out in my head in the next few chapters though

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

i hope it wont confus you anymore i'm gald you like it

I love it.

Posted: Sep 2, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for reading:]

Great stuff, keep at it.

Posted: Sep 8, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks

I love it I'm gonna read the rest the next time I'm on cuz I kinda have to get off

Posted: Sep 14, 2008

Author Comment:

ok thanks for reading glad you love it:]

ohhhh! I like it!!! I off to the next chapter!!! yay!! lol

Posted: Oct 16, 2008

Author Comment:

lol glad you like it

I'll be glad to update you on Clan Dreamweaver, firstly, i have formed an alpha council, made up of members from the clan, who will see to any issues members have, set challenges welcome new members and so on.

Right now the Clan is looking for a new Alpha Female, we are holding an election on the 18th of this month, any female clan members that wish to run for the spot, have to submit two pieces to be voted on by all clan members. The pieces can be nwe ones, or ones that have already been writen. The deadline for the two pieces is the 17th.

also, lastly the Clan is excepting as always new members without any strings.

I do hope this helps and glad to have you as a member of Clan Dreamweaver. Thankyou.

Posted: Nov 4, 2008

Author Comment:

yep no problum you know you could have just left a thing on my comment thing on my home page right??

I love this omg you hooked me in and i've only read one chap so far probably call it quits on chap 5 then read more tomarrow because it like 11:00 pm right now anywho
EXCITING NEWS!!!!!
check out the coven page

Posted: Nov 5, 2008

Author Comment:

ok and glad you like it but i should warn u that the last ch is really horabal so sorry for the last ch



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