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Shawn is a teenage boy and his bother Trevor saves this girl named Jadyn and soon Shawn is finding himself falling for this one girl but his parents have a difrent plan for Shawn find out if Shawn and Jayden will work out in the interesting novel. View table of contents...
Submitted: May 26, 2008 Reads: 456 Comments: 19 Likes: 6
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This is really good! UPDATE sOON!
(if your wondering I was to lazy to get on my account)
Posted: May 26, 2008
update soon plz. I really like it. Are these people like vampires? That confused me for a sec. If im right then plz tell me so i dont get confused. But it was reallllly good. Plz plz update
Posted: May 26, 2008
AHHH! I'm so excited to see this on here!!
I LOVE YOU (really)
Posted: May 27, 2008
cool you put this ine on i think people will really like it is it all up or just part of it? you should finish this story soon so i can kno what happens
love ya
Posted: May 27, 2008
ooh.. i lab it(i love it). can't wait for the next one.
Posted: May 27, 2008
YAY!! she was right!!
Posted: May 29, 2008
hey this story is really good I was in a compleat trance Its really good I didnt even get out of my seat Im glad that you my fan but I think It should be the other way around lol, um how about you read my short story tell me what you think k? thnx ^_^
Posted: Jun 3, 2008
WOW! I absolutely loved it! Even though I prefer gore and horror this is good too. =D
Posted: Jul 7, 2008
Wow
this is pretty good :]
just one thing that annoyed me.
Alley was spelt as Ally.
Just wanted to let you know that
:]
Posted: Jul 11, 2008
Great First chapter, very interesting and unexpected.. keep it up
Posted: Jul 11, 2008
Wow, I like this novel so far.
Posted: Jul 14, 2008
Great first chapter
Dom likes and normally i don't like reading
stories that deal with vampires (not including twilight)
but this one is just way too awesome, so i'm so reading it, well off to the next chapter
XoXoXo
Dom!!!XD!!
Posted: Jul 21, 2008
this is really good...i'm on to read more...i am a little confused as to whats going on though...maybe it will work itself out in my head in the next few chapters though
Posted: Jul 21, 2008
I love it.
Posted: Sep 2, 2008
Great stuff, keep at it.
Posted: Sep 8, 2008
I love it I'm gonna read the rest the next time I'm on cuz I kinda have to get off
Posted: Sep 14, 2008
ohhhh! I like it!!! I off to the next chapter!!! yay!! lol
Posted: Oct 16, 2008
I'll be glad to update you on Clan Dreamweaver, firstly, i have formed an alpha council, made up of members from the clan, who will see to any issues members have, set challenges welcome new members and so on.
Right now the Clan is looking for a new Alpha Female, we are holding an election on the 18th of this month, any female clan members that wish to run for the spot, have to submit two pieces to be voted on by all clan members. The pieces can be nwe ones, or ones that have already been writen. The deadline for the two pieces is the 17th.
also, lastly the Clan is excepting as always new members without any strings.
I do hope this helps and glad to have you as a member of Clan Dreamweaver. Thankyou.
Posted: Nov 4, 2008
I love this omg you hooked me in and i've only read one chap so far probably call it quits on chap 5 then read more tomarrow because it like 11:00 pm right now anywho
EXCITING NEWS!!!!!
check out the coven page
Posted: Nov 5, 2008
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