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Broken glass

Novel By: sam316547
Young Adult


Raven has never had the best life. Her mother is a heavy drinker and has a boyfriend that enjoys to beat her like a punching bag. She just can't help how she feels, she all alone in a world that won't acept her. That is until she meets Eric. He's different from all the other people in her world. Kind and acepting with an edge of hummor that can't be missed.
What could happen in one day? Ask Raven. When she returns home late she is beat bruetly....Until all she can do is sleep and prey that the demon that ruled her hell would become bored.
When she awakes to screaming...Her first thought is that "I'm having another nightmare"
Which seems to be the truth, for soon after they seize.
Sore from her fresh wounds, she decides to drown out the nightmare with a bath.
When she returns....She has a waiting guest. Eric.
Her hero....Her support.
Eager to get away from the house, Eric convices her to leave with him.....And the scene in the living room is unpreventable.....
She finds her 'Foster Parents' bruetly killed and left as art across the room.
Eric's done something very bad....With a little help from his siblings.
What happens when your destined to be a Vampire's soul mate?
Just when Raven feels relief....Just when it seems her hell has vanished, she's drug back under. This time to somewhere very close to the real thing.
It turns out Fate's made a terriable mistake, Raven has two soul mates.
And one is dead set one keeping her, it's just too bad it's not Eric......
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Submitted: Sep 3, 2008    Reads: 153    Comments: 16    Likes: 2   


AUTHOR"S NOTE:
* I appologize for the wait, the shortness and above all what your about to read. Please understand that as a writer I have to make choices that my fans won't always like, but are nessiary to the plot line. Just promise no to kill me! I will be updating a lot sooner for now on......Beause.......This will be wrapping up in a few chapters.......I'm thinking that my plot won't last longer than chapter 25. If that......So please if you would like a Broken glass sequeal, vote...I need 15 and only have four. Sorry folks unless I know you absoultly want more I won't bother. I'm currently writting 4 novels......That's a lot....Plus school work. :( But no worries.....BG is top on my list...I've just been suffering from severe writer's block when comes to BG. I'm over it now so expect more very soon. Thank you very much for reading and understanding.*


Broken glass 15
I stood there confused, hell......No matter how far i ran it always drug me back to it’s pits. It wouldn’t let me go.....
“Do you understand?” His voice was low and hushed. A relief to my ears after all of the screaming.
I couldn’t answer, I was too lost at words. He grabbed me at the neck and pulled me even closer.
“I ASKED YOU A QUESTION!”
“Yes.” My voice was little more than a whine. He smiled and released me. I was shaking and it was to hard to stop. I couldn’t control myself. It was like someone was ripping my heart out. It was always me, why......
“Your beautiful when you cry. It brings out your whole face. A masterpiece really.”
My body stopped shaking, something snapped inside of me. It shouldn’t be me.....I’ve never down anything wrong! I shouldn’t be pushed around.....I shouldn’t be hurt.
I felt my fist tighten as he began to walk away. It was like there was a surge of energy
rushing through my veins. I heard my knuckles crack loudly. I felt the strength in my small fists. I felt.....Like...A vampire. I...Was one wasn’t I?
I heard a laughter, at first it was quiet then it was loud and roaring like a hyena. He stopped dead in his tracks and turn back to me.
His grin was ripping through me, he shouldn’t ever smile again. I let back my fist and swung it forward.
I heard a loud crunching sound as he stumbled back still laughing. Still smiling.
This time I put every once of power I had into my punch. He caught it gracefully.
So I brought my leg up decided his stomach would do. With his free hand he grabbed my thigh just before the impact.
“Oh no you don’t. Ha ha. I’m glad you finally grew a backbone.”
He pulled me closer, until our lips met. It was a painful kiss, rough and forceful. Like he could care less rather or not I got hurt.
I hated him so much, he was taking my love......He wasn’t asking for it he was just taking it.
With my free hand I slapped his face away from mine.
“LEAVE ME ALONE!”
Then I pulled my leg away and retried my kick this time landing clean across his face. His laughter pushed me over the edge, how dare he?
Trying as hard as I could I punched him again, and again. Each time he’d just smile wider and look at me like I was the insane one.
“STOP SMILING!”
Every hit, every kick.....Every single blow had the same result. No matter how hard I tried he was never hurt, not a single mark.
I kept trying, until I was sobbing from my lack of success.
Eventually he put a stop to it, he grabbed my wrist and I didn’t even try to pull away.
“Feel better? Ha ha....”

I fell to the ground, miserable to the point of exultation.
He pulled me up to my feet and pushed me to his chest in a giant bear hug.
“Ha ha.....It’s too bad, your so weak....I thought for sure...Ha ha.. That you would have at least make me itch....But...Ha ha not even that! Ha ha.”
He dropped my wrist and I didn’t bother to move. Like I really wanted to be hit again. Finally he sighed and pushed me away, just to where he could see my face.
“Really you should look at your face! ha...It was priceless. Oh...And I bet your really hated me right now...Am I right? Ha. Can you blame me I was raised by demons!”
I pulled away from him and stopped crying instantly.
“Ha...It’s funny...YOU WERE TOO!”
I clutched my fists this wasn’t funny. He froze and looked at me and then sighed.
“Really? Are you going to try THAT again....Your going to hurt yourself....”
“OH AM I NOT ALLOWED TO?? EVERYONE ELSE DOES! WHY CAN’T I??????”
His grin faded.
“Your not laughing?”
“DOES IT LOOK LIKE I’M AMUSED?”
I grumbled and walked away from him.
“Your not worth hitting.”
Maybe if he gets mad enough he’ll end my life in a single blow.....Instead of slinging me across the room, like I’d hoped, he grabbed my shoulders instead.
In my ear he whispered “You aren’t either.”
I felt his lips against my neck. They moved down to my shoulder. I flinched away, he pulled me back.

This time he grabbed my face, his lips touched mine the softest they ever have.
And his hand fell tracing over my skin until they reached my waist.
I kept pushing him away, but he kept coming back for more. I felt like I was fighting for my life.
He was like.....A dog. Breathing deeply and his hands....were always moving.....From my waist to my back...To my shoulders.
I was like a helpless rag doll. My arms went limp at my sides. I couldn’t fight it. The second I gave up he let go.
He rolled his eyes and pushed me, painfully to the ground.
“I’ll see you later....”
He sounded bored like I was...Just a game...That he’d already won too many times. As I watched him I noticed why.....Five women had enter the room. Each of them carrying something different.
Then I felt a tap on my shoulder.....
I turned to see who it was.
“My lady.....The lord has...Requested that I clean you up.” She had dark golden hair that was pinned up and was almost the exact shade of her eyes. She was wearing a black dress with a white apron tied around her waist.
I looked towards the others. They were all wearing the same thing. Two more of them blonde, one brunette and the last had flaming red hair.......And was carrying a huge whit dress across her arm.
The tears in my eyes built up and I knew exactly what was happening.......
The girl pulled at my arm and lead me to a small door.
“Please my lady shower in here.”
I forced myself into the room and shut the door behind me. It was small without any windows and only a small candle for light. There was a toilet and a shower.
I turned the water on, there was only one knob and only one temperature, a freezing cold.
Just as I got in, i could no longer hold the tears back.....They began to flood my face as the icy water rolled over my skin, soothing the fresh bruises.
My knees gave way with the gravity and all I could do was cry and prey......Prey that there was still a God in the sky for me. prey that he’d forgive me.....Forgive what ever sins I’d be committing tonight.....Hope that he’d still except me when my time came. Nno matter how soon it was......


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Comments:

i'd kill myself... i swear i would. and uh... why didn't she kick him in the nuts? that hurts ALL guys, who cares if they ARE vampires...

Posted: Sep 3, 2008

Author Comment:

00 really? is that what your thinking.....
Yeah I know I would of...But knowing poor Ray's luck the crazy bastard would catch her foot and laugh. Like the ugly hyena he is....
OH WELL. Suicide is always an opition....

Oh my gosh! I agree with vampgurl18 - I would kill myself. If that was possible for a vampire of coarse.
This is really good.
Update soon please :) and I definately vote for a sequel :D

Posted: Sep 3, 2008

Author Comment:

:) alright...I know.....I'm sure we all would in this stupid cornor I just HAD to stick my character in. Well you know what they say "What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger."
K. I'll update soon. :)

i vote for one too. (sequel)!!!!!!!

Posted: Sep 4, 2008

Author Comment:

K. Your vote's being take in into count. Thnx. :)

i agree with everyone sheesh i hate him and the whole laghing thing is really annoying i wish he could be a bit serious god i hate him poor eric sheesh
it was really really really really good lol i think i should have added 5 more reallys but i will spare it just for u lol
kk i am going lol
update ASAP

Posted: Sep 4, 2008

Author Comment:

:) I will I plan to update very soon! I know i've been making everyone pull out there hair waiting so I'm going to probably update every other day now. THNX LOL.

omg! pleasew write more i luv it sooo much

Posted: Sep 4, 2008

Author Comment:

k. :)

omg i love it update soon plez and i would love a sequeal:]

Posted: Sep 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Alright your votes being counted! :) will do....THNX

lolz yeah

Posted: Sep 4, 2008

Author Comment:

:)

I love it please update soon.

Posted: Sep 4, 2008

Author Comment:

k. :)

WOOHOO!! Your books send shivers of exitment through me! You WILL write a sequel. I absolutly L-O-V-E this story! It just gets better and better, even when you think it can't! Ditto for FFH too. Write more soon!

(NOTE:I RESENT being compared to that filthy man. DOGS happen to be very good companions, Why do you think we're called 'man's best friend'? Frownie Brownie, Sam >:(

Posted: Sep 4, 2008

Author Comment:

HAHAHA LOL!!!!! I'm hysterical......Ok ok...I won't do it again. I thought you didn't like being called a dog?????? Oh well.....THANK YOU VERY MUCH! I'm really really happy you like my little twist......

this is very very good C:

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

Author Comment:

THNX. :)

Oooo >_< I want to kill that guy!!! I vote for a sequel!!! LOVE THIS STORY!! Update soon! :}

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

Author Comment:

k. thnx for voting!

grr i really dong like the guy.

yeah i think a sequel would be good. this is really good

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

Author Comment:

K. THNX! I'm glad you like the story and hate my villian....
:)

I love it! u so have to write more! I love this! =)=)=)=)=)=)=)=)

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

Author Comment:

K. will do...THNX


I vote I vote I vote :). I want to see a sequeal.

Omg. I so wanted to wipe that smile off his face and make him stop laughing the entire time I was reading this. Hes really irking me right now. Like wth?!?! Eric where are you??? I feel sad about the whole thing. How their bond is broken and everything it makes me think about my relationship and how I'd feel if he was taken by another or how'd he feel if I was taken by another :(. But on a brighter note... crap... I cant find one... oh well lol I swear I just had a brainfart...ummm....Gosh Idk I guess Ill leave it at this. If I figure something else out I'll post again lol.

Only errors I found were when she said "I’ve never DOWN anything wrong! I shouldn’t be pushed around.....I shouldn’t be hurt." where "down" should have beeen "done "and "This time I put every ONCE of power I had into my punch." where "once should have been "ounce". Other than that loved the update.

Cant wait for the next one :)

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

Author Comment:

:) *Giant smiley face.* I hate him and he's offically got a name. Deran...Love to hate it, cause it's the best I got. I'm alnost ready to post again and will probablt tonight or early tomorrow. :)
THNX, I've so got to reread my work....I just get so caught in the moment I forget! :)

omg i love it and i wont kill you *yet sneaky face* lol post soon

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL.

*Looks around nervously*

SEQUL

Posted: Oct 11, 2008

Author Comment:

:( You didn't read my bulletin board??? I already agreed to a sequal. Please no more protests....I feel like I'm at an ani-war parade. :) (Not that there's anything wrong with peace!)
ha ha.



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