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IMMORTAL by Sara Claire

Novel By: Sara Claire
Young adult

Hello there guys, I can't write a summary for my novel yet, so right now I will just explain it's genre and whats its all about. Kay?

Well, its about First Love and Immortals obviously,Faith and Keeno grew up together and developed feelings for each other. But Keeno died and Faith believed he really did. That time is the time of war b/w the white wizards are the "immortals".
Years later, the immortals came back after years of hiding, and thats when Faith discovered that she is one of the "guardians of prophecy". What will she do if...oopsie...just read on ok? I don't wanna spill something in the story.

Hope you like the story. I'm not a native speaker and writer of English so please don't be too hard on me. I'll appreciate any comments and suggestions. Help me pls. This is my first novel. :))

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Submitted:Nov 2, 2011    Reads: 31    Comments: 4    Likes: 0   

Faith's POV

It was dark. Am I just hallucinating or did I really saw him? But how? Why? This narrow passageway… Damn! I have to find him. No matter what, I have to…

Tears burst from my eyes. This is insane! I don't even know if he is really him or not! But… there's something in my heart that tells me that maybe…Keeno is alive…No! There's no way he is alive! He can't be that damned immortal! "Keeno!"

I threw my necklace in the air and as it always had been, it transformed into my STORM. I run faster… trying to find his shadow, never thinking about where I am or what danger will I face. I just want to see him. I remembered the way he looked at me. His dark crimson eyes which suddenly turned into a rich gold, the features of his face. No doubt, he resembles him. But, I need to find out the truth…If he really is him… why?

"Why!" Tears flowed again.

My hands trembled as if I am going to crush whatever I am holding right now. Pain, hurt, happiness, sadness, longing, madness, fear… It seems like my heart will break into million pieces. Different emotions, waiting to destroy one another… I found the end of this passageway. I saw the light and I turned to find him. Anticipation filled my entire body…

He stopped, feeling my presence. He was there! Again, my heart quivered and started to pound faster. This is what I've been waiting for! I tightened my grip to STORM. Why? "Keeno…" I whispered to myself.


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