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Brother, Best friend or Boyfriend?

Novel By: ShesAddictive
Young adult


FINISHED -
Elizabeth(Lizzie) Beale is just your average fifteen year old, Blonde, Blue-eyed, Slim girl, who’s in love with her Brother/Best friend - Daniel Mason, Daniel and Lizzie have known each other their whole life but little does Daniel know, Lizzie is completely and utterly in love with him, she sleeps, eats and breathes him.

Yet he doesnt even have a clue!

Lizzie goes away for the summer and comes back looking HOT! All the boys notice her and want to go out with her. Daniel still acts as if shes the little sister he never had... or so she thinks.

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Submitted:Jan 16, 2009    Reads: 877    Comments: 13    Likes: 19   


This is just a preview type of thing, i want you to tell me if you think it be any good or not...

As i walked through the gates i saw him, standing in the exact same place he has done for four years now, every morning at 8.30, he never fails to dissapoint me either, hes never had a sick day, hes always been there. There he is smiling at me like usual but no this isn't my boyfriend (i wish) this was Daniel Mason, the boy i've known my whole life and am in love with, if only he'd notice. Its not he's not a good friend, he's always been like a big brother to me. Him being only one year older than I was. You would never have thought we'd end up being best friends though, he is beautiful, so handsome. He's got brown hair, bright blue eyes like a clear sky on a hot summers day, a muscley body - Six pack. Every girl falls for him, yet, he'll only ever take the bitch of the school - Jessica, red-haired, plastic, bitch who thinks she all it, when no one likes her apart from her followers. He says hes 'in love with her' i dont think he is, i just think he likes her boobs to put it blunt. As im honey blonde, blue-eyed, slim and normal, i blend in, Daniel looks like hes stepped out of a photo shoot. He waves his hand and signals for me to come over, i must have been staring - how embarresing - i laugh, i dont know what im laughing at, i guess its to hide my embarressment. Our parents knew eachother since they were in Highschool so Daniel usually stays over on Friday nights or we go to the cinema and occasionally do our homework together. Today was friday, friday was a good day. Friday was the best day of the week, not only do i get to spend it with Daniel but no more school for two whole days. I gradually started to walk towards the handsome, beautiful figure standing in my direction. When i see him he pulls me in to a tight hug.

"What took you so long Liz? You was just staring in to space..." Daniel asked.

"You know, just thinking, about things, anyways enough about me, coming over tonight?" I replied.

"Well Lizzie... you know Jessica... shes asked me to go to the cinema tonight just me and her... but i can still sleep at yours afterwards, thats if you want me too, i know you dont like her" He said looking down.

"No, no, its okay, im sure i'll be fine until you get back, mom and dad are going out tonight so i'll wait until you get back and we can watch a DVD together yeah" I sighed.

"Your going to be on your own?" Daniel said worryingly. "I'll call it off with Jessica, im sure we can do it another time" Daniel smiled.

"Only if your sure, i really wouldn't mind" I lied.

"Yes im sure Lizzie" Daniel replied when someone came up behind up and kissed him on the neck. Urgh, the bitch was back from her holiday. Daniel looked and Jessica and smiled and kissed her on the forehead.

"Hey sweetie" Jessica's voice rang through my ears, so high pitched.

"Hey babes" Daniel replied. "Right Lizzie, i'll see you at lunch, talk to you about it... later" Daniel smile.

"Oh, okay... bye" I called in return as i walked off to stop myself from being sick as i saw them two start kissing.

Why couldn't it be me? Why couldn't i look like her? Maybe when he comes around tonight i could talk to him...





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