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This novel is based on the song 'Forgiven - Within Temptation'.


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Submitted:Jan 2, 2010    Reads: 190    Comments: 2    Likes: 4   

"Don't leave me!" I begged, grabbing onto his arm screaming, he couldn't leave me, not now.
"Ebony, i don't have a choice, my parents aren't giving me the choice to stay behind, i have to go!" Blayze tugged at his arm, he wouldn't look me in the eyes.
"I dont want you to leave Blayze, please dont do this to me!" A small amount of tears escaped from my face, he was my best friend, my only friend, he can't leave, not now!
"I have no choice!" He shouted, shrugging my clinging arms off him.
"Run away with me", my voice was sincere, i fully meant what i'd just said.
"Ebony... i just... i cant... i would, you know i would... but... i'll come back for you Ebony, i'll leave here with my parents now, and i'll come back for you", Blayze looked me in the eye, he totally meant it. Guilt was found in his eyes.
"You promise?" I asked, hugging Blayze around his muscular torso, he was only 14, nearly 15, and he had his body completely sorted.
"I promise Ebony!" Blayze hugged me back, then tore apart from the tight hug.
"Im going now..." Blayze turned his back and walked away.
"I love you!" I whispered as i collapsed in tears into the now empty field.

You gave up the fight
You left me behind
All that's done's forgiven
You'll always be mine
I know deep inside
All that's done's forgiven.


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