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So this is High School

Novel By: SnowQueen
Young Adult


***COMPLETED***Sarah Allen is going into her sophomore year at a new school. As soon as she steps into the halls her best friend is wrenched away by one of the most popular girls in school, Veronica. Then she meets Daniel Anderson, a really hot guy in her year who gives her some support about the subject. When she finds out that Daniel is Veronica's brother, she's suddenly on Veronica's watch list. Will she be able to tell Daniel whatever feelings she has for him? Or will she fall under Veronica's deathly attitude? View table of contents...

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1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20

Submitted: Jun 7, 2007    Reads: 360    Comments: 22    Likes: 3   


Chapter One

 

The first day of school...again.  Why is there always so much pressure on the first day of school anyways?  It's just going into a different grade, with most of the same students, and the same boring teachers.  But there's a little problem with my situation: I just moved here a year ago and was home schooled for that year...so, I'm going to be a sophomore and it's my first year of public school here.

At least I wasn't going in alone.  I had one best friend: Abby Miller.  We've been tight ever since I moved here.  We met when I accidentally crashed into her at the mall.  We found out we lived on the same street and the rest is history.

I envy her looks.  She's the girl-next-door type: long blond hair, slender body, good looks, fashion-queen, but she's a good friend.  We've never gotten into a fight before. 

I don't like to talk about my own looks because they are so plain: short shoulder length brown hair, brown eyes, and I'm more athletic so I have defined arm muscles unlike Abby.  But she's the one who always get asked for her number while she's standing in line.

So here I am: sitting on my bed in my pajama's and wondering when I should start getting dressed.  I couldn't take the suspense anymore, so I got up and pulled open my closet door.  I scrutinized my selection of t-shirts with is really all I owned, that and a million pairs of jeans.  I decided on a baby blue t-shirt and a pair of jeans that were ripped at the knees.  This was probably my favorite out fit.  Not to mention my favorite pair of jeans.

"Sarah!  For goodness sake, you're going to be late and Abby's waiting for you outside!" My mom called from downstairs.

"Alright already, I'm coming!" I yelled back.  I grabbed an elastic band and a brush, stuffing them in my backpack, which was already filled with school supplies.  I slipped on a pair of flip-flops and ran downstairs, grabbing a pop tart packet and brushing my teeth.  I then high tailed it out of there and outside, where Abby was waiting. 

Abby had gotten her driver's license two weeks ago and she already had her own car.  I wouldn't want to call her ‘spoiled' but she got practically whatever she wanted.  The car she had now, a red mustang, was a pretty expensive car.  It was a convertible and she had the top down, along with her hair so that it could flow in the wind.

I ran out to her car and got in.  Abby looked at my out fit, but I pretended to look ahead and look impatient.  "God, Sarah.  I would think you would wear something more...feminine for the first day of school." She said, starting to drive towards their high school. 

I rolled my eyes and pulled out my brush and quickly combed my hair and tying it into a loose bun.  I then took in Abby's apparel: one of the shortest mini skirts I've ever seen with a tank top that showed a sliver of her stomach.  I had to admit: it worked well on Abby because she had nicely tanned skin.

"Oh, my god, Abby.  You aren't seriously wearing that to school?" I said as we neared the high school. 

Abby looked at me irritably, "I am not going to be going through this year unnoticed."

"You never go unnoticed, Abby!  I bet you twenty bucks you'll have a boyfriend by the end of the day." I said.  Abby was never one to turn down a challenge. 

She looked at me with a blank face.  Then she smiled and said, "You're on."

We arrived at the high school and Abby parked the car.  We got out and I looked at my new school.  The surprising mass of students was enough to overwhelm any one but the school was obviously strict.  The school ahead was very well kept from the windows to the lawn.

Abby grabbed my arm and we headed into the crowd.  I could see at once that I wasn't going to be noticed here.  There were dozens of girls with mini skirts just like Abby's.  Nervousness clawed my stomach as guys were already checking Abby out. 

As we came through the double doors that led to the school everyone starting splitting to go to their classes, leaving Abby and me with some space.  We had the same schedule so we started towards our first period class. 

"Abby!" Someone called and she turned around.  I did too and my stomach seemed to disappear.  Veronica Anderson was running towards us.  Veronica had become Abby's best friend a couple of months ago before school let out.  I didn't want to say I was jealous but I suppose I was.  Veronica was constantly hanging out with Abby and stealing her away for sleepovers, parties, just hanging out, leaving me behind.  Veronica seemed to think that I would slow them down and I hated her for it.

"Oh, my god, Veronica!" Abby squealed.  Before I could do anything to remind Abby that I was even there, Veronica linked her arm with hers and walked off, talking a hundred miles a minute. 

"Abby!" I called but she didn't hear me.  I was hurt and felt like I was about to cry but instead I stamped my foot like a three-year-old and cursed out loud.  I was near my locker, thank God.

"Got ditched already?" Said a voice from beside me.  I looked side ways and my heart seemed to melt away.  The cutest guy I've ever seen was standing at his locker, looking at me with amusement.  He had dirty blond slightly overgrown hair with the most sparkling blue eyes I've ever seen.  I tried not to notice this and instead tried to concentrate on what he had said.  It wasn't easy but I managed it, somehow.

"Apparently so." I said, adjusting my backpack to a more comfortable position on my shoulder.  I looked at the locker numbers and found that my locker was two down from the guy.  I tried not to smile to myself as I went to it and spun in the locker combination.  I sighed as I opened it and pulled out some books from backpack and shoving them into it with unnecessary force.

The guy chuckled, "Don't worry.  It always happens on the first day of school, but I suggest you get your friend before she goes too far."

"Are you talking from experience?" I asked, zipping up my backpack.

He shrugged, "One of my best guys thought I was boring and started hanging out with a gang instead," He paused thoughtfully, "I think he went to juvenile hall."

I smiled and closed my locker, spinning the lock.  We stood there a little awkward until the guy stuck out his hand and finally introduced himself, "Daniel Anderson."

"Sarah Allen." I said, shaking his hand.

The bell rang.  We headed down the hall.  "What's your schedule like?" Daniel asked, then added quickly, "You are a sophomore right?"

I laughed, "Of course I'm a sophomore.  And here." I said, pulling out my schedule and handing it to him. 

He looked down the list, "Awesome! We've got four classes together." He pointed at several of my classes, "English, Algebra, History, and Science."

I smiled and took back my schedule, "Good, now I know someone.  Although I'll know Abby and Veronica." I said sadly, "They're in all of my classes."

Daniel laughed, "You mean that was Abby?  Veronica couldn't stop talking about her."

I was stunned.  How does he know Abby and Veronica? "You know them?" I asked.

Daniel looked highly amused this time as he looked at me.  "Well, I would definitely know Veronica, because she's my sister."

My mouth dropped open, Veronica's brother?  Veronica had a brother?  Daniel looked at my stunned expression and hid a smile behind his hand.  "Is that hard to believe?" Then he thought of something and added, "Or, let me guess, she doesn't talk about me?"

"Well, seeing as I didn't know who you are, no." I said, closing my mouth as we turned a corner into the hall where our class was. 

Daniel shrugged it aside, "Wouldn't be the first time.  She thinks I'm constantly embarrassing her and that I do it on purpose."  He rolled his eyes.

"Well, do you?" I asked.

"Of course!" He said.

I laughed.

We walked into our class and I immediately spotted Abby and Veronica deep in conversation.  Abby looked up as she heard my laugh and her eyes widened.  I couldn't help but feel satisfaction at the fact that I was talking with one of the cutest guys in our year and she hadn't even met him yet.  Veronica looked up when she saw Abby's expression, but hers turned to anger and annoyance as she saw Daniel taking a seat beside me.

"Alright, students, calm down please." The teacher, Mrs. Brooks called.  I've heard about Mrs. Brooks.  She was a good, fun teacher that really let up on her students when they were doing their work.  She was an African American lady who was wearing dark slacks with a purple top.  She wrote her name on the board and the subject she taught ‘English'.

"If you will all take your seats, we will begin class.  And make sure to choose your seats wisely because they will be your permanent seats for this year." As soon as she finished the whole class minus Daniel, Veronica, Abby, and me started to jostle around to find decent seats.  Mrs. Brooks smiled and called the class to order, "Now, lets start with introducing ourselves, shall we?" She leaned against the edge of her desk and pointed at the first row of students, starting with the farthest one to my right.  "Say your first and last name along with your favorite subject."

The guy stood up and introduced himself.  And so it went, row after row until they finally reached Veronica, "Veronica Anderson.  Shopping." She sat back down.  The room was suddenly filled with muffled laughter and giggles.  I looked sideways at Daniel who was obviously restraining from laughing out loud with difficulty.  Even Mrs. Brooks looked amused.

"And how do you consider ‘Shopping' a subject, Miss Anderson?" She asked, folding her arms and smiling.

Veronica stood back up and promptly said, "Well it's something to learn, Mrs. Brooks.  You learn how to compare prices, which makers are the best and stuff like that."

There was more gigging and snorts from the class.  Mrs. Brooks smiled, "I'm glad you have a sense of humor, Miss Anderson, but I suggest you don't pull that on me.  Next!"

I stood up, "Sarah Allen.  English."

"I'm glad someone enjoys my subject." Mrs. Brooks said, smiling at me.  I smiled back as she pointed to Daniel. 

He stood up and said, "Daniel Anderson.  Science."

The class was almost over by the time we finished.  Many other girls had tried to be smart with the teacher in the result they nearly got kicked out of class. 

As the bell rang, the teacher said loudly over the shuffling feet and talking, "Please bring your work books to class tomorrow along with your favorite book!"

She then stood out of the way and let them pass through her door.  I looked at my schedule and saw that I had Science next.  I looked around for Daniel and spotted him a little ways down the hallway.  I made my way over to him just as he turned around, "Hey, Sarah.  Just about to come and find you."

I smiled, "You have Science next, right?" I asked.

"Yeah." He said, nodding.

As we started walking, someone suddenly grabbed my arm, causing me to stop abruptly.  "Sarah," Abby's voice said, "where have you been?  You didn't come to class with us."

I turned to see that it was indeed Abby along with Veronica.  Veronica looked livid and was staring at Daniel, who simply looked amused once more.  "You mean follow you after you left me in the hallway?" I said hotly.

Abby looked offended, "I didn't leave you!" She said, "I said to come with us so that we could walk to class together."

I looked at her as though she were crazy.  She was obviously lying, which was a first between us.  She had never lied flat out before.  I rolled my eyes and turned to go back to class, grabbing Daniel's arm and dragging him along too.  "Did you hear her say that?" I said angrily, as I walked into the Science Lab.

Daniel shook his head.

"That's what I thought." I said, letting go of his arm, which I hadn't realized I still had a death grip on. 

"Don't worry about it, Sarah." He said bracingly.

We took seats in the front of the class and took out our Science stuff.  I heard giggling a few seconds later that I recognized.  I looked up and saw, with a jolt, Abby laughing at something Veronica had said.  Veronica saw me looking and sniggered at me.  I swallowed and turned my attention towards the board, thinking that this year might be harder than I thought.

 

 


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Comments:

This first chapter REALLY caught me attention. If this was a book in stores I'd buy it!!!

Love Always,
Erin

Posted: Jun 7, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! Your comment really made me smile! I'm so glad you liked it!!! Hopefully I'll be posting a chapter everyday.

that was a really good first chapter....i love the way you describe people......hey you should check out my story the girl's last name is anderson just like daniel. anyway keep writing!
Kayla

Posted: Jun 9, 2007

Author Comment:

I'm so glad you liked it! I'm glad you like my descriptions. I'll definitely check out your story. :] Thanks so much for reading my story!

-SnowQueen

Wow i mean really wow!
Ive only just joined and kinda spotted your story so i thought id give it a go and ive just got to say its amazing, especially for a first chapter. I cant wait to read on =] xxx

Posted: Jun 13, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! That's very kind. I'm glad my story caught your eye. There are a lot of amazing stories on Booksie, you'll see.

wow! im new and this is the first story that i read and its really good! i can so relate! can't wait to read on! i guess the title just caught my attention and i'm so glad that i checked it out. :)

Posted: Jun 14, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you liked it so far. It's nice to know that my title was effective in that way. Don't worry about being new, this site is so much fun! There are so many great stories to comment on.

:]

-SnowQueen

Ouch ! I can't beleive Sarah's best friend would ditch her like that ! You can really relate to her , and I love how subtly descriptive of your characters' personalities . It's very realistic .

Posted: Jul 19, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it so far. Let me know how you like the rest of it. It's finished.

-SnowQueen

You've got me hooked so far.

Awaiting Judgement

Posted: Sep 15, 2007

Author Comment:

Yay. I'm glad you like it. Thanks so much for reading.

-SnowQueen

Hey I really like this. Its really good. I like it

~Kaori

Posted: Nov 11, 2007

Author Comment:

I'm glad. I hope you like the rest as well.

-SnowQueen

20 chapters... I CAN'T EVEN GET THROUGH 5 OF MINE!!! lol.

Posted: Nov 11, 2007

Author Comment:

:P! It took a lot of time but it isn't as good as I like it to be. I wrote this mainly because my fans would personally murder me if I decided to quit. :P I'm going to rewrite it, though. Thanks for commenting!

-SnowQueen

wow. this is such a great story! you are a very talented writer! god i hate abby and veronica XP. sarah seriously needs better friends XD. good story though! ^^

Posted: Dec 8, 2007

Author Comment:

I agree that Sarah needs much better friends. I really need to rewrite this story. This was my first completed novel. I'm glad you think it's good! :)

-SnowQueen

hey this is a pretty good story and it relates to real high school very well...i like it...great job
bty daniel sounds sexy...lol...

`Quesha`

Posted: Dec 22, 2007

Author Comment:

The inspiration for this story came from a dream I had about my friend leaving me stranded in the hallway. I had plans for Daniel to come in and he's sort of what I'd expect in a guy. All the drama is something I could live without, however. I'm so glad that you like my story and find it that it relates well to high school life.

-SnowQueen

I LOVE IT!!! HAHA just like xoPaigexo i can't get my books past chapter 5!! but this time i have done it, could you please go check it out and tell me what you think? but i love your story!! it's really good!!!! quick thing, on your summary part you said that Daniel is Veronica's sister...when did Daniel have a gender change? jk jk but i'm sure we all knew what you meant lol. once again i love the story!!

Posted: Dec 23, 2007

Author Comment:

I DID?! OH MY GOODNESS!! I will change that immediately. Grr, me and my mind. Sometimes, my thoughts get changed from the course between my brain and my fingers. Thanks so much for pointing it out. :)

-SnowQueen

magnificent!

hoping to see more of your writings!!!

more power. =)

Posted: Jan 10, 2008

Author Comment:

:) Thanks! I really appreciate it. I hope that you enjoy the rest of the story.

-SnowQueen

love itt!

Posted: Jan 20, 2008

Author Comment:

:) I'm glad. I appreciate your time you took to read this story. Thanks.

-SnowQueen

This is a really good story! I'm definitely reading on.

Posted: Jan 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! I'm glad. I hope you like the rest.

-SnowQueen

i agree with erin, if this book was out in the stores, i would've already bought it. gonna read the rest ;]

Posted: Jan 30, 2008

Author Comment:

:) Thank you! I'm really touched by everyone's comments. They really light up my day. Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment. :)

-SnowQueen

Wow, I love it, you're really talented. I can't wait to read more.

Posted: Mar 14, 2008

Author Comment:

:D Thanks. This story is probably the worst of my writing..well, in my opinion. I think, as time goes on, I get a lot better. The later chapters of "Seven Fairies of Power" are some of my better writings. But I'm glad you like this so far and I hope you enjoy the rest. :)

-SnowQueen

wow you such an awesome writer this is such a good story keep going!

Posted: Mar 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! I hope you like the rest of the story! Thank you so much for commenting. I appreciate it.

-SnowQueen

oh my god! id love to take shopping as a class. that would be really fun! ...anyway, great job. i really like it. =)

Posted: Apr 22, 2008

Author Comment:

:P Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it. Personally, I'm no shopper. I went for an hour and a half and it wiped me out. Anyways, thank you for commenting!

-SnowQueen

SHOPPING CLASS? ARE U KIDDING ME? THAT"D ROCK! okay, calming down, breath ditz. So, great job, Im gonna go on now!

Posted: May 4, 2008

Author Comment:

:P It's a class that I wouldn't exactly like to take but yeah, I suppose it would be ironic. :D I'm glad you're liking it. I can't wait for your comments on the rest!

-SnowQueen

Very cool so far! I really like it! Nice

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. I'm glad you like it even though I don't really like this novel. This was my first attempt at writing so I don't think it's as good as some of my latest stuff. But I am glad you approve.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

-SnowQueen

Wow I really liked that. She kinda sounds like me except i'm going to 8th grade. =3

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

:P I actually wrote this when I was in the seventh grade. Very beginning of seventh grade. *shrugs* It was while I was daydreaming what my first day of school would be like and in case my friend--sort of friend--dumped me.

Thank you so much for reading! I appreciate it!

-SnowQueen



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