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My Secret Reality

Novel By: Steven Willaims
Young Adult


My Secret Reality is a novel about High School Drama, shown in a unique light. If people like this pilot I’ve made, I plan on producing the novel. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Sep 18, 2008    Reads: 64    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


So, let me spell this out for you as simply as I can.In my High School, there is no escaping the constant drama.If you can’t handle the heat, get out of the kitchen, okay?
Kristi, the prettiest girl in school, has the biggest crush on Jack.He’s completely unaware of it, of course, being such a big airhead and all.None of the girls seem to care that there’s no light on in the attic.Instead, his looks do the talking for him, and the rest always goes from there.I know Kristi could do so much better than to date hi m, but no one can talk her out of liking him.
Jack has everything he wants.He has the money, the friends, the popularity; pretty much the whole lot.He act’s a little spoiled too.Everything in his life seems to be perfect, except for the girl they call Jordan. But hey, let’s be frank, she’s not interested in him.I know it’s kind of mean to say, but with the wave of her finger, she can have boys crawling at her feet.Jordan could be so much better.
Jordan never goes too far with anyone, as she’s a strong believer in waiting for the proper time.That said, she’s gone out with almost half the guys at school.I could totally write her off as being someone I never want to see in my entire life, but I just can’t do that.She let me in on one of those little secrets that make you feel like you want to give someone charity.She swore me to secrecy.
Brian, well… what do you say about Brian.He’s such a nerd.I mean, totally.If you look up nerd in the dictionary, the page would be worn out and the print would be blotted because he’s read the book so many times.I mean… come on?Who does that?
Chad is such a ladies’ man.Just like Jordan, he’s always dating someone.Except for him, and unlike Jordan, people’s feelings in the relationship mean nothing to him..Love is worthless. He’s just tallying up the numbers of people he’s ever gone out with.But a few days ago, I just found out he broke up with Alyssa, some chick from a younger grade than him that he was dating. Alyssa is beside herself.She really liked Chad, and he trampled all over her feelings.
But if that’s not bad enough, it get’s ten times worse.One of my best friends just told me something that’s rocking my world.She said that little old me, Jaden, is all Chad’s been talking about the past few days.He really wants me to go out with him.
And as I think about him, I can see all the hurt he could cause me to go through.I can see that he does not care about him.I’ve heard the stories.I’ve seen how some girls take the break-ups.But when I see his face…
I can’t help but want to whisper in his ear,
Let’s go out tomorrow.


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Comments:

hmm.. interesting twist at the end

Posted: Sep 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! I hope it makes for an interesting plot premise.

i liked it, the ending is great and leaves me wanting more. well done.

Posted: Sep 18, 2008



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