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Move On (Weightless)

Novel By: xnbdyknwsx
Young adult

Duncan is an aspiring writer who wants success. He is smart, creative, and has other good qualities. He was planning to take him and his wife to California and get a good job. Duncan has been dreaming about this for years. He has the whole picture in his head, but things change, people change, and there are things that can sabotage his race to happiness. On the way Duncan will find a girl named Gianna who is full of like with a bad past, and she’s dying to help. **FOR ASPIRE TO INSPIRE* View table of contents...


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Submitted:Aug 14, 2010    Reads: 47    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   

For: Aspire to Inspire Hosted by: Ant

Duncan: Confident, smart, scared, perfectionist, feels unloved, kind inside but sometimes bitter, creative

Gianna : Sweet, caring, imaginative, loyal, optimist,

**Duncan's Past**

Duncan woke up one morning and felt the bed beside him expecting to tap his wife Mila. He wandered around the house they purchased together trying to find her but she was gone. Duncan did not want to believe she left him but somewhere in his mind he knew it was true. All her belongings were gone, even her sweet smelling perfume and make up was gone. It was when he realized it was really done… she wasn't going to come home.

A few days later Duncan got a call from the company he sent his writing to, hoping that they wanted to publish his novel. The excitement one his face quickly faded. The company rejected his novel that he expected would pay the rent and the other bills that he had been falling behind on.

After a week Duncan received an eviction notice. He finally called his brother Trey in California. Trey offered Duncan a place to stay and a job until his writing career started to take off.

**Gianna's Past**

Gianna was abandon as a child. She went in and out of homes and companies but no one seemed to want her. When she finally found a place where she was wanted they hurt her. Eventually she found a man who wanted to marry her named Neil. They were together for three years. She took at least three years of abuse until Neil filed for divorce. He took the house, the cars, and almost everything they got while they were together.

Gianna is trying to find someone in California. She hopes that it will make her feel whole again. Not only is she looking for someone, she's looking for something special. Something she hasn't found yet, she doesn't know what it is, it's out there, somewhere in the world and she is going to Find It.


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