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Is There Still Hope in Me?

Novel By: XXDanieLskiXX
Young adult



Jane is a girl who just enjoyed her first day as a senior until that night, she gets kidnapped by some guy who has seen her in her auditions for a competition. Jane faces great challenges with her kidnapper like being his slave. she tries to not lose hope as she goes along a rough way to survive from this menace.

okay this is my first story EVER to write! i got inspired from perry fowler and XxEmoheartxX to write a story. so any comments and suggestions, please do. it can help me improve. REALLY! thank you! :D View table of contents...


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Submitted:Mar 18, 2009    Reads: 437    Comments: 6    Likes: 1   


3 and a half more hours later…

Unexpectedly, somebody woke me up. It was the doctor who had talked to me hours ago.

“Ms. Anderson, someone would like to see you.” (Smiles)

“Oh!”

I got up from the couch and followed him. The room number was

435. Once I got in, Daniel was awake. I ran to him and hugged him tightly

“Daniel! I’m so glad to see you!”

(Laughs) “I’m glad to see you too sweetheart! Thank you for being here.”

(Smiles)

“You’re welcome!”

“Now I’m really happy that your blood is flowing through my veins.”

I blushed and my cheeks turned red like a tomato! Then he laughed as he saw me.

“Jane, reach into my pocket in my pants right there hanging on the chair.”

“Okay, Daniel.”

When I reached for his pocket, I felt a velvet case. I pulled it out, opened it, and was shocked! It was an engraved diamond ring! The ring was engraved, “I Love You… Please Marry Me.”, around the outside of the ring! As I read those words, Daniel was saying the exact same words to me. I shed tears of joy and embraced him lovingly.

“Oh, thank you, Daniel! Yes I will marry you! I will! I will!”
“Thank you, Jane! You really didn’t give up on us! I knew you loved me!”

“Of course I do! Why would I not?”

(Laughs)”Come here.”

He pulled me to him and kissed me lovingly and passionately. It went on for so long until we couldn’t catch our breath anymore. And so, once Daniel got out from the hospital, he and I prepared the wedding. From the engagement party, to the honeymoon.





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