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Is There Still Hope in Me?

Novel By: XXDanieLskiXX
Young adult



Jane is a girl who just enjoyed her first day as a senior until that night, she gets kidnapped by some guy who has seen her in her auditions for a competition. Jane faces great challenges with her kidnapper like being his slave. she tries to not lose hope as she goes along a rough way to survive from this menace.

okay this is my first story EVER to write! i got inspired from perry fowler and XxEmoheartxX to write a story. so any comments and suggestions, please do. it can help me improve. REALLY! thank you! :D View table of contents...


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Submitted:Mar 17, 2009    Reads: 734    Comments: 6    Likes: 5   


It was already half past 6. And I was a few feet away from the workshop. It seemed that I was early so I sat by a bench in the nearby park and gazed at the sky. The following minutes that passed by, I got to a light snooze.


I opened my eyes. All of a sudden, I saw a man about 6 ft gaping at me.

“Hi. You must be Jane.”
“Yes it is me. And you are?”

“Jake. Jake Smith. I’m the agent who called you last 2 hours ago.”

“It’s nice to meet you Jake Smith.”

Now I really was astonished that an agent would look like this. He looked really looked ravishing with his blue eyes and his sparkling smile. His hair was straight but a bit messy which complimented his face. He had a tight body. (And I mean really tight!) He wore a tight dress shirt which showed his abs. it has long sleeves but he neatly folded it above his elbows. He also wore black pants.

“Nice to meet you too. Are you hungry?”

I nodded even though I wasn’t. Just to let him eat too. Thus, he gently guided me to his car and brought me to a restaurant not too far away.

As we ordered, we talked about how the finals would be. He explained to me that the finals will come in 2 months so I had time to practice. After talking, we ate peacefully and exchanged small talks. But what changed is when Jake kept gazing at me.

“Uhh, Mr. Smith, What’s wrong? Is something stuck in my teeth?”

“No there is nothing wrong. You just look marvelously beautiful that you took my breath away.”

“Oh! Thanks for the compliment. I guess.” (Blushes)

“My, looks like someone is flattered.” (Grins)

As soon as we were finished, Mr. Smith insisted to bring me home. Apparently, I conceded because of his dreamy eyes. His eyes were just so beautiful! (Wait, I have a boyfriend! Snap out of it Jane!) But I couldn’t stand it. He was just so charming. Just as I was about to daydream, he caught my attention by calling my name.

“Jane, is there something wrong?”

“Huh? Oh no. Nothing at all. I’m fine.”

That was embarrassing. So I went into his limo and he followed in. We were on the same side of the seat so we sat next to each other. But not too close. After a while, he then offered me red wine. I thanked him then drank. I drank too fast which made me dizzy after. After a few minutes, I fell into deep slumber.





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