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Is There Still Hope in Me?

Novel By: XXDanieLskiXX
Young adult



Jane is a girl who just enjoyed her first day as a senior until that night, she gets kidnapped by some guy who has seen her in her auditions for a competition. Jane faces great challenges with her kidnapper like being his slave. she tries to not lose hope as she goes along a rough way to survive from this menace.

okay this is my first story EVER to write! i got inspired from perry fowler and XxEmoheartxX to write a story. so any comments and suggestions, please do. it can help me improve. REALLY! thank you! :D View table of contents...


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Submitted:Mar 25, 2009    Reads: 407    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


“Get this freak off of me Daniel! Aghhhh!”

Daniel pushed Jake away from my body and helped me up. I hugged Daniel tight cause of fright. Still, I was confused. How did he live…? The doctor said he was dead… before I drifted into thinking about it, Daniel whispered something to me,

“Don’t worry Jane. We’ll check out of this hotel this instant. Now, pack your things. We’re leaving.”

I put on my clothes when Daniel went on to go to the bathroom to return the iron bar.

But as soon as I was putting on my shorts, someone grabbed me by the waist. I shuddered and looked back. Oh thank Lord it was just Daniel.

“Come on Jane. Let’s go.”

When we were headed for the door, Jake grabbed Daniel’s shoulder and punched him at the face. Blood from his mouth splattered to the floor as he fell down. Jake grabbed my hand, looked and glared at my face. Terror ran down my veins as his eyes were examining mine. And I could see that he’s not happy.

“Hi Jane. I’m really glad to see you…” his cross face had turned cocky. And I know that look wasn’t good.

“Oh, Jane… I missed you…. Now you’re here, I have a sweet surprise for you…”

He pulled me closer and kissed me at the cheek. He got something from his pocket… his gun. I trembled in fear. Then he pointed the gun at Daniel’s head. My eyes widened.

“Say goodbye to your Daniel, Jane.”

The second before he pulled the trigger, I leaped to Daniel. Then the sound of the gunshot echoed. Apparently, I was the one shot…





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