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Is There Still Hope in Me?

Novel By: XXDanieLskiXX
Young adult



Jane is a girl who just enjoyed her first day as a senior until that night, she gets kidnapped by some guy who has seen her in her auditions for a competition. Jane faces great challenges with her kidnapper like being his slave. she tries to not lose hope as she goes along a rough way to survive from this menace.

okay this is my first story EVER to write! i got inspired from perry fowler and XxEmoheartxX to write a story. so any comments and suggestions, please do. it can help me improve. REALLY! thank you! :D View table of contents...


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Submitted:May 5, 2009    Reads: 286    Comments: 4    Likes: 1   


“no! that’s not what I meant Daniel! I just… I just! I just saw Jake by the bushes! Look!”

He and the guests seated looked at where I was pointing at. But no one was there.

“Jane, relax… you’re just tense that’s all. Don’t worry…”

He then hugged me which made me relax. But I couldn’t stop thinking if I was just hallucinating or actually seeing him! Suddenly, Daniel cleared his throat.

“so, you were saying?” he smiled at me with his face all cleared up from his tears.

“I do!” suddenly all the guests started cheering out loud. I heard, applause, whistling, people jumping, people in tears of joy and more I can’t think of! Then the priest finally said what I was waiting for!

“By the power vested in me, I pronounce you husband and wife. You may now…” I could see that he was making the moment intense as a joke so I suddenly shrieked,

“OH just say it!” then the priest said,

“You may now kiss the bride!” then Daniel kissed me powerfully and I kissed him back. Then he swept me off my feet and carried me going to the limo. I then tossed the bouquet and I noticed who caught it. It was Brigitte. But Tina kept fighting over for it which caused them to have a cat fight. But I didn’t mind it after since us girls are like that anyway. (laughs)

We got into the limo and went to the reception…

sorry if it's super short guys! I promise i'll make the next chapter long! Pronto!





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