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5 Girls, 5 Boys and A Killer!

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


5 best friends, and their boyfriends break into their high school in the middle of the night. Soon they find out that they aren't the only ones there. Will any of them make it out alive? View table of contents...

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Submitted: Nov 3, 2008    Reads: 819    Comments: 19    Likes: 6   


My name is Ava, and I was 18 years old when I died. Many of my friend's also died that night. I feel that I need to share our tragic tail.

I suppose I should start by telling you a little about us. Trixie, Selena, Raelynn, Felicia, and I had been good friends since preschool. We rarely ever faught about anything, and when we did fight we made up the next day. We had each had the same boyfriend since 8th grade, and all of our relationships were seemingly perfect. My boyfriend was Aaron. Although he tended to get a little tempermental sometimes, he was always as sweet as sugar to me. Raelynn and Levi were probably the cutest couple I had ever seen. Since Raelynn was my best friend, and Levi and Aaron were very good friends, we were always double dating. Levi always treated Raelynn like an Emo Goddess. Trixie and Triston were probably the horniest teens I'd ever met. It seemed that their entire relationship was about sex. Selena and Spencer had been together ever since they had been told that ever since they were born they were arranged to be married. At first they were both extremely upset about the whole situation, but then they realized how much they had in common. Now they are inseprible. Felicia and Nathan are the classic 'Opposites Attract' couple. Felicia was emo, submissive, and a generally upbeat person. Nathan was a gangsta, dominant, and a somewhat negative person. Yet, they got along fantastically.

Now that you know more about us, I shall tell our tail. I should warn you that if your squimish you should not continue to read this.

In many schools, towards the end of the school year, the seniors play a prank for people to remember their class by. I had always looked forward to being a part of my own senior class prank. It was finally my time to shine. It was finally my time to put into action the prank I had been thinking of since I was in 7th grade. My friend's and I planned it perfectly. Nathan would pick the lock to get into the school, and the rest of the boys would carry in the supplies. Us girls would do the decorating, and then we would clean up and leave.

We agreed to meet at the school at midnight.

When the time came, Trixie and Triston were running late. We all knew what they were doing. It wasn't that hard to figure out. Luckily, they were only a few minutes late. Nathan pretended to be angry with them.

"Where the fuck were you?" he yelled to Triston.

"Yo, dude, chill!" Triston said immitating Nathan's gangsta status.

"Ya, fuck you! You know you aint supposed to be late! Now shut the fuck up so I can do this!" Nathan ordered as he turned towards the door and started to pick the lock. It wasn't long until we were safely inside.


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Comments:

NOOOOOOOOO
I HOPE SOME GETS OUT
PRETTY PLEASE

Posted: Nov 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Not telling

I am waiting with my hands under my legs, so I don't turn the page. I will sit like this until Tori posts the next page!

Posted: Nov 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha, oh gosh

please tell me
It can be a early christmas present.
PLEASE
OR AT LEAST UPDATE SOON

Posted: Nov 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Ah, but I don't celebrate Christmas. I celebrate Yule.

Hehe, I love lupoles. And I'm sorry but you'll just have to find out when everybody else finds out.

Uhh..dont have the right words to use, uhhh.

Thats a nice story your making, cant wait til it gets DEEPER. But when did you start writing horror, you stole my idea(im kidding) and where do skittles come in xD.

Posted: Nov 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha, no I actually got the idea for this 3 years ago. I just chose to write other novels up until now. And the skittles are part of the prank :)

i havent read it yet but i wanted to say "skittles"??????? lol u r so funny

Posted: Nov 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha... Alright so i suppose i should let everybody know... i have an obsession with skittles, and i just had to encorporate them into atleast one of my stories.

oh, new story.

yesss.

Posted: Nov 4, 2008

What they doing, pranking a FAT BOY! lol, skittles, why not M&Ms xD.

Posted: Nov 4, 2008

Author Comment:

You'll see!

Oh and i looked up Yule, its sort of like Christmas but later in December into early January. Cool, make sure i have a Yule Gift xD

Posted: Nov 4, 2008

Author Comment:

You're kidding right? Yule is sorta like Christmas I suppose but it takes place on December 22

oh, btw:
l0l, i was looking at the tags:
what's with the skittles?

l0l, do you mean skittles the candy?

Posted: Nov 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes skittles the candy...you'll find out :)

*Stepping back Slowly*

Damn Wikipedia, my bad, i tried to remember as much as possible quickly(had to leave) Well i was sort of right, but yet wrong. Lucky we wait another 3days, when you guys get out for winter break, you get your stuff early.

*Now running for my mistake*

Posted: Nov 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Why do you always run from me? I'm not THAT scary am i? Haha, and ya, can't trust wikipedia.

I dont know, its just fun to run, and i thought you'll get mad again and grab me, lol. Who said you was scary? Well track them down and bring them to you for punishment xD

Posted: Nov 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha yes, because i'll be less scary with a whip in my hands.

Ut oh...graphic scene there, iewer discretion is advised xD. Have you been checking my story lately like you said hmmmm? The part based of your ideas isnt in the story yet, buts its coming!

Posted: Nov 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Ya i'm keepin up with it

miranda
(not registered user)

i loooooooooooooooooooooooooooove the story so far. i also looooooooooooooooooooooooove skittles. i once had a skittle fight with my friends. at least i didn't have to pick it up. oh man! i'm blabbering. sorry. anyway, YOU MUST WRITE MORE NOW OR SUFFER THE CONSEQUENCES!(just kidding) oh well. love ya!

Posted: Nov 4, 2008

Author Comment:

I love skittle fights lol

nice story! you should make another story like this!

Posted: Nov 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol maybe some day

I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEP ME UPDATED, PLZ!

Posted: Nov 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do

I love these sorts of stories.

Posted: Nov 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks :)

Hey I’m called Aaron as well and if temperamental was the worst thing “she who must be obeyed” said about me I’d be doing well. I’m off now to read chapter two. I’ll see you there.

Posted: Dec 1, 2008

Author Comment:

That comment made me a little confused

That is so good! keep writing and check out my story!

Posted: Dec 19, 2008

wtf spencer omg omg ommg im haveing a moment here ahhhhh sppencer sry just had to put that the guy i have a crush on is named spencer ^-^ ahh spencer

Posted: Mar 12, 2009



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