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Blue Tears...Purple Bruises

Novel By: XxEmoHeartxX
Young Adult


Tags: abuse, family, rape

A girl named Anna has to deal with her severely abusive father. Follow her and her mother as they try to escape from the hell they call home. View table of contents...

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Submitted: May 20, 2008    Reads: 1354    Comments: 9    Likes: 2   


I sat on my couch looking out the window, waiting for the headlights of my dad's black ford truck to come barreling into the driveway. He had gone to the bar and was probably drunk again. I was waiting for a monster! I was waiting for a dad that hated I was his daughter. A dad that would yell, beat, and throw things and my mom and I. No matter how hard we tried to make him happy, we always did something wrong. One time I even got yelled at for not having school on saturdays.

I saw the headlights pulling in so I quickly closed the curtains. I walked into the kithen where my mom was sitting. "He's home," I whispered.

"You know the rules! Get into your room before he sees you're out here!" my mom said as she stood up quickly and grabbed the key to my bedroom door. The rules were that when I came home from school my mom was supposed to keep me locked in my room. If my dad happened to be at the bar when I came home mom would secretly let me out, but as soon as he pulled into the driveway I had to get into my bedroom before he saw that I was out. I walked into my bedroom and my mom closed the door behind me. I heard her lock it, and walk away. I sat in my room in darkness...in fear.

My dad walked int the house and slammed the door. He started to yell at my mom. I waited for the words I had been waiting for my mom to say to him for years, but she didn't. She loved him too much to leave him. Soon my door unlocked and my dad called me out into the kitchen. 'What did I do now?' I thought to myself as I slowly walked out of my bedroom.

Immediatly I was slapped, and I fell to the floor. I looked up to see my dad standing there. "Why are you such an embarrassment?! You're the laziest girl I've ever seen! You sit in your room all day long when you should be out here being a slave for your mother! Get off your lazy ass and do something!" he yelled as he looked down at me. I knew what was going to happen next, and I wanted to run. I didn't though because my mom and I made a pact long ago that we would stick together no matter what. As I had expected my dad started to take off his belt and I let a tear slip and run down my face as I braced myself for the pain ahead.

"Honey please don't! She'll start working during the day from now on," my mom said in a pleading tone as she stood up from her chair and went to his side. My dad just pushed her to the ground, and glared at her.

My dad whipped his belt across my back multple times, and didn't stop untill I passed out.


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Comments:

For some reason I could get to it from email but I could not get it in from your website. I am waiting to see where we go, but I am waiting to see more of Chris and Becca

Posted: May 20, 2008

eek.

Posted: May 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Good eek? Bad eek?

O.O *sigh* damnit tori... Update plz

Posted: May 23, 2008

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Sowy Kawa

o no.
Lydia_xxxx

Posted: May 25, 2008

YellowTisForWhores
(not registered user)

Wow quick start to the story... pretty good though...not too many errors... sorry if my comment is a little vague I just had to write two really long comments for this girl whose talent was a little... uh well needing of improvement. >.< Anyway yours was pretty good... read mine on my group and let me know what you think... also I'll read more of this story later. ^.^

Posted: Jun 7, 2008

Wow, that was a very intense start to the story. I look foreward to reading more soon

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Awe thanx

HEY HUN THIS WOULD BE A GOOD BOOK. HAVE YOU EVER READ "A BOY CALLED IT"? REALLY GOOD BOOK! YOUR STUFF REMINDS ME OF HIS. THE KIND OF STUFF THAT JUMPS RIGHT INTO A READERS HEAD YA KNOW.

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Ya I love that book

Shed A Tear Ranch(lol ponybox)
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OMG that is so good you need to keep adding to it ok. it is so good. so intense at the beginning and i love those kinda stories. Keep adding to it ill keep reading.XB

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

this is such an awesome story
you rock at writing

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! :D



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